haalat

by baba_08 on February 29, 2008, 09:19:22 AM
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mud ke dekh lo ek baar
jaane se pahale...
ankhon me kitane aansu bhar aaye hai.
hum tere sath bus chal pade the
dekho......
tere kadam mujhe kaha laye hai?

kyun juda kar li tumne
rahe meri raho se?
hum teri manjil ke liye
itni dur nikal aaye hai...

is bewafai ke ilzaam ko kya
main inaam-e -wafa samjhu
kya is pal ke liye hum
tujhase mohabbat karte aaye hai.

hai shikwa to saja de mujhe
main ek labz na kahunga aaj bhi,
hum to waise bhi tere sare
sitam sahate aaye hai.

dil me sau dard pahale bhi the
aaj tera ek dard aur sahi,
hum rah-e -jinadage me
bus dard sahate aaye hai.: sad5
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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: February 29, 2008, 02:14:08 PM »
Very good lines. very touchy and full of emotions. Keep up baba
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«Reply #2 on: February 29, 2008, 02:20:06 PM »
Beautiful Work!!!

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«Reply #3 on: February 29, 2008, 02:38:46 PM »
bahut khoob baba..jazbaato se bharpoor poetry likhi hai aapne..
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«Reply #4 on: February 29, 2008, 03:05:51 PM »
Bohot khoob Baba...!!
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