~.. Hansta hua sa maiN:Shayri-E-Dard

janumanu

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jane kahaN wo kho gaya hastaa hua sa maiN
bikhra pada yahaN wahaN tootaa hua sa maiN
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tasveer aisi chhod kar aayaa huN uske pas
aatee huee udaasi aur jaataa hua sa maiN
..
kya chand se hi aayega mere liye koe
kab tak rahuN khudaa bata tanhaa hua sa maiN
..
rone lagi kuch aise jyuN darya mai ho ufaan
chup chaap dekhta raha sahra hua sa maiN
..
kab ja ke aayaaga mujhe aaeenaa dekhna
khud ko laguN kabhi kabhi dekha huaa sa main
..
usne kaha tumhari to dunia hi aur hai
dair-o-haram se aa gaya bhataka hua sa maiN
..
in waaijoN ki baat mai ab aanaa hi nahiN
luN maikdae ki raah ye kahta hua sa maIN


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: ~.. Hansta hua sa maiN

«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2012, 05:30:07 AM »

Quote from: janumanu on August 22, 2012, 04:33:25 AM

jane kahaN wo kho gaya hastaa hua sa maiN
bikhra pada yahaN wahaN tootaa hua sa maiN Clapping Smiley

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tasveer aisi chhod kar aayaa huN uske pas
aatee huee udaasi aur jaataa hua sa maiN Clapping Smiley

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kya chand se hi aayega mere liye koe
kab tak rahuN khudaa bata tanhaa hua sa maiN Clapping Smiley

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rone lagi kuch aise jyuN darya mai ho ufaan
chup chaap dekhta raha sahra hua sa maiN Applause

( sahmaa)
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kab ja ke aayaaga mujhe aaeenaa dekhna
khud ko laguN kabhi kabhi dekha huaa sa main Clapping Smiley

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usne kaha tumhari to dunia hi aur hai
dair-o-haram se aa gaya bhataka hua sa maiN Applause

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in waaijoN ki baat mai ab aanaa hi nahiN
luN maikdae ki raah ye kahta hua sa maIN

veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice


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sbechain

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Re: ~.. Hansta hua sa maiN

«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2012, 10:24:08 AM »

Quote from: janumanu on August 22, 2012, 04:33:25 AM

jane kahaN wo kho gaya hastaa hua sa maiN
bikhra pada yahaN wahaN tootaa hua sa maiN
..bahut khoob ji bahut khoob Clapping Smiley

tasveer aisi chhod kar aayaa huN uske pas
aatee huee udaasi aur jaataa hua sa maiN
..kyaa kahne wah wah Clapping Smiley

kya chand se hi aayega mere liye koe
kab tak rahuN khudaa bata tanhaa hua sa maiN
..oye hoye kya kahne bahut khoob Clapping Smiley

rone lagi kuch aise jyuN darya mai ho ufaan
chup chaap dekhta raha sahra hua sa maiN
bahut khoob.........! Applause

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kab ja ke aayaaga mujhe aaeenaa dekhna
khud ko laguN kabhi kabhi dekha huaa sa main
..waah waah waah. Clapping Smiley

usne kaha tumhari to dunia hi aur hai
dair-o-haram se aa gaya bhataka hua sa maiN
..kya kah diya janab. meri to bolti band ho gayi Clapping Smiley

in waaijoN ki baat mai ab aanaa hi nahiN
luN maikdae ki raah ye kahta hua sa maIN

lo ek aur ashiq bann gaya rind saaqi.

bahut khoob vaise bahut diljale maloom hote ho ji aap.........!

please do'nt mind my comments. your ghazal is outstanding


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janumanu

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Re: ~.. Hansta hua sa maiN

«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2012, 10:29:05 AM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 22, 2012, 05:30:07 AM

veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice

shukriyaa ji Usual Smile


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janumanu

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Re: ~.. Hansta hua sa maiN

«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2012, 10:30:05 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on August 22, 2012, 10:24:08 AM

bahut khoob vaise bahut diljale maloom hote ho ji aap.........!

please do'nt mind my comments. your ghazal is outstanding

Sheba ji shukriyaa aapne ek ek misre ko saleek se padha... aur kuch jydaa hi tareef kar di ..........
and maien MIND nahi kiya..
hai jo nahi Usual Smile


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Re: ~.. Hansta hua sa maiN

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laaiba

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Re: ~.. Hansta hua sa maiN

«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2012, 11:13:17 AM »

oomda qafia radeef chuna ap ne bohat barmala asaar ke saath aik achi ghazl pash kee aap ne ......bohat c daad


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janumanu

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Re: ~.. Hansta hua sa maiN

«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2012, 11:14:48 AM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 22, 2012, 11:07:05 AM

shukriyaaa janaab


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janumanu

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Re: ~.. Hansta hua sa maiN

«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2012, 11:15:28 AM »

Quote from: laaiba on August 22, 2012, 11:13:17 AM

oomda qafia radeef chuna ap ne bohat barmala asaar ke saath aik achi ghazl pash kee aap ne ......bohat c daad

shukriyaaa apne sarahaa............ koshish mai hun acha kahne ki


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Sanjeev kash

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Re: ~.. Hansta hua sa maiN

«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2012, 11:18:44 AM »

bahut Khub janumanu ji Applause


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janumanu

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Re: ~.. Hansta hua sa maiN

«Reply #10 on: August 22, 2012, 11:19:34 AM »

Quote from: Sanjeev kash on August 22, 2012, 11:18:44 AM

bahut Khub janumanu ji Applause

thanks dear ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,


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Sps

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Re: ~.. Hansta hua sa maiN

«Reply #11 on: August 22, 2012, 12:44:27 PM »

behad khoobsurat,,,,aur aina dekhne wali line ne to poora dard ek baar me hi bata dia...


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mkv

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Re: ~.. Hansta hua sa maiN

«Reply #12 on: August 22, 2012, 04:18:24 PM »

Jabardast ghajal hai.
wah wah wah
aap to khoobsurat likhne vaalo me se ek hai..aapka intjaar rahta hai mujhe. post ke saath apna naam suffix karenge to sahooliyat hogi padhne me.


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suman59

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Re: ~.. Hansta hua sa maiN

«Reply #13 on: August 22, 2012, 04:25:22 PM »

wah kya khoob likha hai aapne Applause


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ParwaaZ

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Re: ~.. Hansta hua sa maiN

«Reply #14 on: August 22, 2012, 05:26:52 PM »

Vikas Bhai Aadaab!

kaise haiN janab... Ummid hai khairiyat se hoNge...
Bade dinoN baad aapki koi kalaam se ruberu hone ka
mouka diya hai.... iske liye shukraguzar haiN...

Behad khoobsurat gazal hai bhai... Aapki har kalaam meiN
gazab ka nayapan dekhne milta hai... YeH kalaam bhi behad
umdaa rahi... sabhi ashaar la jawaab hai ...

Meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez..

Quote from: janumanu on August 22, 2012, 04:33:25 AM

jane kahaN wo kho gaya hastaa hua sa maiN
bikhra pada yahaN wahaN tootaa hua sa maiN
..
WaaH kia baat hai ... behad khoob matla hai
Behad umdaa khayaal aur umdaa adaaygi...

tasveer aisi chhod kar aayaa huN uske pas
aatee huee udaasi aur jaataa hua sa maiN
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Waah waaH waaH Bhai kia kahne waaH ...
behad umdaa daad daad daad ...

kya chand se hi aayega mere liye koe
kab tak rahuN khudaa bata tanhaa hua sa maiN
..
Behad khoob Bhai daad ...

rone lagi kuch aise jyuN darya mai ho ufaan
chup chaap dekhta raha sahra hua sa maiN
..
Bahut khoob achcha sher hai daad...

kab ja ke aayaaga mujhe aaeenaa dekhna
khud ko laguN kabhi kabhi dekha huaa sa main
..
Kia kahne BHai gazab kar diya behad umdaa...

usne kaha tumhari to dunia hi aur hai
dair-o-haram se aa gaya bhataka hua sa maiN
..
bahut khoob bahut umdaa daad daad daad....

in waaijoN ki baat mai ab aanaa hi nahiN
luN maikdae ki raah ye kahta hua sa maIN

Hahahaha Fikra Sahaab sahiN hai daad daad daad...
Bhai Maqta kahaaN gaya...


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