Ham unki zindgi se.............mann

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Ham unki zindgi se dur bahut the.
Ye aur baat thi ham majbur bahut the.

Kuchh ek hoti khata to muaf kar dete,
Par kya karen ki tere kusur bahut the.

Ek kharonch lagi tumko aur tum tadap uthe,
Taqdir main hamari naasur bahut the,

Ham saikadon fan lekar gumnam hi rahe,
Taqdir the unki wo mashhur bahut the.

Mahfil main teri ham bhi bulaye to gaye the,
Manzur na the hamko tere dastur bahut the.

Mann

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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2012, 11:51:16 AM »
 Applause Applause waah waah bahut khoob mann ji
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2012, 11:55:27 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya janab saini sahab... ummid hai ki aapka sath sada milta rahega....
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2012, 11:56:24 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mann ji....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2012, 12:37:38 PM »
bahot khoob
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2012, 01:53:49 PM »
Bohut khoob akhri shair ka jawab nahiN bohut shandar ....
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2012, 02:34:12 PM »
Bahut khoob mannan bhai ApkE KALAM KA HAMKO INTEZAR RAHTA HAI  apne kya kah diya TERI NZRO SE DUR BAHUT THE  Usual Smile;->  NAZRO SE DUR BAHUT THE
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2012, 04:19:58 PM »
Kya baat hai.
wah wah wah mann jee
har sher..laajavaab...umda khayalon se labrej.
bahut bahut khoob Mann jee
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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2012, 05:33:52 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on August 06, 2012, 11:44:29 AM
Ham unki zindgi se dur bahut the.
Ye aur baat thi ham majbur bahut the.

Kuchh ek hoti khata to muaf kar dete,
Par kya karen ki tere kusur bahut the.

Ek kharonch lagi tumko aur tum tadap uthe,
Taqdir main hamari naasur bahut the,

Ham saikadon fan lekar gumnam hi rahe,
Taqdir the unki wo mashhur bahut the.

Mahfil main teri ham bhi bulaye to gaye the,
Manzur na the hamko tere dastur bahut the.

Mann


Waah Waah Mann ji bahut umda peskash rahee ye aapki meri taraf se dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad kabool kijiye.. har ek asaar bhaut behtrien raha is gazal me ...Clapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: August 06, 2012, 06:31:47 PM »
bahut bahut khoob mann ji... Usual Smile
dhero daad..
Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: August 06, 2012, 07:38:16 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on August 06, 2012, 11:44:29 AM
Ham unki zindgi se dur bahut the.
Ye aur baat thi ham majbur bahut the.

Kuchh ek hoti khata to muaf kar dete,
Par kya karen ki tere kusur bahut the.

Ek kharonch lagi tumko aur tum tadap uthe,
Taqdir main hamari naasur bahut the,

Ham saikadon fan lekar gumnam hi rahe,
Taqdir the unki wo mashhur bahut the.

Mahfil main teri ham bhi bulaye to gaye the,
Manzur na the hamko tere dastur bahut the.

Mann



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               na jaane kyon aaj koi pahchaantaa hi nahin!
               tere  saath  se  pahle  mashoor bahut the.!!
               
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«Reply #11 on: August 06, 2012, 11:23:20 PM »
Bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2012, 03:19:27 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad hridayji
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«Reply #13 on: August 07, 2012, 03:25:16 AM »
shukriya niralaji
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«Reply #14 on: August 07, 2012, 03:30:05 AM »
bahut shukriya aarishji... ummid hai ki aapka sath yun hi milta rahega....
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