Haasil ho kar.... manjum

by manjum on May 10, 2011, 05:04:28 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 10, 2011, 04:12:19 PM »
sorry mamta ji ye kya hua aapke baare mein soch rahi thi aur padh manju ji ko rahi thi.
par aap bahut achha likhti hain.
Quote from: mamta bajpai on May 10, 2011, 04:08:28 PM
Jee Suresh jee ye gazal to Manju jee ne likhee hai or aap bhoolvash meraa naam likh gaye.......
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«Reply #16 on: May 10, 2011, 05:24:40 PM »
bahut mast hai
kaun kahata hai nahi tum dusmani ke kabil ho
meri barbadi mei to mere dost tum bhi shamil ho
Quote from: manjum on May 10, 2011, 05:04:28 AM
Mujhi main rahta hai wo mera hi dil hokar.
Mujhe dubata raha hai wo saahil hokar.

Mere aage uska lahza sharifana ho gaya,
Zindgi bakhsh gaya wo mujhe qatil hokar.

Har ek aah ke sang wo hi yaad aata hai,
wahi bahta hai mere ashkon main shamil hokar.

Bade salike se usse mila kiye har dam,
Uski nazaron se ham gir gaye jahil hokar.

Meri taqdir bhi ye kya dikha rahi hai mujhe,
Mera wo ho na saka hai mujhe haasil hokar.

manju "mann"
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«Reply #17 on: May 10, 2011, 08:55:13 PM »
Manju jee,
Kya baat hai..Dil khush hogaya yeh parr kar..
Kahin kahin meri kahani dikhi mujhe..
Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #18 on: May 11, 2011, 03:16:26 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya khamoshji.....

sath rahie........
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«Reply #19 on: May 11, 2011, 03:18:09 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya mamtaji.....

aapki daad ne hamara dil loot lia.....

sath rahie........
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«Reply #20 on: May 11, 2011, 03:21:25 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya sureshji....

is ghazal ko pasand karne ke lie.... aur ye to khushi ki baat hai hamare lie ki hamari likhi ghazal aapko mamtaji ki likhi lagi.. ham mamtaji jaisa asardar likh pae ye to  aapne aap main bahut badi baat hai...
iske lie aapka ek bar aur shukirya.....

sath rahie...
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«Reply #21 on: May 11, 2011, 03:24:26 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya manojji.....

sath rahie........
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«Reply #22 on: May 11, 2011, 03:26:00 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya rahimji..... duaye dete rahie...

sath rahie........
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«Reply #23 on: May 11, 2011, 04:39:21 AM »

afsos nahi usne mere sher ko galib ka kah diya
ye to shukar hai usne accha hai to kah diya
Quote from: manjum on May 11, 2011, 03:21:25 AM
bahut bahut shukriya sureshji....

is ghazal ko pasand karne ke lie.... aur ye to khushi ki baat hai hamare lie ki hamari likhi ghazal aapko mamtaji ki likhi lagi.. ham mamtaji jaisa asardar likh pae ye to  aapne aap main bahut badi baat hai...
iske lie aapka ek bar aur shukirya.....

sath rahie...
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«Reply #24 on: May 11, 2011, 04:41:41 AM »
wah acha kaha aapne...
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«Reply #25 on: May 11, 2011, 04:43:01 AM »
hausala afsai ka sukariya
Quote from: manjum on May 11, 2011, 04:41:41 AM
wah acha kaha aapne...
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«Reply #26 on: May 12, 2011, 09:23:28 PM »
Wow superb,bahut khoobsurat ghazal pesh kiya aapne Manjum ji. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #27 on: May 16, 2011, 06:04:55 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya shihabji....

sath rahie....
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«Reply #28 on: May 16, 2011, 06:06:31 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya madhuweshji...

yun hi sath rahie...
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«Reply #29 on: May 16, 2011, 07:31:03 AM »
Quote from: manjum on May 10, 2011, 05:04:28 AM
Mujhi main rahta hai wo mera hi dil hokar.
Mujhe dubata raha hai wo saahil hokar.

Mere aage uska lahza sharifana ho gaya,
Zindgi bakhsh gaya wo mujhe qatil hokar.

Har ek aah ke sang wo hi yaad aata hai,
wahi bahta hai mere ashkon main shamil hokar.

Bade salike se usse mila kiye har dam,
Uski nazaron se ham gir gaye jahil hokar.

Meri taqdir bhi ye kya dikha rahi hai mujhe,
Mera wo ho na saka hai mujhe haasil hokar.

manju "mann"

good one
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