Hamne kalam uthali hai ab talwar ka kya karna... mann

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Hamne kalam uthali hai ab talwar ka kya karna.
Har din jashn manate hain ab tyouhar ka kya karna.

Gham main bhi sanse chalti hain, aansu main bhi mushkate hain.
Ab zakhmon ki kya ginti aur chubhate waar ka kya karna.

Apne bhi kuchh sapane hain apni bhi ek duniyan hai,
Khul ke jab ham jee na payen tab sansar ka kya karna.

Bhid bhale ho laakhon ki ya hon angin log yahan,
Waqt pade to kaam na aaye tab vyavahar ka kya karna.

Dil ke andar ghawo lage "mann" un ghawon ki kya ginti.
Chubhati baaton se mar jayen fir hathiyar ka kya karna.

Mann  
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«Reply #1 on: December 07, 2011, 04:07:01 AM »
bahot khoob--Mann ji--

yun dil ke zakhmo ka hisaab rakhte hain
band aankhoN me jese lahroN ka sailaab rakhte haiN
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«Reply #2 on: December 07, 2011, 06:50:35 AM »
Bahut hi Umdah Maan ji,

Younhi likhte rahiye, aapke kalaam mein aur wazn aaye.
Bahut alaa.

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«Reply #3 on: December 07, 2011, 10:09:08 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on December 07, 2011, 03:23:41 AM
Hamne kalam uthali hai ab talwar ka kya karna.
Har din jashn manate hain ab tyouhar ka kya karna.

Gham main bhi sanse chalti hain, aansu main bhi mushkate hain.
Ab zakhmon ki kya ginti aur chubhate waar ka kya karna.

Apne bhi kuchh sapane hain apni bhi ek duniyan hai,
Khul ke jab ham jee na payen tab sansar ka kya karna.

Bhid bhale ho laakhon ki ya hon angin log yahan,
Waqt pade to kaam na aaye tab vyavahar ka kya karna.

Dil ke andar ghawo lage "mann" un ghawon ki kya ginti.
Chubhati baaton se mar jayen fir hathiyar ka kya karna.

Mann 



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«Reply #4 on: December 07, 2011, 11:37:41 AM »
Dhanyawad sarfiraji…
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«Reply #5 on: December 07, 2011, 11:38:37 AM »
Dhanyawad shihabji..
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«Reply #6 on: December 07, 2011, 11:38:46 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on December 07, 2011, 03:23:41 AM
Hamne kalam uthali hai ab talwar ka kya karna.
Har din jashn manate hain ab tyouhar ka kya karna.

Gham main bhi sanse chalti hain, aansu main bhi mushkate hain.
Ab zakhmon ki kya ginti aur chubhate waar ka kya karna.

Apne bhi kuchh sapane hain apni bhi ek duniyan hai,
Khul ke jab ham jee na payen tab sansar ka kya karna.

Bhid bhale ho laakhon ki ya hon angin log yahan,
Waqt pade to kaam na aaye tab vyavahar ka kya karna.

Dil ke andar ghawo lage "mann" un ghawon ki kya ginti.
Chubhati baaton se mar jayen fir hathiyar ka kya karna.

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Bahut Hi khoobsurat Peshkash,Khaas Taur Par Yeh Sher Bahut Acha Laga Humein

"Bheed Bhale Ho Lakhon Ki Ya Ho Angin Log Yahan
Waqt Pade To kaam Na Aaye Tab Vyayahwar Ka Kya Karna"

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«Reply #7 on: December 07, 2011, 11:39:41 AM »
Dhanyawad asadji
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«Reply #8 on: December 07, 2011, 11:40:51 AM »
Dhanyawad qalbji
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«Reply #9 on: December 08, 2011, 03:10:15 AM »
dhanyawad khwaishji
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«Reply #10 on: December 08, 2011, 06:10:59 PM »
Mann Jee Aadaab!

Janab khayaal behad khoob kahe hai aapne.. kafi achche
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«Reply #11 on: December 09, 2011, 03:09:13 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad parwazji
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