Hamko bhanwar main chhod ke... "manjum"

by manjum on February 10, 2011, 12:16:06 PM
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Hamko bhanwar main chhod ke usne kinara kar liya.
Hamne isi lie to ab gham ka sahara kar liya.

Ik Dafa toda tha dil fir bhi samajh na paye ham,
Fir chot khane ke lie dil ko dubara kar diya...

manjum "mann"
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2011, 02:46:12 PM »
Nice Manjum JI
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2011, 06:08:02 PM »
Bahut khoob manju mann ji bus last line mujhe kuch jami nhi...
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«Reply #3 on: February 10, 2011, 07:50:03 PM »
Quote from: manjum on February 10, 2011, 12:16:06 PM
Hamko bhanwar main chhod ke usne kinara kar liya.
Hamne isi lie to ab gham ka sahara kar liya.

Ik Dafa toda tha dil fir bhi samajh na paye ham,
Fir chot khane ke lie dil ko dubara kar diya...

manjum "mann"

good one
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Road_Side_Romeo
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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2011, 03:11:19 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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manjum
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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2011, 04:48:42 AM »
shukriya rishiji...

sath rahie
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manjum
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«Reply #6 on: February 11, 2011, 04:50:12 AM »
shukriya shukriyaji...

sath rahie... daad dete rahie
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manjum
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2011, 04:51:29 AM »
shukriya BBLji...

sath rahie... duaye dete rahie
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manjum
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«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2011, 04:52:50 AM »
shukriya marhoomji...

sath rahie duaye dete rahie...

shukriya
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manjum
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«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2011, 04:54:31 AM »
shukriya RSRji...

sath rahie yun hi duaye dete rahen...
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nirala
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«Reply #10 on: February 11, 2011, 05:10:02 AM »
wah Manju bahut khub.
superb lines .
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manjum
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«Reply #11 on: February 11, 2011, 05:11:18 AM »
shukriya niralaji...

sath rahie
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nirala
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«Reply #12 on: February 11, 2011, 05:18:13 AM »
ajihum to saath hi hain---
aap aise hi likhte raho bas
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #13 on: February 11, 2011, 12:24:36 PM »
bht khoob manjum ji....
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«Reply #14 on: February 12, 2011, 01:03:58 AM »
Quote from: manjum on February 10, 2011, 12:16:06 PM
Hamko bhanwar main chhod ke usne kinara kar liya.
Hamne isi lie to ab gham ka sahara kar liya.

Ik Dafa toda tha dil fir bhi samajh na paye ham,
Fir chot khane ke lie dil ko dubara kar diya...

manjum "mann"

Good One ..... Manjum Ji !
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