-----/// Hamaare zakhmon ki kahaani ///----- Hriday

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humein  uski yaadein usse dur  jaane  nahi deti
aur hamaari mohabbat usko bhulaane nahi deti

aainaa poochtaa  hai hamaare ghum kaa sabab
hamaari aadat  humein kuch bataane nahi deti

jhhad gaye  hain phool aur patte shaakhon se
khizaan  bahaar  kabhi  laut  ke aane nahi deti

kashtiyaan jo bhatak  gaye hain toofaan mein
hawaa   saahil  tak  lautaa  ke  laane nahi deti

chaahaa kai  baar  udd jaayen  pankh failaa ke
bediyaan pairon ki kadam  badhaane nahi deti

har  lamhaa  koi  nayaa  dard  deti  hai zindagi
kabhi zakhmon par marham  lagaane nahi deti

shabd  kai  bikhre  pade hain  ghazal banne ko
kismat  apne  hi  hunar ko aazmaane nahi deti

poochhte hain zakhmon  se, muskuraaye kaise
haalat  apni  ab  humein muskuraane nahi deti


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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2013, 06:58:22 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2013, 07:03:34 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Nishi ji....!!!

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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2013, 07:15:05 PM »
bahot khoob, dheron daaad, waaah waah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2013, 07:17:32 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Iqtedar ji....!!!

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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2013, 07:18:49 PM »
bahut khoob kyaa kahnne aaj kal tumhaare kalaam men men kaafee pukhtagee hai keep it up
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2013, 07:24:24 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji, aap sab kaa likhaa padh padh ke kuch kuch likh lene ki koshish kar letaa hoon warnaa main kahaan likh paataa hoon, main aapkaa tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa kartaa hoon Sirji....!!!

bahut khoob kyaa kahnne aaj kal tumhaare kalaam men men kaafee pukhtagee hai keep it up
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2013, 07:30:15 PM »
shabd  kai  bikhre  pade hain  ghazal banne ko
kismat  apne  hi  hunar ko aazmaane nahi deti

poochhte hain zakhmon  se, muskuraaye kaise
haalat  apni  ab  humein muskuraane nahi deti

badhiya hriday jee
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«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2013, 07:42:32 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Mukesh ji....!!!

shabd  kai  bikhre  pade hain  ghazal banne ko
kismat  apne  hi  hunar ko aazmaane nahi deti

poochhte hain zakhmon  se, muskuraaye kaise
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badhiya hriday jee
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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2013, 07:59:02 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2013, 08:03:12 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Saxena ji....!!!

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«Reply #11 on: August 16, 2013, 08:06:30 PM »
waah waah hriday bhai.. ek aur behtareen peshkash.. jawaab nahi.. bahut khoob.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #12 on: August 16, 2013, 08:39:56 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Bhaai....!!!

waah waah hriday bhai.. ek aur behtareen peshkash.. jawaab nahi.. bahut khoob.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #13 on: August 16, 2013, 09:14:25 PM »
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«Reply #14 on: August 16, 2013, 09:15:40 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Shraddha ji....!!!

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