-----/// Hamaari kahaani fir adhoori reh gayi ///----- Hriday

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aaj ki yeh shaam fir sindoori reh gayi
aur hamaari kahaani fir adhoori reh gayi.....

kuch yun karwat liyaa zindagi ne hamaare
sab kuch jaise tham saa gayaa ho ek pal mein
raaste alag ho gaye mere tumhaare achaanak
aur hamaare darmiyaan bas doori reh gayi
aur hamaari kahaani fir adhoori reh gayi.....

kuch sunna thaa tumhe shaayad jo hum keh nahi paaye
kuch kehnaa thaa shaayad tumhe jo tum keh nahi paaye
padh liyaa hum dono ne ek dusre ki aankhon ko
aur faasle badhaane ke liye majboori reh gayi
aur hamaari kahaani fir adhoori reh gayi.....

likhne baithaa jab main kahaani apni fir se puraani
ek mod par aake kisi ne chhed diyaa meri yaadon ko
chehraa aa gayaa fir tumhaaraa nazar ke saamne mere
aur dil mein sawaal aayaa ki kyun woh doori reh gayi
aur hamaari kahaani fir adhoori reh gayi......

aaj ki yeh shaam fir sindoori reh gayi
aur hamaari kahaani fir adhoori reh gayi....






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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2015, 08:10:38 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on May 07, 2015, 06:46:02 PM


aaj ki yeh shaam fir sindoori reh gayi
aur hamaari kahaani fir adhoori reh gayi.....

kuch yun karwat liyaa zindagi ne hamaare
sab kuch jaise tham saa gayaa ho ek pal mein
raaste alag ho gaye mere tumhaare achaanak
aur hamaare darmiyaan bas doori reh gayi
aur hamaari kahaani fir adhoori reh gayi.....

kuch sunna thaa tumhe shaayad jo hum keh nahi paaye
kuch kehnaa thaa shaayad tumhe jo tum keh nahi paaye
padh liyaa hum dono ne ek dusre ki aankhon ko
aur faasle badhaane ke liye majboori reh gayi
aur hamaari kahaani fir adhoori reh gayi.....

likhne baithaa jab main kahaani apni fir se puraani
ek mod par aake kisi ne chhed diyaa meri yaadon ko
chehraa aa gayaa fir tumhaaraa nazar ke saamne mere
aur dil mein sawaal aayaa ki kyun woh doori reh gayi
aur hamaari kahaani fir adhoori reh gayi......

aaj ki yeh shaam fir sindoori reh gayi
aur hamaari kahaani fir adhoori reh gayi....



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main ne bhi koshish bahut ki kahaani poori karne ki per, kabhi alfaaz naaraaz ho ke chale gaye ....kabhi pen ne saath naa diya....kabhi paper toofaan mein uuddh gaye ....kabhi chiraago.n ne andheraa kar diyaa....kabhi aakho.n ne unn yaado.n ko dhhundlaa kar diya.....kabhi khawaabo.n ne confuse kar diyaa....kabhi beete hue lamho.n ne aage badhne naa diya.....kabhi qadmo.n ne mera saath naa diya unn raaho.n per.aur pyaar ne majboori aisi jataayi ki busssss mat poocho mujhe ek shaayra banaa diyaa aur main aisi busy ho gayi ki phir chaah kar bhi tum tak laut naa saki mujhe muaf karnaaaa aur meri yaad mein aise hi likhte rahnaaaa Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!
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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2015, 08:14:02 PM »
waah waah waah kyaa baat hai bahut khoob waahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Adhuri kahaani to phir bhi poori ho saktee hai, magar pori kahaani kaa kyaa ho saktaa. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #3 on: May 08, 2015, 04:18:12 AM »
shri hriday ji bhut hi sunder aapke hriday ke udgar hae .pesh hae : ye jindgi ki kahani adhuri rhegi
                jab tak ye jindgi chlti rhegi
               
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«Reply #4 on: May 08, 2015, 04:24:23 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: May 08, 2015, 04:40:49 AM »
kya baaat hai bahoooot ache hriday jii
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«Reply #6 on: May 08, 2015, 04:45:35 AM »
kya baaat hai bahoooot ache hriday jii
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«Reply #7 on: May 08, 2015, 11:24:01 AM »
bahut hi pyara likha hai...sach hai khuch kahaniyan adhuri rehne k liye hi banti hai....bahut khoob hriday ji
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«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2015, 12:29:31 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: May 16, 2015, 07:21:13 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sheba ji.....!!!


Quote from: Sheba on May 07, 2015, 08:10:38 PM
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main ne bhi koshish bahut ki kahaani poori karne ki per, kabhi alfaaz naaraaz ho ke chale gaye ....kabhi pen ne saath naa diya....kabhi paper toofaan mein uuddh gaye ....kabhi chiraago.n ne andheraa kar diyaa....kabhi aakho.n ne unn yaado.n ko dhhundlaa kar diya.....kabhi khawaabo.n ne confuse kar diyaa....kabhi beete hue lamho.n ne aage badhne naa diya.....kabhi qadmo.n ne mera saath naa diya unn raaho.n per.aur pyaar ne majboori aisi jataayi ki busssss mat poocho mujhe ek shaayra banaa diyaa aur main aisi busy ho gayi ki phir chaah kar bhi tum tak laut naa saki mujhe muaf karnaaaa aur meri yaad mein aise hi likhte rahnaaaa Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!
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«Reply #10 on: May 17, 2015, 10:04:10 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Surindar ji....!!!


Quote from: surindarn on May 07, 2015, 08:14:02 PM
waah waah waah kyaa baat hai bahut khoob waahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Adhuri kahaani to phir bhi poori ho saktee hai, magar pori kahaani kaa kyaa ho saktaa. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #11 on: May 18, 2015, 08:21:05 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Rastogi ji....!!!


Quote from: Ram Krishan Rastogi on May 08, 2015, 04:18:12 AM
shri hriday ji bhut hi sunder aapke hriday ke udgar hae .pesh hae : ye jindgi ki kahani adhuri rhegi
                jab tak ye jindgi chlti rhegi
               
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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2015, 05:43:06 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!


Quote from: sksaini4 on May 08, 2015, 04:24:23 AM
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«Reply #13 on: May 20, 2015, 08:16:16 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Rajan ji....!!!

Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on May 08, 2015, 04:40:49 AM
kya baaat hai bahoooot ache hriday jii

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«Reply #14 on: May 20, 2015, 08:17:47 PM »

Quote from: Nikhaar on May 08, 2015, 11:24:01 AM
bahut hi pyara likha hai...sach hai khuch kahaniyan adhuri rehne k liye hi banti hai....bahut khoob hriday ji


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