Hamare beech itni duriyan thin.... mann

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Hamare beech itni duriyan thin.
The kuchh haalat kuchh majburiyan thin.

Thi ham main bhi kami kuchh himmaton ki,
Aur tum main bhi bahut kamzoriyan thin.

Tumne bhi bhulaya kuchh to hamko,
Thi dil main kuchh khalish bimariyan thi.

Adhure geet mere rah gaye the,
Thi kuchh gunjen bahut sargoshiyan thin.

Koi "mann" ye bataye kaun tha wo,
Wahi tha ya wo kuchh parchhayiyan thin.

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: February 25, 2012, 11:52:08 AM »
good mann ji
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«Reply #2 on: February 25, 2012, 12:09:37 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on February 25, 2012, 11:45:50 AM
Hamare beech itni duriyan thin.
The kuchh haalat kuchh majburiyan thin.

Thi ham main bhi kami kuchh himmaton ki,
Aur tum main bhi bahut kamzoriyan thin.

Tumne bhi bhulaya kuchh to hamko,
Thi dil main kuchh khalish bimariyan thi.

Adhure geet mere rah gaye the,
Thi kuchh gunjen bahut sargoshiyan thin.

Koi "mann" ye bataye kaun tha wo,
Wahi tha ya wo kuchh parchhayiyan thin.

Mann


good.....!
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«Reply #3 on: February 25, 2012, 11:06:24 PM »
Quote from: mann.mann on February 25, 2012, 11:45:50 AM
Hamare beech itni duriyan thin.
The kuchh haalat kuchh majburiyan thin.

Thi ham main bhi kami kuchh himmaton ki,
Aur tum main bhi bahut kamzoriyan thin.

Tumne bhi bhulaya kuchh to hamko,
Thi dil main kuchh khalish bimariyan thi.

Adhure geet mere rah gaye the,
Thi kuchh gunjen bahut sargoshiyan thin.

Koi "mann" ye bataye kaun tha wo,
Wahi tha ya wo kuchh parchhayiyan thin.


Mann ji waah, bahut good.
Abul asad
Mann
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«Reply #4 on: February 26, 2012, 03:26:24 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on February 25, 2012, 11:45:50 AM
Hamare beech itni duriyan thin.
The kuchh haalat kuchh majburiyan thin.

Thi ham main bhi kami kuchh himmaton ki,
Aur tum main bhi bahut kamzoriyan thin.

Tumne bhi bhulaya kuchh to hamko,
Thi dil main kuchh khalish bimariyan thi.

Adhure geet mere rah gaye the,
Thi kuchh gunjen bahut sargoshiyan thin.

Koi "mann" ye bataye kaun tha wo,
Wahi tha ya wo kuchh parchhayiyan thin.

Mann

Nice expression. Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: February 26, 2012, 05:26:56 AM »
Bahut Umda
Vaaaaaaaaaaah
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«Reply #6 on: February 26, 2012, 07:33:18 AM »
Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: February 26, 2012, 07:39:41 AM »
KHAOSHI:X MERI KAHTI :jHAI GALIB :)BADMIJAJO KO SAMJHANA CHOD DE:).....
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«Reply #8 on: February 26, 2012, 07:40:24 AM »
KHAOSHI:X MERI KAHTI :jHAI GALIB :)BADMIJAJO KO SAMJHANA CHOD DE:).....
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«Reply #9 on: February 26, 2012, 10:45:15 AM »
Mann Jee Aadaab!

Waah janab waah kia kahne... Usual Smile
kia umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab behad khoob... !

sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe aur khayaal behad gazab...

aik achchi kalaam par humari dili daad o mubbarakbad...

likhte rahiye... aate rahiye...
shaad o aabaad rahiye...
khuda hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: February 26, 2012, 02:35:05 PM »
bahott khoob Mann ji--
dard bhri aapki peshkash ke ehsaas bht khoob rahe
humari daad kubul karen

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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«Reply #11 on: February 27, 2012, 03:14:41 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya janab sainiji.
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«Reply #12 on: February 27, 2012, 03:15:54 AM »
bahut dhanyawad shebaji
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«Reply #13 on: February 27, 2012, 03:17:34 AM »
bahut shukriya abulji.. daad dete rahiye.
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«Reply #14 on: February 27, 2012, 03:20:16 AM »
bahut dhanyawad ushaji.. yun hi sath dete rahiyega.
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