Ham pe ye thoda sa ehsan kardo... mann

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Ham pe ye thoda sa ehsan kardo.
Maut ka samne mere saaman kardo.

Chhodo hamari ye sunwai har din,
Qatal ka mera zari farman kardo.

Tumhare hi hathon se ham maut paye.
Pura mera ye bhi arman kardo.

Bas ek aakhari tera sazda main kar lun,
Thodi der ko band tufan kardo.

Tumhe bhi khabar ho mere dard ki,
Bas ek din ko "mann" ko bhi sultan kardo.

mann
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«Reply #1 on: September 29, 2011, 04:30:50 AM »
bahot khoob
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«Reply #2 on: September 29, 2011, 04:41:51 AM »
good
Ham pe ye thoda sa ehsan kardo.
Maut ka samne mere saaman kardo.

Chhodo hamari ye sunwai har din,
Qatal ka mera zari farman kardo.

Tumhare hi hathon se ham maut paye.
Pura mera ye bhi arman kardo.

Bas ek aakhari tera sazda main kar lun,
Thodi der ko band tufan kardo.

Tumhe bhi khabar ho mere dard ki,
Bas ek din ko "mann" ko bhi sultan kardo.

mann
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«Reply #3 on: September 29, 2011, 08:39:53 AM »
thank u sarfiraji
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«Reply #4 on: September 29, 2011, 08:40:45 AM »
thanks manieshji
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«Reply #5 on: September 29, 2011, 12:48:02 PM »
 Usual Smile :)excellent
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«Reply #6 on: September 29, 2011, 06:46:29 PM »
Mann Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab kafi gehre aur achche ahsaas bune
hai aapne... Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe..

Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...           



Ham pe ye thoda sa ehsan kardo.
Maut ka samne mere saaman kardo.

Achcha Matla hai janab daad..
Par Maut ka samne nahi hoNga maut "ke" Samne hoNga..         


Chhodo hamari ye sunwai har din,
Qatal ka mera zari farman kardo.

Waah waah bahut khoob behad achcha sher kaha
hai daad .. daad daad..         


Tumhare hi hathon se ham maut paye.
Pura mera ye bhi arman kardo.

Achcha sher hai daad..           

Bas ek aakhari tera sazda main kar lun,
Thodi der ko band tufan kardo.

bahut khoob janab kafi achcha sher hai daad.         

Tumhe bhi khabar ho mere dard ki,
Bas ek din ko "mann" ko bhi sultan kardo.

Achcha Maqta hai.. haaN dusri line meiN
aik din ka mann ko bhi sultaan kardo se adaa thik lagta hai..

Aik soch humare zaheN meiN bani dekheN ... waise hum aise khayaal nahi banate..

Tumhe bhi khabar hoNgi mere dard ki,
Bus aik din khud ko bhi insaan kardo         


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«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2011, 03:22:58 AM »
dhanyawad aapka sunilji
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«Reply #8 on: October 01, 2011, 03:27:45 AM »
Thank u very much parwazji..

Aapne bahut khub daad di hai…
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«Reply #9 on: October 04, 2011, 05:11:03 AM »
bohat bohat khoob mann mann ji
Dil ke ehsaasaat ko badi khoobsurti
Se lafzon ki shaql men pesh kiya hai aapne
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«Reply #10 on: October 05, 2011, 03:18:41 AM »
dhanyawad ham_damji...
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«Reply #11 on: October 05, 2011, 10:00:51 PM »
Lajawab.. Usual Smile  Applause Applause

Mann ji.. wah bahut khoob.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: October 07, 2011, 04:33:53 AM »
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