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kuch ajeeb faslo ka janm ho raha hai naseeb mera jaagkar bhi soo raha hai kaise keh du tuta dil dhadakta nahi jabki aaj dil ka har tukda ro raha hai .  ...................@fahi@............... |
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«Reply #1 on: June 16, 2006, 01:11:06 PM » |
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wah fahi jee bahut he aacha likha hai apne .....!!!
Dil to ab bhikar sa gaya hai...
kaanch ki thara toot gaya hai...
sambhlne k liye koi sahara nazar nahi aaya,
lekin tanhayi ne hume apna liya hai...
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«Reply #2 on: June 16, 2006, 01:24:45 PM » |
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sukriya & nice reply salma ji..........
ishq mai uske main itna majboor ho gaya
woh kisi aur ki ankhon ka noor ho gaya
uski jafa ko wafa hum mante rahe aur
sheese ka dil mera chakna chur ho gaya
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«Reply #3 on: June 16, 2006, 01:42:14 PM » |
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Again gr8 one fahi jee...thanks ...i juz tried my best... not good at shayari ..issliye
Dil to ab pathar sa ho chuka hai...
ye jazbaath ko daafan kar chuka hai...
Na ye ghum tham raha hai,na ye aansu,
Yaad mein unke bikaar chuka hai...
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«Reply #4 on: June 17, 2006, 12:48:38 PM » |
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u r gr8 salma ji ,koshish to mujhe karni chaiye acha likhne ki............
bikhre hue in tukdo ko ahista se uthaiye
ki kabhi ye dhadakte tha mera dil bankar.
.................@fahi@................
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«Reply #5 on: June 17, 2006, 01:03:37 PM » |
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Arey fahi jee ... aap bahut aacha likh rahe hain...
main to kabhi kabhi he likhti hu aur wo bhi itna behtar nahi jasie ke aap log..khair nice one again
Aur un tukdon ka sambhal ke rakna hai...
Kabhi un mein bhi koi dhadkta rehta tha...
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«Reply #6 on: June 17, 2006, 01:16:27 PM » |
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aapne itni gehri baat kahi hai salma ji ki ...........lafz nahi hai bayan karne ke liye & itz shows tht u r a brilliant thinker.
rakhne ke baad un tukdo se aawaz aayi thi
tute hai hum kyunki dil unka hai khush nahi .
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«Reply #7 on: June 17, 2006, 02:26:56 PM » |
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wow u both are very gud ......... :D bahut khub likha dono ne.......  na jaane kaisi hoti hai jindagi jo ek saans mein jee jaati hai hame toh buri adat ho gayi hai apni jindagi tukdo mein beetane ki |
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«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2006, 02:41:25 PM » |
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tukdo main gujar rahi is zindagi main
bus ek tujhe paane ki hasrat puri hai.
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«Reply #9 on: June 17, 2006, 02:44:46 PM » |
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wow!!!
faasle ek din kam ho jayenge,
naseeb bhi aapke muskuraayenge.
dhadakne dijiye dil ko khul kar,
dil ke tukde jald hi jud jayenge.........
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«Reply #10 on: June 17, 2006, 02:48:33 PM » |
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tukde tukde dil ke karke bhala chien se koi sota hai
woh puchte rahe dur se haal mera ,asia bhi kahi hota hai
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«Reply #11 on: June 17, 2006, 02:58:30 PM » |
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nice 1 harsh jee........
tutkar phir se kaise jud jayega
yeh dil hai dil koi aaina to nahi
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«Reply #12 on: June 17, 2006, 03:02:01 PM » |
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tukdo main dhal rahi hai ab to raat yaadon ki
phir kaise bhala so jao main chadar taankar.
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«Reply #13 on: June 17, 2006, 04:27:06 PM » |
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Karke Mahobbat kya khoob likhte hai sab.....bahut acche Jeans wale bhai.....ranju and Salma
Rahegi kab talak tu door mujhse....
Kab talak mujhe thukrayegi.....
Iss Kadar deewana banunga mein tera......
Jism tu apna par Parchayi meri payegi.......!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: June 18, 2006, 03:58:10 AM » |
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shurkriya Gaurav .....
dik ke har tukde mein hamne har baar ek rang naya dekha
kabhi dekha isko sukh ki chhawn mein kabhi dard mein bheega dekha
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