Guzar jayenge! -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

salma786

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«Reply #15 on: April 19, 2009, 01:20:24 PM »

Quote from: Sonu on April 19, 2009, 04:51:21 AM

wow sabne bahut acha likha hai keep up the wonderful work dosto

Shukriya sonu ji!


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salma786

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Re: Guzar jayenge!

«Reply #16 on: April 24, 2009, 08:46:37 AM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on April 19, 2009, 05:10:31 AM

ISII LIYE KISI SHAYER NEY KYAA KHOOB KAHAA HAI YEH ISHQ NAHIN AASAA.......

NICE NAZM ......S786

Shukriya K-A ji!


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Guzar jayenge!

«Reply #17 on: April 24, 2009, 09:26:35 AM »

Ati sundar peshkash hai Salma Ji


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salma786

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Re: Guzar jayenge!

«Reply #18 on: April 27, 2009, 05:21:29 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on April 19, 2009, 09:26:46 AM

Bohot Khoob Salma dear icon_thumleft

Shukriya Talat sis Usual Smile


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dead heart

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Re: Guzar jayenge!

«Reply #19 on: April 27, 2009, 05:29:26 AM »

Quote from: salma786 on April 18, 2009, 12:00:16 PM

Khud ko mitakar bhi hum unhe paa na sake,
Karne chale the sauda zindegi ka maut se,
Kya tha malum hume ishq me hashr ye hota hai,
Shauk tha unka khelna ishq ke jazbaat se!

Yun to sadiyaa lag jati hai manzil ko pane me,
Hum to haar kar bhi manzil ke kareeb the,
Jise manzil samajh rahe the ab talak,
Aaj jana hum kitne badnaseeb the!

Hadso me jab pyar karne wale juda ho jate hai,
Tadap tadap kar jab apni jaan wo gawate hai,
Yahi hota hai kissa ishq ke baazar ka,
Ishq ke kisse yun hi nahi mashoor hojate hai!

Laila,Heer ke kisso ki daud me kabhi,
Hum bhi sab ka dil behlate nazar ayenge,
Waqt kya malham lagayega zakhmo pe hamare,
Waqt se pehle hum hi guzar jayenge!

From the first stanza till the last, the rhythm and flow was maintained... This is certainly one of the best i have ever read and the first and last stanzas were extremely extremely good... Great job Salma di... Keep writing...


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salma786

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Re: Guzar jayenge!

«Reply #20 on: April 28, 2009, 03:36:50 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on April 19, 2009, 11:58:25 AM

Very very Nice Salma.. keep writing like this.........

Thanks dear sophi


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: Guzar jayenge!

«Reply #21 on: April 28, 2009, 02:29:27 PM »

Bahut sunder rachna hai, Salma Ji
Good, keep up.
SARVESH RASTOGI


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salma786

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Re: Guzar jayenge!

«Reply #22 on: April 29, 2009, 10:32:37 AM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 24, 2009, 09:26:35 AM

Ati sundar peshkash hai Salma Ji

Shukriya Rajesh ji!


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