haal puche wala na mila (nam)

by poonamA on October 05, 2012, 04:48:30 AM
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haal mera puchne wala na mila
dil mera rakhne wala na mila

jaise kinare sath sath chalte hai
aisa koyee sath chalne wala na mila

chahto ke mahal adyam (family) par
sath mere rahne wala na mila

kis se kare hum nazo-nakhre
naaz mere uthane wala  na mila

jise duwao me manga tha humne
vo pyar karne wala na mila

dard ke gahre sagar me se
koyee bahar karne wala na mila
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«Reply #1 on: October 05, 2012, 04:54:18 AM »
waaah bohut khubsurat khayaalaat hain
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«Reply #2 on: October 05, 2012, 06:07:34 AM »
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Quote from: saahill on October 05, 2012, 04:54:18 AM
waaah bohut khubsurat khayaalaat hain
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«Reply #3 on: October 05, 2012, 07:40:05 AM »
Very nice poonam ji....
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«Reply #4 on: October 05, 2012, 08:20:59 AM »
BAHUT KHUB POONAM JIIII Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: October 05, 2012, 07:02:09 PM »
Quote from: poonamA on October 05, 2012, 04:48:30 AM
haal mera puchne wala na mila
dil mera rakhne wala na mila

jaise kinare sath sath chalte hai
aisa koyee sath chalne wala na mila

chahto ke mahal adyam (family) par
sath mere rahne wala na mila

kis se kare hum nazo-nakhre
naaz mere uthane wala  na mila

jise duwao me manga tha humne
vo pyar karne wala na mila

dard ke gahre sagar me se
koyee bahar karne wala na mila
nice
apni barbadi ka mei.n kisse karu gila
apne hi karmo ka hame mila hai sila
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«Reply #6 on: October 05, 2012, 07:23:47 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut sundar, aur bahut touching peshkash... bahut khoobsurti se aapne present kiya hai... bahut achcha likha hai aapne poonam ji.... !!!


meri duwaayein hai, tumhe chaahne waalaa jald mile
palkon pe sajaaye tumhe, aisa shaqs tumhe jald mile

na karo ghum ki umra beet gayi tumhaari tanhaayi mein
abhi din bahut hain aage, tumhaaraa humsafar jald mile

jaise kaali raat ke baad, roshan ho jaataa hai jahaan
tumhaare jeewan me ujaalaa kar de, aisa shaqs jald mile

maanaa ghum ka toofaan chal raha hai, sabra karo
mausam bhi kabhi suhaanaa hogaa, aisa mausam jald mile

seene se lagaake rakhega tumhe wo, aisa shaqs jald mile
pyaar se duniyaa sajaade tumhaari, aisa shaqs jald mile

meri duwaayein hai, tumhaaraa wo hamsafar jald mile
chaahe tumhe jo sabse badh ke, aisa shaqs jald mile...

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«Reply #7 on: October 06, 2012, 03:44:45 AM »
riteshiji, soudagarji shukriya
Quote from: Ritesh Modi on October 05, 2012, 07:40:05 AM
Very nice poonam ji....
Quote from: soudagar on October 05, 2012, 08:20:59 AM
BAHUT KHUB POONAM JIIII Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: October 06, 2012, 03:45:20 AM »
ji dhanyawad
Quote from: MANOJ6568 on October 05, 2012, 07:02:09 PM
nice
apni barbadi ka mei.n kisse karu gila
apne hi karmo ka hame mila hai sila
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«Reply #9 on: October 06, 2012, 03:46:18 AM »
shukriya hridayji aur bahot sunder reply ke liye bhi shukriya
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 05, 2012, 07:23:47 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut sundar, aur bahut touching peshkash... bahut khoobsurti se aapne present kiya hai... bahut achcha likha hai aapne poonam ji.... !!!


meri duwaayein hai, tumhe chaahne waalaa jald mile
palkon pe sajaaye tumhe, aisa shaqs tumhe jald mile

na karo ghum ki umra beet gayi tumhaari tanhaayi mein
abhi din bahut hain aage, tumhaaraa humsafar jald mile

jaise kaali raat ke baad, roshan ho jaataa hai jahaan
tumhaare jeewan me ujaalaa kar de, aisa shaqs jald mile

maanaa ghum ka toofaan chal raha hai, sabra karo
mausam bhi kabhi suhaanaa hogaa, aisa mausam jald mile

seene se lagaake rakhega tumhe wo, aisa shaqs jald mile
pyaar se duniyaa sajaade tumhaari, aisa shaqs jald mile

meri duwaayein hai, tumhaaraa wo hamsafar jald mile
chaahe tumhe jo sabse badh ke, aisa shaqs jald mile...

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«Reply #10 on: October 06, 2012, 05:13:13 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
kya baat hai
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