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Aaj jo kalaam aap sab ke lie pesh hai wo mere dil ke bahut karib raha hai.. ummid hai aap sab ke dil tak pahunch payega...
Hai bahut kathi si ye zindgi
Ab aur jiyun ye dua na de.
Is safar se lautna hai kathi
Mujhe dur se tu sada na de.
Tujhe kaise ye na khabar hui
Badi dur tak thi hawa gai
Wo kahani chrcha-o-aam kya
Jise jhonka jhonka suna na de.
Wo khushi jo apni hui nahin
Wo hansi jo honthon se dur hai
Mujhe darr hai fir koi khel main
Use mere ghar ka pata na de.
Ye jo dil main hain mere gham base
Bade khushnuma hain ye haadse
Yahi dard sahne ka hai maza
Mujhe dard ki tu dawa na de.
Mujhe sab haqiqten hain khabar
Badi dur tak hai meri nazar
Mujhe ranj kya is baat ka
Mujhe aaiina wo dikha na de.
Wo raste jo bichhad gaye
Wo jo manzilen kahin kho gai
Mujhe chhod kar jo chale gaye
Un musafiron ka pata na de.
Hai badi kathin si ye zindgi
Ab aur jiyun ye dua na de.
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«Reply #1 on: February 08, 2012, 05:40:03 AM » |
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bahut achi likhi hai. great.
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«Reply #2 on: February 08, 2012, 05:42:09 AM » |
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«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2012, 05:44:03 AM » |
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Bahut hee gharaaiyaa liy hue hai ye nazm aapkee mann ji dheron daad
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2012, 05:47:01 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya janab sainiji.. duaen dete rahiye
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«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2012, 07:25:29 AM » |
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shukriya janab shihabji... bas yun hi duaye dete rahiye
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«Reply #7 on: February 08, 2012, 09:26:46 AM » |
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bahutbahut shukriya parwaazji...
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«Reply #11 on: February 08, 2012, 11:49:13 AM » |
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dhanyawad siddiquiji yun hi sath raiye..
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«Reply #12 on: February 08, 2012, 12:01:08 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji... duaen dete rahiye...
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«Reply #13 on: February 08, 2012, 12:03:45 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya asadji.. ji janab jaisa ki maine kaha hai ki ise bahut dil se likha tha... aur mahinon tak gungunaya bhi tha....
ummid hai aapka sath yun hi milta rahega..
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«Reply #14 on: February 08, 2012, 06:10:58 PM » |
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mann ji bilkul dil ko chhu ke gyi aur ek aaghaaz kar gyi.... bahut khoob lajwaab...... ...... ...bhadhaai kabool karein...dua hai aise hi likhte rahein aap....  |
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