haal puche wala na mila (nam):Shayri-E-Dard

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haal mera puchne wala na mila
dil mera rakhne wala na mila

jaise kinare sath sath chalte hai
aisa koyee sath chalne wala na mila

chahto ke mahal adyam (family) par
sath mere rahne wala na mila

kis se kare hum nazo-nakhre
naaz mere uthane wala na mila

jise duwao me manga tha humne
vo pyar karne wala na mila

dard ke gahre sagar me se
koyee bahar karne wala na mila


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Re: haal puche wala na mila (nam)

«Reply #1 on: October 05, 2012, 04:54:18 AM »

waaah bohut khubsurat khayaalaat hain


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Re: haal puche wala na mila (nam)

«Reply #2 on: October 05, 2012, 06:07:34 AM »

shukriya

Quote from: saahill on October 05, 2012, 04:54:18 AM

waaah bohut khubsurat khayaalaat hain


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Re: haal puche wala na mila (nam)

«Reply #3 on: October 05, 2012, 07:40:05 AM »

Very nice poonam ji....


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Re: haal puche wala na mila (nam)

«Reply #4 on: October 05, 2012, 08:20:59 AM »

BAHUT KHUB POONAM JIIII Clapping Smiley


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Re: haal puche wala na mila (nam)

«Reply #5 on: October 05, 2012, 07:02:09 PM »

Quote from: poonamA on October 05, 2012, 04:48:30 AM

nice
apni barbadi ka mei.n kisse karu gila
apne hi karmo ka hame mila hai sila


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Re: haal puche wala na mila (nam)

«Reply #6 on: October 05, 2012, 07:23:47 PM »

bahut sundar, aur bahut touching peshkash... bahut khoobsurti se aapne present kiya hai... bahut achcha likha hai aapne poonam ji.... !!!

meri duwaayein hai, tumhe chaahne waalaa jald mile
palkon pe sajaaye tumhe, aisa shaqs tumhe jald mile

na karo ghum ki umra beet gayi tumhaari tanhaayi mein
abhi din bahut hain aage, tumhaaraa humsafar jald mile

jaise kaali raat ke baad, roshan ho jaataa hai jahaan
tumhaare jeewan me ujaalaa kar de, aisa shaqs jald mile

maanaa ghum ka toofaan chal raha hai, sabra karo
mausam bhi kabhi suhaanaa hogaa, aisa mausam jald mile

seene se lagaake rakhega tumhe wo, aisa shaqs jald mile
pyaar se duniyaa sajaade tumhaari, aisa shaqs jald mile

meri duwaayein hai, tumhaaraa wo hamsafar jald mile
chaahe tumhe jo sabse badh ke, aisa shaqs jald mile...

*****HRIDAY*****


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Re: haal puche wala na mila (nam)

«Reply #7 on: October 06, 2012, 03:44:45 AM »

riteshiji, soudagarji shukriya

Quote from: Ritesh Modi on October 05, 2012, 07:40:05 AM

Very nice poonam ji....

Quote from: soudagar on October 05, 2012, 08:20:59 AM

BAHUT KHUB POONAM JIIII Clapping Smiley


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poonamA

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Re: haal puche wala na mila (nam)

«Reply #8 on: October 06, 2012, 03:45:20 AM »

ji dhanyawad

Quote from: MANOJ6568 on October 05, 2012, 07:02:09 PM

nice
apni barbadi ka mei.n kisse karu gila
apne hi karmo ka hame mila hai sila


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poonamA

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Re: haal puche wala na mila (nam)

«Reply #9 on: October 06, 2012, 03:46:18 AM »

shukriya hridayji aur bahot sunder reply ke liye bhi shukriya

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 05, 2012, 07:23:47 PM

bahut sundar, aur bahut touching peshkash... bahut khoobsurti se aapne present kiya hai... bahut achcha likha hai aapne poonam ji.... !!!

*****HRIDAY*****


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aqsh

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Re: haal puche wala na mila (nam)

«Reply #10 on: October 06, 2012, 05:13:13 AM »

kya baat hai


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