Haq mein do gaz Zameen , Falak aaya... Ram Saraswat

by Ram Saraswat on October 11, 2012, 06:38:30 PM
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Ilm  aaya,  na  kuchh  sabak  aaya,
haq mein do gaz zameen, falak aaya.  

Khud ko na,  umr bhar talaash saka,
khojate  khojate  mein,  thak aaya.

Zindagi  dard-o-gham   bulati  gai,  
dard be-sabr ,  be-jhijhak    aaya.

Uski  aawaz-e-paa  hi thii,  jisko,
dil jo tha band , sun dhadak  aaya.

Uff  wo  jalwa tha, ya  koi   jadu,  
hosh  mujhko  na, ab  talak   aaya.

Loota usne hi dil ka, sabr-o-qarar,
jis pe koi  kabhi, na  shak   aaya.

Jab   ujaada,  mere  nasheman  ko,
ek   aansoo  na  aankh  tak  aaya.

Badla mausam bhi,to lo yoon badla,
har  gul, be-rang,  be-mahek aaya.  

"Ram" darna bhi kaisa, ab gham se,
jab  bhi  aaya  wo, yakayak  aaya.  
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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2012, 06:47:20 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Ram ji...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2012, 06:57:49 PM »
Quote from: Ram Saraswat on October 11, 2012, 06:38:30 PM
Ilm  aaya,  na  kuchh  sabak  aaya,
haq mein do gaz zameen, falak aaya.  
bahut khoob ............! kya yahaan faqat hoga falak ki jagah Applause Applause Applause Applause
Khud ko na,  umr bhar talaash saka,
khojate  khojate  mein,  thak aaya.
wah wah bahut khoob........! Applause Applause Applause
Zindagi  dard-o-gham   bulati  gai,  
dard be-sabr ,  be-jhijhak    aaya.
bahut hi khoob janab....! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Uski  aawaz-e-paa  hi thii,  jisko,
dil jo tha band , sun dhadak  aaya.
wah waah wah.....ye ghazal ka khususi sher hua ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Uff  wo  jalwa tha, ya  koi   jadu,  
hosh  mujhko  na, ab  talak   aaya.
khoob aur bahut khoob.......! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
Loota usne hi dil ka, sabr-o-qarar,
jis pe koi  kabhi, na  shak   aaya.
kyaa khoob janab meri nazar mein aapne aaj mehfil loot li---main rau deti hoon Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Jab   ujaada,  mere  nasheman  ko,
ek   aansoo  na  aankh  tak  aaya.
bahut bahut bahut payaaraa wah wah Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Badla mausam bhi,to lo yoon badla,
har  gul, be-rang,  be-mahek aaya.  
kya kahne .........! Applause Applause Applause Applause
"Ram" darna bhi kaisa, ab gham se,
jab  bhi  aaya  wo, yakayak  aaya.  
bahut khoob.........! icon_flower icon_flower


mindblowing ji..................!
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«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2012, 07:21:06 PM »
Saraswat Jee aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne aapke waaH behad khoob aur gehre ahsaas
O khayaaloN ko khoob lafzoN meiN sameta hai aapne... Usual Smile

behad khoob kalaam kahi hai... sabhi ashaar hume khoob aur umdaa
lage... Usual Smile

Huamri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 
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«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2012, 02:30:47 AM »
Bahut umda kalaam
sabhee ashaar ek se badhkar ek
Applause Applause Applause
Matla..aur sheba jee ka comment?
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2012, 02:54:13 AM »
superb Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2012, 03:44:51 AM »
qaafiye waah waah superb
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«Reply #7 on: October 12, 2012, 03:45:28 AM »
supeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer wah kya bat hai  Applause Applause Applause :clap
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«Reply #8 on: October 12, 2012, 05:50:43 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 11, 2012, 06:47:20 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Ram ji...!!!
Bahut bahut shukriya Hridayji, aapka.
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«Reply #9 on: October 12, 2012, 06:00:09 AM »
Quote from: Sheba on October 11, 2012, 06:57:49 PM

mindblowing ji..................!

Bahut bahut shukriya Shebaji ,

Asl mein likhate waqt dil mein sirf ek hi kahyaal tha ki...

"Akhirat mein ham sabhi ko sirf Zameen mein, neelay Falak ke neeche hi to rahna hai"

Yehi soch kar meine Falak ko likha tha.Ummeed hai, aap aage bhi isi tarah apne khayaal bhejati rahengi. Shukriya.   
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«Reply #10 on: October 12, 2012, 06:04:59 AM »
Quote from: mkv on October 12, 2012, 02:30:47 AM
Bahut umda kalaam
sabhee ashaar ek se badhkar ek
Applause Applause Applause
Matla..aur sheba jee ka comment?
Bahut bahut shukriya bhai mkvji,

maine shebaji ko jo likha hai ummeed hai aap ko bhi yehi theek lagega.Shukriya.   
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«Reply #11 on: October 12, 2012, 06:06:58 AM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 11, 2012, 07:21:06 PM
Saraswat Jee aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne aapke waaH behad khoob aur gehre ahsaas
O khayaaloN ko khoob lafzoN meiN sameta hai aapne... Usual Smile

behad khoob kalaam kahi hai... sabhi ashaar hume khoob aur umdaa
lage... Usual Smile

Huamri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 


Bahut bahut shukriya bhai Parwaazji.
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«Reply #12 on: October 12, 2012, 06:08:18 AM »
Quote from: ripan dev on October 12, 2012, 02:54:13 AM
superb Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut shukriya ripandevji.
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«Reply #13 on: October 12, 2012, 06:09:30 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on October 12, 2012, 03:44:51 AM
qaafiye waah waah superb
Bahut bahut shukriya Dr. Saini
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«Reply #14 on: October 12, 2012, 06:14:21 AM »
Quote from: anmolarora on October 12, 2012, 03:45:28 AM
supeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer wah kya bat hai  Applause Applause Applause :clap
Bahut bahut shukriya Anmolji
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