Haasil ho kar.... manjum

by manjum on May 10, 2011, 05:04:28 AM
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Mujhi main rahta hai wo mera hi dil hokar.
Mujhe dubata raha hai wo saahil hokar.

Mere aage uska lahza sharifana ho gaya,
Zindgi bakhsh gaya wo mujhe qatil hokar.

Har ek aah ke sang wo hi yaad aata hai,
wahi bahta hai mere ashkon main shamil hokar.

Bade salike se usse mila kiye har dam,
Uski nazaron se ham gir gaye jahil hokar.

Meri taqdir bhi ye kya dikha rahi hai mujhe,
Mera wo ho na saka hai mujhe haasil hokar.

manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2011, 05:36:41 AM »
boht khoob aiSa laga meri kahani likh di apne
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2011, 06:00:28 AM »
hmm……
good one manju ji……

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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2011, 07:44:07 AM »
very very nice manjumji

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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2011, 07:53:54 AM »
3rd and last one are damn good manju ji...
bht bht khoob...
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2011, 08:20:16 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Anju ji..

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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2011, 09:48:05 AM »
bahut bahut shikriya saahilji.... ab aapki ho ya hamari.. har kisi ki kahani esi hi hai..

sath rahie..
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«Reply #7 on: May 10, 2011, 09:54:26 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya kbji.....

sath rahie.......
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«Reply #8 on: May 10, 2011, 09:56:11 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya tamnnaji...

sath rahie....
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«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2011, 09:58:26 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya priyaji...

pasand karne ke lie thanks..

yun hi sath rahiega....
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«Reply #10 on: May 10, 2011, 09:59:03 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya priyaji...

pasand karne ke lie thanks..

yun hi sath rahiega....
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«Reply #11 on: May 10, 2011, 01:02:51 PM »
bahut hi khoob manjum ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: May 10, 2011, 04:02:33 PM »
Manju jee! bahut khoob ! bahut hee khoob!!dil loot le gayee aap kee ye takhleek.......khaas tour par last one....dilii daad qubool farmaayeN.
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«Reply #13 on: May 10, 2011, 04:06:01 PM »
bahut khoobsurat likha hai mamta ji as usual aapki likhi ghazalein mujhe bahut hi pasand hain.
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«Reply #14 on: May 10, 2011, 04:08:28 PM »
Jee Suresh jee ye gazal to Manju jee ne likhee hai or aap bhoolvash meraa naam likh gaye.......
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