Halki si Nami... Intezar !

by Intezar on July 27, 2011, 07:06:46 PM
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utar jaane de kuch khumaar teri yaadon ka,
phir to dard ki aagosh mein pighal jaana hai,
jo huaa hai darmayaan faasla badh jaane de,
phir to door hume teri raaho se nikal jaana hai,

aansuon ko khushk hone se pehle ine hata dena,
sookh jaaye to nishaan banke bikhar jaayenge,
dil se tum yaadon ke gharonde bhi mitaa dena
tanhaayi me warna ye dard banke utar jaayenge,

ab nahin raftaar dhadkano me, saanse bhi thami hai
uthi hai hulchal fizaaon me lekin bas teri kami hai,
koi katra nahin baaki palko ke darmayaan Intezar,
phir bhi khushk aankhon mein baaki halki si nami hai...!

Shukriya
Intezar !
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«Reply #1 on: July 27, 2011, 10:48:14 PM »
  :hatsoff:very touching creation Intezar ji.superb. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2011, 04:03:35 AM »
Intezar mere dost,
Dil khush hua aj apki post dekh kar..
aur kya kahoun, jazbaati kalam hai..
Dil choo liya apne..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Dil se daad..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2011, 06:16:56 AM »
intezar ji .... icon_flower
iss post k liye kya kahun...bas laga jaise dil me teer chala ho ...aur shabd aur ehsaas bas utarte chele gaye dil me uss teer k sath... love4 love4
 padhkar jo khayal aaye wo likhe hain ... happy3 happy3

bht dino baad aapke post pe apne andaaz me reply kar rahi hun....umeed hai aapko pasand aayega...... Feared. Feared.

chk it here....
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2011, 05:15:47 PM »
YAARIF KE LIYE ALFAZ NAHI MIL RAHE INTEZAR JI Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: July 29, 2011, 12:03:44 PM »

Intezar Ji,

Very nice post...all the best.

Raqeeb
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«Reply #6 on: July 29, 2011, 12:15:54 PM »
Janab Intezaar Sahaab Aadaab!

Badi gehri kalam kahi hai janab... Usual Smile
Ahsaas O khayaal behad Dilkash O dilfareb rahe..

Sabhi werse behad khoob aur umdaa rahe.. Usual Smile
Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Aate rahiye... Likhate rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile           
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«Reply #7 on: July 29, 2011, 12:17:54 PM »
Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoooob Intezar Ji..

Kya kehne Bhai..Bahut Hi khooobsurat Kalaam..

gehre Aur Anmol jazbaaton Se Bharpoor..

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: July 29, 2011, 07:05:06 PM »
Aap Sabhi ka tahe dil se shukriya dosto... aapne kisi kaabil samjha meri koshish ko...



bahut bahut shukriya madhuwesh ji aapne pasand kiya

Quote from: madhuwesh on July 27, 2011, 10:48:14 PM
  :hatsoff:very touching creation Intezar ji.superb. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause






Rahim bhai dil se shukriya aapne yaad rakha hume...

Quote from: -Rahim- on July 28, 2011, 04:03:35 AM
Intezar mere dost,
Dil khush hua aj apki post dekh kar..
aur kya kahoun, jazbaati kalam hai..
Dil choo liya apne..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Dil se daad..
Khush rahiye..!







kasak ji bahut din baad aapka jawaab mila hamaari post par dekh kar bahut khushi huyi aur aapne jo apne andaaz me jawaab diya hai bahut khoob bahut khubsurat peshkash rahi... shukriya aapka...

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 28, 2011, 06:16:56 AM
intezar ji .... icon_flower
iss post k liye kya kahun...bas laga jaise dil me teer chala ho ...aur shabd aur ehsaas bas utarte chele gaye dil me uss teer k sath... love4 love4
 padhkar jo khayal aaye wo likhe hain ... happy3 happy3

bht dino baad aapke post pe apne andaaz me reply kar rahi hun....umeed hai aapko pasand aayega...... Feared. Feared.

chk it here....
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-dard-e-judai/ye-halki-si-nami-palkon-me-t66109.0.html;new#new







kamal sahab aapka tahe dil se bahut bahut shukriya...

Quote from: kamal aggarwal on July 28, 2011, 05:15:47 PM
YAARIF KE LIYE ALFAZ NAHI MIL RAHE INTEZAR JI Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley








Satish sahab bahut bahut shukriya aapne pasand kiya... aur aapki duaao ke liye tahe dil se shukriya...

Quote from: Satish Shukla on July 29, 2011, 12:03:44 PM
Intezar Ji,

Very nice post...all the best.

Raqeeb






Parwaaz sahab aapka comment mila bahut khushi huyi... jab aap comment de to phir creation mein waise hi raunak aajati hai shukriya dil se bahut bahut shukriya...

Quote from: ParwaaZ on July 29, 2011, 12:15:54 PM
Janab Intezaar Sahaab Aadaab!

Badi gehri kalam kahi hai janab... Usual Smile
Ahsaas O khayaal behad Dilkash O dilfareb rahe..

Sabhi werse behad khoob aur umdaa rahe.. Usual Smile
Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Aate rahiye... Likhate rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile           








khwaish bhai... bahut bahut shukriya jazbaaton ko samjha aapne dil se bahut bahut shukriya...

Quote from: khwaish on July 29, 2011, 12:17:54 PM
Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoooob Intezar Ji..

Kya kehne Bhai..Bahut Hi khooobsurat Kalaam..

gehre Aur Anmol jazbaaton Se Bharpoor..

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: July 30, 2011, 10:01:57 AM »
Quote from: Intezar on July 27, 2011, 07:06:46 PM


utar jaane de kuch khumaar teri yaadon ka,
phir to dard ki aagosh mein pighal jaana hai,
jo huaa hai darmayaan faasla badh jaane de,
phir to door hume teri raaho se nikal jaana hai,

aansuon ko khushk hone se pehle ine hata dena,
sookh jaaye to nishaan banke bikhar jaayenge,
dil se tum yaadon ke gharonde bhi mitaa dena
tanhaayi me warna ye dard banke utar jaayenge,

ab nahin raftaar dhadkano me, saanse bhi thami hai
uthi hai hulchal fizaaon me lekin bas teri kami hai,
koi katra nahin baaki palko ke darmayaan Intezar,
phir bhi khushk aankhon mein baaki halki si nami hai...!

Shukriya
Intezar !


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