"" Har ek Mod par ""

by nirala on February 13, 2011, 02:42:51 PM
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nirala
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baar baar Jhukta raha
har ek mod par rukta raha

machalte toofano ko dabaye, seene me
khamoshi se andheron me, chuppta rha

chahta tha mai bhi, bayan kar du zazbato ko
magr chup rah bhitar hi sulagta rha

dil tootne ka dard kya he
ghut ghut kar samajhta rha

qurban hue jinke liye, ilzam wahi laga gaye
dard se daman ko muskrakar bhigota rha

jeene ka andaz ab sekhane chle, wo mujhe
gamo me jinke pal pal sath, nibhata rha

fir se hoga sabera koi,aisi
khokhli baato me Nir khud hi bhulata rha
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manjum
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«Reply #1 on: February 14, 2011, 06:51:14 AM »
hey niralaji... kya hua bada hi dard bhara likha hai aapne... dil ko chhu liya aapne.... bahut khub..

 Applause Applause Applause
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nirala
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«Reply #2 on: February 14, 2011, 07:57:36 AM »
thanx Manju--
wese itna bhi dard bhara nhi h .
haha
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sbechain
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«Reply #3 on: February 14, 2011, 09:49:36 AM »
baar baar Jhukta raha
har ek mod par rukta raha

machalte toofano ko dabaye, seene me
khamoshi se andheron me, chuppta rha

chahta tha mai bhi, bayan kar du zazbato ko
magr chup rah bhitar hi sulagta rha

dil tootne ka dard kya he
ghut ghut kar samajhta rha

qurban hue jinke liye, ilzam wahi laga gaye
dard se daman ko muskrakar bhigota rha

jeene ka andaz ab sekhane chle, wo mujhe
gamo me jinke pal pal sath, nibhata rha

fir se hoga sabera koi,aisi
khokhli baato me Nir khud hi bhulata rha

bahut acha nirala ji
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #4 on: February 15, 2011, 08:36:32 PM »
BAhut Khub Nirala JI
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nirala
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«Reply #5 on: February 21, 2011, 08:59:29 AM »
thanx Sheba ji and Rishi ji
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kamal aggarwal
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«Reply #6 on: February 21, 2011, 09:31:47 AM »
bahut khub kya kehne nir aapke  Applause Applause
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nirala
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«Reply #7 on: February 21, 2011, 09:37:57 AM »
sukriya Kamal ji--
dher saara thanx
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