Hamnawa ki chah

by Rajiv'sshayri on August 22, 2007, 08:07:06 AM
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Yak-ba-yak Aaj usi hamnawa ki chah huyi,
Ki jis ki chah main, ye jindagi tabah huyi,
Kadam kadam pe mili talkhiyon se jakhma jada,
Ye chah ab to mere waste gunah hui.
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2007, 06:56:08 PM »
humnawa ?

acha sher hai !

:D :D :D
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Rajiv'sshayri
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«Reply #2 on: August 25, 2007, 07:14:13 AM »
Quote from: "Sahiba Zehra"
humnawa ?

acha sher hai !

:D :D :D


Thanks
Hamnawa(sathi, hamsafar)
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #3 on: August 25, 2007, 08:56:58 AM »
very nice.................but it will b better if u mention d meaning of rare words of the poem in last.
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Rajiv'sshayri
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«Reply #4 on: August 25, 2007, 12:38:15 PM »
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very nice.................but it will b better if u mention d meaning of rare words of the poem in last.


Thanks. Aage se khayal rakhungi.
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angel4u
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«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2007, 04:48:33 PM »
That was really lovely Usual Smile
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Rajiv'sshayri
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«Reply #6 on: August 25, 2007, 04:52:37 PM »
Quote from: "angel4u"
That was really lovely Usual Smile


Thanks angel. you welcome.
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