Haal Apna...

by Roja on July 12, 2009, 10:57:03 AM
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Muskura sakta nahi, aansoo baha sakta nahi
Haal apna mai kisi ko bhi bata sakta nahi

Dhur itna ho gaya hu apne-aap se
Ab apni aap hi kuch khaber paa sakta nahi

Ghav ber sakta nahi jo ghav dil per hai hua
Dard jo dil mein uta voh dard jaa sakta nahi

Pochne wala ho aansoo tab hai rone ka maza
Bin kisi hum-dard rona kaam aa sakta nahi

Zindagi ab us raah se jaa rahi hai "Roja",
Jahan gam ke siva kuch aur paa sakta nahi

 tearyeyed
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«Reply #1 on: July 12, 2009, 11:08:00 AM »
Roja Sissssssss...... bahut Hi Dard Bhare Alfaaz Likhe Hai Dear.. aakhri Ki 4 Line to Dil Tak Utar Gain.. Dard Ko Lafzon Me Behad Khubsoorati se Piroya hai Tumne... Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoooob Likha hai.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Gam Aansuon Me Tere, Lahoo Leke Utra Hai,
Wo Lahoo Is Gazal Me, Dard Ban Ke Utra Hai...!!



**~** Mann **~**
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marhoom bahayaat
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«Reply #2 on: July 12, 2009, 12:30:25 PM »
BIN KISI HUM DARD KE...BAHUT KHOOB ROJA JI Applause Applause
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cara
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«Reply #3 on: July 12, 2009, 12:56:10 PM »
kya baat hai  roja ji.....

sukh ka saathi sab koi,
gum mein hota na koi,
gum ki raha pe jo chal sakhe,
zindagi samjhe wohi.
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mistufer
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«Reply #4 on: July 12, 2009, 02:03:09 PM »
Quote from: Roja on July 12, 2009, 10:57:03 AM
Muskura sakta nahi, aansoo baha sakta nahi
Haal apna mai kisi ko bhi bata sakta nahi

Dhur itna ho gaya hu apne-aap se
Ab apni aap hi kuch khaber paa sakta nahi

Ghav ber sakta nahi jo ghav dil per hai hua
Dard jo dil mein uta voh dard jaa sakta nahi

Pochne wala ho aansoo tab hai rone ka maza
Bin kisi hum-dard rona kaam aa sakta nahi

Zindagi ab us raah se jaa rahi hai "Roja",
Jahan gam ke siva kuch aur paa sakta nahi

 tearyeyed


roja sis
bahut se ehsaason ko piroya hai
very well written
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #5 on: July 12, 2009, 05:49:19 PM »
Quote from: Roja on July 12, 2009, 10:57:03 AM

Pochne wala ho aansoo tab hai rone ka maza
Bin kisi hum-dard rona kaam aa sakta nahi


Waah! kya kehne.....Bohot khoob Roja achha kalaam hai.
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #6 on: July 12, 2009, 09:09:21 PM »
Wah Roja ji,wonderful creation,excellent, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:beautiful lines by Mann ji and Cara ji.
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Deepati
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«Reply #7 on: July 13, 2009, 01:21:52 AM »
Quote from: Roja on July 12, 2009, 10:57:03 AM
Muskura sakta nahi, aansoo baha sakta nahi
Haal apna mai kisi ko bhi bata sakta nahi

Dhur itna ho gaya hu apne-aap se
Ab apni aap hi kuch khaber paa sakta nahi

Ghav ber sakta nahi jo ghav dil per hai hua
Dard jo dil mein uta voh dard jaa sakta nahi

Pochne wala ho aansoo tab hai rone ka maza
Bin kisi hum-dard rona kaam aa sakta nahi

Zindagi ab us raah se jaa rahi hai "Roja",
Jahan gam ke siva kuch aur paa sakta nahi

 tearyeyed


Wah Wah Roja Ji!  Beautifully written!  Bahut Bahut khoob! Applause Applause
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Deepati
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«Reply #8 on: July 13, 2009, 01:23:29 AM »
Quote from: Mann on July 12, 2009, 11:08:00 AM
Roja Sissssssss...... bahut Hi Dard Bhare Alfaaz Likhe Hai Dear.. aakhri Ki 4 Line to Dil Tak Utar Gain.. Dard Ko Lafzon Me Behad Khubsoorati se Piroya hai Tumne... Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoooob Likha hai.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Gam Aansuon Me Tere, Lahoo Leke Utra Hai,
Wo Lahoo Is Gazal Me, Dard Ban Ke Utra Hai...!!



**~** Mann **~**

Very nice lines, Mann Ji! Applause
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Deepati
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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2009, 01:24:44 AM »
Quote from: cara on July 12, 2009, 12:56:10 PM
kya baat hai  roja ji.....

sukh ka saathi sab koi,
gum mein hota na koi,
gum ki raha pe jo chal sakhe,
zindagi samjhe wohi.

Bahut khoob, Cara Ji! Applause
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #10 on: July 13, 2009, 07:25:41 AM »
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Madhu Ji & Deepati Ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile



**~** Mann **~**
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #11 on: July 15, 2009, 03:22:49 PM »
Wah wah Roja Ji
Kammmaal likha hai, wah
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