Har baar jis khayaal ne aaker rula diya.- Beete palon ke saye-2000

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«Reply #15 on: October 12, 2013, 02:49:04 PM »

Har waqt machalta rahaa maasoom ki  tarah,
hamne to man ke paalne mein bhi jhula diya 

Zahir  tha be rukhii ka sabab hamko to mager,
paigham e mohabbat unhein fir bhi  khula diya

Tar  daamini    hamesha    hamari  adaa rahi,               
pani  na sahi , ashkon se  daaman dhula diya.

Jab ‘Ram’  asar  hai na dawaa ka na duaa ka,
be- waqt   fir  hakim  ko  kis ne bula diya 

Beintehaayee khoobsurat ghazal Ram ji ..... Aur in aashaar ne to dil mein ghar hi bana liya ho jaise .... Dheron dheron daad aap ko
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«Reply #16 on: October 12, 2013, 04:53:54 PM »
Kya yaad karein usko jo ham ne  bhula diya,
har  baar jis khayaal  ne aaker rula  diya.

Har waqt machalta rahaa maasoom ki  tarah,
hamne to man ke paalne mein bhi jhula diya 

Hasrat kisi bhi dil mein kaho kab nahi hotin ,
hamne to hasraton ko  bhi dil mein sula dila

Zahir  tha be rukhii ka sabab hamko to mager,
paigham e mohabbat unhein fir bhi  khula diya

Hamne  to sahe zakhm sabhi  uf kahe  baghair
zakhm  e jigar ko  dekh un ne mooh fula diya

Tar  daamini    hamesha    hamari  adaa rahi,               
pani  na sahi , ashkon se  daaman dhula diya.

Jab ‘Ram’  asar  hai na dawaa ka na duaa ka,
be- waqt   fir  hakim  ko  kis ne bula diya 

क्या याद करें उसको जो  हम  ने भुला    दिया.
हर बार  जिस  खयाल  ने  आकर  रुला  दिया.

हर  वक़्त  मचलता  रहा  मासूम   की  तरह,
हमने  तो  मन  के  पालने  में भी झुला दिया

हसरत  किसी  भी दिल में कहो  कब नहीं होतीं
हमने  तो हसरतों को भी दिल में  सुला  दिला

ज़ाहिर  था  बेरुखी  का  सबब हमको तो मगर,
पैग़ाम  ए  मोहब्बत उन्हें फिर  भी खुला दिया

हमने तो  सहे ज़ख्म  सभी  उफ  कहे  बगेर,
ज़ख्म ए जिगर को देख उन ने मुह फुला दिया

तरदामिनी  हमेशा  हमारी    अदा     रही,
पानी न सही, अश्कों से  दामन  धुला दिया.

जब 'राम' असर है न दवा का न दुआ का,
बे- वक़्त फिर हकीम को किस ने बुला दिया

کیا یاد کریں اسکو   جو  ہمنے  بھلا   دیا
ہر  بار   جس  خیال  نے  آکر  رلا    دیا
 
ہر  وقت   مچلتا  رہا  معصوم کی طرح 
 ہمنے تو من کے پالنے میں بھی جھلا دیا

حسرت کسی بھی دل میں کہو کب نہیں ہوتیں
ہمنے تو حسرتوں کو بھی دل میں سلا  دیا

ظاہر تھا بےرخی کا  سبب  ہمکو  تو  مگر
پیغام  ا  موحبّت  انہیں  فر  بھی  خلا   دیا

ہمنے تو  سہے زخم  سبھی  اف  کہے بغیر
زخمی ا جگر کو دیکھ  ان  نے موہ  فلا  دیا

تر دامنی    ہمیشہ     ہماری    ادا    رہی
پانی ن  سہی  اشکوں  سے دامن دھلا  دیا

جب رام  اثر   ہے  ن  دوا  کا ن دوا  کا 
بے وقت  فر  حکیم  کو  کسنے   بلا  دیا



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«Reply #17 on: October 12, 2013, 09:12:49 PM »
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«Reply #18 on: October 12, 2013, 11:00:07 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaah waah waah Ram ji... behad hi umda kalaam se nawaza hai aapne.. bahut hi khoob sabhi ashaar rahe.. dil ko chhoo gayi aapki yeh peshkash.. is khoob kalam par hamari hazaron dili daad qubool kijiye.. in ashaar ke kya kehne.. dil mein bas gaye..

Zahir  tha be rukhii ka sabab hamko to mager,
paigham e mohabbat unhein fir bhi  khula diya

Hamne  to sahe zakhm sabhi  uf kahe  baghair
zakhm  e jigar ko  dekh un ne mooh fula diya

Tar  daamini    hamesha    hamari  adaa rahi,               
pani  na sahi , ashkon se  daaman dhula diya.
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«Reply #19 on: October 12, 2013, 11:01:24 PM »
Har waqt machalta rahaa maasoom ki  tarah,
hamne to man ke paalne mein bhi jhula diya 

Hasrat kisi bhi dil mein kaho kab nahi hotin ,
hamne to hasraton ko  bhi dil mein sula dila

Zahir  tha be rukhii ka sabab hamko to mager,
paigham e mohabbat unhein fir bhi  khula diya

Hamne  to sahe zakhm sabhi  uf kahe  baghair
zakhm  e jigar ko  dekh un ne mooh fula diya

Tar  daamini    hamesha    hamari  adaa rahi,               
pani  na sahi , ashkon se  daaman dhula diya.


bahot khoob Ram sir... har sher ek se badhkar ek hain, samajh nahi aa raha hai ke kise accha kahun kise kam acchaa... meri taraf se behad mubarakbaad...

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«Reply #20 on: October 12, 2013, 11:03:36 PM »
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Hasrat kisi bhi dil mein kaho kab nahi hotin ,
hamne to hasraton ko bhi dil mein sula dila


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #21 on: October 12, 2013, 11:05:58 PM »
Har waqt machalta rahaa maasoom ki  tarah,
hamne to man ke paalne mein bhi jhula diya 

Zahir  tha be rukhii ka sabab hamko to mager,
paigham e mohabbat unhein fir bhi  khula diya

Tar  daamini    hamesha    hamari  adaa rahi,               
pani  na sahi , ashkon se  daaman dhula diya.

Jab ‘Ram’  asar  hai na dawaa ka na duaa ka,
be- waqt   fir  hakim  ko  kis ne bula diya 

Beintehaayee khoobsurat ghazal Ram ji ..... Aur in aashaar ne to dil mein ghar hi bana liya ho jaise .... Dheron dheron daad aap ko

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«Reply #22 on: October 12, 2013, 11:11:53 PM »

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«Reply #23 on: October 12, 2013, 11:15:01 PM »
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«Reply #24 on: October 13, 2013, 12:22:09 AM »
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«Reply #25 on: October 13, 2013, 12:59:23 AM »
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«Reply #26 on: October 14, 2013, 11:43:46 PM »
waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah sir nehaayat hi umda ghazal kahi hai, ek se badhkar ek sher magar 4th aur 6th ka jawaab nahiN. HazaaroN daad aur mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #27 on: October 15, 2013, 03:51:53 AM »
waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah sir nehaayat hi umda ghazal kahi hai, ek se badhkar ek sher magar 4th aur 6th ka jawaab nahiN. HazaaroN daad aur mubarakbaad.
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