Haadasaa...! / हादसा...!:Shayri-E-Dard

DhavalRami

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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

Ahmedabad se jab Udaipur jaa rahaa thaa to Highway pe aik baRaa hi Bhayaanak haadasaa deKhaa..aik Car aur Truck kaa accident huaa thaa... Car ki haalat bahot boorii thiiN... poorii Car tabaah ho chuki thi... maiN jab uss durGhaTnaa ke paas se guzraa to bas deKhtaa hi rahaa uss maNzar ko... bahot bheeD bhee jamaa ho gayiiN thii.. Shaayad uss Car meiN baiThe huye Parivaar ke sabhee logoN ki maut ho chukii thiiN...wo maNzar pooraa din merii aaNKhoN ke saamne rahaa...wahaaN pahuNchne ke baad bhee uss haadase ke baare meN sochtaa rahaa aur mehsuus kartaa rahaa ki uss Parivaar pe kyaa beetee hoNgii...uss Bhayaanak accident ko deKh kar kuch liKhane kii koShish ki thii fir... aaj aap sab ke saath wo koShiSh baaNT rahaa huuN... ummid kartaa huuN aapka saath mileNgaa..!

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HiGhway pe tez bhaagti hu'ii car merii
jaa raheN the KhuShi se sab log saath meiN
haNstaa-muSkuraataa huaa wo Parivaar meraa
mere uN maasoom bachchoN ki haNSi ko
deKh rahaa thaa pal-pal aur uNki
maasoom si baatoN ko sun kar
haNs paDtaa thaa
mere paas meN baiThi thi merii patni
uskii aaNKhoN meiN wahi chaahat aur
Pyaar naZar aa rahaa thaa mujhe
fir... achaanak se merii naZar
merii car ke aage aayiN hu'ii Truck par paDii
gaBh-raahaT ke maare Theek se Break nah lagii
kyuuNki... car ki speed itni zyaadaah thi kii
maiN apni tez bhaagti hu'i car ko kaabu meN naa kar sakaa
aur.., hamaari car uss Truck se aise Takraa'ii ke
pal bhar meN hi saaraa maNzar badal gayaa
har taraf bas lahu hi lahu aur..
lahu se lathpath mere apne naZar aa raheN the
kuch pal meiN KhuShiyoN ke raNg par
lahu kaa raNg chaD gayaa
mujhe pataa thaa ki maiN ab
bahot der tak ziNdaa nah reh paauNgaa
apni aaKhiri saaNsoN meiN jab maiNe mooD ke deKhaa to
merii fir jeene ki ummid hi TooT ga'ii
mere uN bachchoN ki muSkuraahaT ab
KhaamoSh ho chukii thiiN
aur uNki wo Pyaari si aaNKheN bhee ab
haMeShaa ke liye baNd ho chukii thiiN
merii patni bhee merii tara'H
apni aaNKhiri saaNse gin rahiiN thiiN
bas.. deKhte raheN hum aik doosre ko
apni laachaar-bebas-taDapti hu'ii naZroN se
aur.. koste raheN donoN ees haadase ko
kuch pal meiN hi merii patni ne bhee
meraa saath Chhod diyaa
har baar ki taraH jaate huye .. aaj bhee
uss ne aaNsu bahaate meraa haath thaam liaa
ees baar ussne bahot kas ke haath thaamaa thaa meraa
kyuuNki ..
use pataa tha ki ab wo lauT ke fir na aayeNgii
maiN bas Khud ko hi kosataa rahaa har pal
kyuuNki Ghalti to saari meree hi thiiN
Car tez chalaane ki ye boorii aadat
to merii hi thiiN
Gar.. apni Car itni tez naa chalaataa
to aaj apne biwi-bachchoN ko naa gaNvaayaa hotaa
meraa Parivaar KhuShi se haNste huye
apne Ghar waapis lauT aayaa hotaa

haaN..! Ghar waapis lauT aayaa hotaa..!

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madhuwesh

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Re: Haadasaa...! / हादसा...!

«Reply #1 on: April 14, 2010, 08:11:46 AM »

Bahut bahut shukriya Dhaval ji aisi dard naak ghattna share karne ke liye.main toh khanp utti apke poem padke,mahesoos kar sakti hoon kya beeta hoga uss parivaar par. kahi drivers ko ek lesson bhi milega aapke ye rachna padne ke baad.bahut dhuk hua,yahi dua karti hoon unke aatma ko shanti miley.aap hamesha ek alag andaaz mein likhta hai Dhaval ji.great creation. icon_salut


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Re: Haadasaa...! / हादसा...!

«Reply #2 on: April 14, 2010, 08:51:04 AM »

Dhaval Ji Kya Kahoon!!!!

Aapki yeh Creation,Ne Sach mein Rongte Khade Kar Diye..

Sach Mein Aisa Laga Jaise Ek Haadsa Sa Inn Aankhon Ke saamne Se Guzra..

Bahut Hi Zabardast Creation..


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SURESH SANGWAN

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«Reply #3 on: April 14, 2010, 09:10:02 AM »

dhaval ji great creation.aapne ek dardnaak hi nahin balki ek shiksha dene wali kavita likhi hai.ki hume bhi kabhi jaldi bhagne ki daud nahin karni chahiye.
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Talat

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«Reply #4 on: April 14, 2010, 11:38:19 AM »

Sach Dhaval Ji, royen khade ho gaye ye dard bhari ghazal jo ek sachchai pe likhi hai aapne.....Na jaane kitne log, jaane kitne parivaar haadsaat ka shikaar hote hain, kabhi khud ki aur kabhi dossron ki ghalti ki wajah se.........Kaash ki sab rules pe dhyaan den aur haadsaat se mehfooz rahen, ameen...


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Re: Haadasaa...! / हादसा...!

«Reply #5 on: April 14, 2010, 06:38:54 PM »

Bahut khoobsurti se apne shabdon me aapne us haadse ka varnan kiya hai. Sach me aisa lag raha hai jaise ye nazaara mere aankhon k saamne hi ho. Bahut dard bhara nazara hai.

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Dhaval ji...!!!


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Rajesh Harish

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«Reply #6 on: April 16, 2010, 05:53:11 AM »

Bahut hi dard bhari peshkash hai aap ka Dhaval Ji


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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2010, 02:18:14 PM »

Dhaval Bhaiiiiiiiiiii...... Aapki Yeh Rachna Padh Kar aisa Laga Jaise wo Maarmik Tasveer Bilkul Mere saamne Hai.. Har ek Line Ne Dharkano Ko Tez kar diya.. Is Haadse Ko Apne Lafzon Me Bahut Dard Ke sath Pesh Kiya hai aapne.. Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash..!!!

Jab aapne Is Rachna Ke Bare Me Mujhe Sms Kiya tha.. tab hi se Main Online aane ki koshishi Me tha.. bassss aaj Hi Waqt Mil Paya.. Beinthaan Lajawab Peshkash..!!

in Taaliyon se Siva Kuch nahi Paas Mere..

**~** Mann **~**


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DhavalRami

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Re: Haadasaa...! / हादसा...!

«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2010, 11:21:44 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 14, 2010, 08:11:46 AM

madhuweSh jee:

namaste!

ees rachanaa ko dil se paRhne ke liye maiN aapka be-Had ShuKraGuzaar huuN saath dete raheN aage bhee!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapkaa

~ Dhaval


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DhavalRami

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Re: Haadasaa...! / हादसा...!

«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2010, 11:22:47 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on April 14, 2010, 08:51:04 AM

Dhaval Ji Kya Kahoon!!!!

Aapki yeh Creation,Ne Sach mein Rongte Khade Kar Diye..

Sach Mein Aisa Laga Jaise Ek Haadsa Sa Inn Aankhon Ke saamne Se Guzra..

Bahut Hi Zabardast Creation..

bahot bahot SHuKriyaaH KhwaahiSh jee!

saath banaaye raKheN

Khudaa haafiz

aapka

~ Dhaval


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DhavalRami

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Re: Haadasaa...! / हादसा...!

«Reply #10 on: May 14, 2010, 11:24:02 AM »

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 14, 2010, 09:10:02 AM

dhaval ji great creation.aapne ek dardnaak hi nahin balki ek shiksha dene wali kavita likhi hai.ki hume bhi kabhi jaldi bhagne ki daud nahin karni chahiye.
Applause

Suresh jee:

namaskaar!

SHuKriyaaH aapne apna aQeemtee waQt merii rachanaa ko diyaa

paRhte raheN aage bhee!

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval


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DhavalRami

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Re: Haadasaa...! / हादसा...!

«Reply #11 on: May 14, 2010, 11:25:18 AM »

Quote from: Shihab on April 14, 2010, 10:48:13 AM

Bhai Dhaval Aadab...
Umeed Karta Hun Aap Khairiyat Se Honge...!
Bahut Hi Asardaar Peshkash...Dilko Chhu Gayi...
Bahut Hi Kam Log Hote Hain Bhai Jo Dusron Ke
Dard Ko Is Qadar Mehsoos Karke Kaagaz Pe Utar Sakte Hain
Bahut Khub Bhai....
Aajse Hum Bhi Car Ya Bike Aahista Hi Chalayenge....
Shukariya Hume Aagah Karne Ke Liye...

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Shihab bhaa'ii:

Aadaab!

maiN ek dam Theek huuN.. aap sunaa'iiye aap kaise haiN bhaa'ii!

KhuShii huii aapko yahaaN deKh kar.. paRhte raheN aage bhee ees Khaaksaar ko

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval


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