HAATHON KEE LAKEERON KO SANWARA NAHEE JATAA.....................MAMTA BAJPAI

by mamta bajpai on August 17, 2010, 08:02:54 AM
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HAATHON KEE LAKEERON KE SANWAARAA NAHEE JAATAA
CHEHRE KE MUQADDAR KO NIHARAA NAHEE JAATAA

HAALAAT KEE GARDISH NE HUMKO YUN MITAAYAA HAI
PAR AISE TO HAALAAT SE HAARAA NAHEE JAATAA

AB DIL KE SIWA TUJHKO KYA PESH KAROON HUMDAM
SAB LUT GAYAA IK TERAA SAHAARAA NAHEE JAATAA

GHUT GHUT KE SANAM KABSE HUM JEE HEE RAHE THE
AB DIL KEE UMANGON KO MAARAA NAHEE JAATAA

MAI HAAR GAYEE TUJHKO DE DE KE SADAAYEN
AISE BHEE NAZAR SE TO PUKAARAA NAHEE JAATAA

MAMTA BAJPAI
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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2010, 08:23:19 AM »
mamta ji its mindblowing shayri........

sach kahu yaha apke muqable me lyrics me aur rythm me aur koi nahi likh sakta....apki har post me lyrics itni setteled hoti he ki khud b khud yaad ho jati he......

all post of urs r best
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«Reply #2 on: August 17, 2010, 08:24:59 AM »
waah Mamta ji waah... kya kehne aapke... bahut khoobsurti se aapne is kavita ko likha hai... bahut pyaara likha hai aapne... kuch likhe bina raha nahi gaya aaj humse aapki is kavita ke jawaab me... bura laga ho to maafi chahunga...!!!


tumhaare dil ke siwa aur kuch maangta nahi hoon main,
tumhaare naam ke siwa aur kuch jaanta nahi hoon main,

kabhi maathe ki rekha to kabhi haathon ki lakeeron ko,
dekhta hoon aur bas yahi mann hi mann sochta hoon main,

paaya hai tumko maine bin maange kisi duwa ki tarha,
ab to bas tumhaara umra bhar ka saath chaahta hoon main,

roko na khud ko, bandho na tum samaaj ke bandhano me,
aajao ki ab to bas tumhaara intezaar karta hoon main,

maanga nahi tha parwardigaar se kabhi kuch apne liye,
par ab apni har duwa me tumhaara saath maangta hoon main...
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«Reply #3 on: August 17, 2010, 08:35:18 AM »
Bahut bahut Khoob mamta Ji..

Kya Kehne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: August 17, 2010, 01:00:18 PM »


   Nice Creation Mamta ji. Sare sher bahut pyare likhe hai. icon_thumleft
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2010, 01:03:28 PM »
bht pyari gazal mamta ji....
dil ko chhedte alfaaz...kuch yaad dilate..kuch aankh num karte se....
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2010, 01:13:07 PM »
MATRIX JEE TAREEF KE HINDOLE ME JO JHOOLA AAP NE MUJHE JHULAYA HAI WOH SAATAWEN AASMAAN PE NA LE JAAYE MUJHE. MERE KALAAM KEE PASANDEEDAGEE KE LIYE BEHAD SHUKRIYA...
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2010, 01:20:57 PM »
KAPIL JEE BEHAD SHUKRIYA KAVITA KO PASAND KARNE KE LIYE.WAISE SACH KAHOON TO AAP BHI LAJAWAAB HAIN.BEHAD SADA OR SAAF LFZON ME AAP NE AHSAAS-E-DIL BAKHOOBI BAYAAN KIYA.HAMAARE DIL KE NAGAR ME BURAA MAANANE JAISI KOI BAAT NAHEE RAHATI.HAAN SABKA SAMMAN KARNE WALE AHSAAS ZAROOR BASTE HAIN.EK BAAR PHIR SE AAP KA BEHAD SHUKRIYA........
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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2010, 01:23:07 PM »
KHWAISH JEE NAZAR-E-INAAYAT KE LIYE DHERON SHUKRIYA......
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2010, 01:25:15 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Mamta ji...!!!

Quote from: mamta bajpai on August 17, 2010, 01:20:57 PM
KAPIL JEE BEHAD SHUKRIYA KAVITA KO PASAND KARNE KE LIYE.WAISE SACH KAHOON TO AAP BHI LAJAWAAB HAIN.BEHAD SADA OR SAAF LFZON ME AAP NE AHSAAS-E-DIL BAKHOOBI BAYAAN KIYA.HAMAARE DIL KE NAGAR ME BURAA MAANANE JAISI KOI BAAT NAHEE RAHATI.HAAN SABKA SAMMAN KARNE WALE AHSAAS ZAROOR BASTE HAIN.EK BAAR PHIR SE AAP KA BEHAD SHUKRIYA........
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2010, 01:25:57 PM »
TAMANNA JEE YUN HEE HOUSALA AFZAI KAR KE SAATH NIBHAATE RAHIYE....
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«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2010, 01:29:14 PM »
KASAK JEE BAHUT BAHUT DHANYAWAAD. GAZAL KE PASANDEEDAGEE KE LIYE BEHAD SHUKRIYA...
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«Reply #12 on: August 17, 2010, 04:28:29 PM »
Mamta-di bahut sunder rachna......kamaal-dhamaal...kar diya......mast... Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

Haathon ki lakeeron ko sakhee kabhi mitaya nahi jaata
ye tou taqdeer ki likhawat hai iske bina jeeya nahi jaata





Quote from: mamta bajpai on August 17, 2010, 08:02:54 AM
HAATHON KEE LAKEERON KE SANWAARAA NAHEE JAATAA
CHEHRE KE MUQADDAR KO NIHARAA NAHEE JAATAA

HAALAAT KEE GARDISH NE HUMKO YUN MITAAYAA HAI
PAR AISE TO HAALAAT SE HAARAA NAHEE JAATAA

AB DIL KE SIWA TUJHKO KYA PESH KAROON HUMDAM
SAB LUT GAYAA IK TERAA SAHAARAA NAHEE JAATAA

GHUT GHUT KE SANAM KABSE HUM JEE HEE RAHE THE
AB DIL KEE UMANGON KO MAARAA NAHEE JAATAA

MAI HAAR GAYEE TUJHKO DE DE KE SADAAYEN
AISE BHEE NAZAR SE TO PUKAARAA NAHEE JAATAA

MAMTA BAJPAI
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«Reply #13 on: August 17, 2010, 04:33:21 PM »
Mamta Jee AadaaB!

Aapke tehreer ke khayaal aur ahsaas behad achche rahe .....
Daad hazir hai .......

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Koshish meiN zor laiye umdaa likhate hai aap....

Likhate rahiye.......
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez.......
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«Reply #14 on: August 18, 2010, 01:57:04 PM »
shukriya Koyal!
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