purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #30 on: June 20, 2006, 12:15:35 PM » |
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salma ji kehno ko hum ise shayri kahe lekin gar isme jajwat na ho to ye bekaar hai.........isliye jajwat ho aur kuch na ho tab bhi woh pasand kiya jata hai..........aur aapke paas jajwat hai.
maine tabse uski dard ki parwaah karna chod diya jabse uske lafzo ne kiya hai apna dard bayan
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«Reply #31 on: June 20, 2006, 12:31:10 PM » |
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hmm shukriya n nice one too
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«Reply #32 on: June 23, 2006, 04:55:25 AM » |
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sukriya salma ji..........
ishq-e-aasmaan ko chune se pehle ashko ke jahan mai khone se pehle has lo ek baar dil kholkar sanam meri dil ki dastaan ko sunne se pehle
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ranjana
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«Reply #33 on: June 23, 2006, 06:50:39 AM » |
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aap sunaiye apni dastaan hamko hamare dil per jo gujarti hai gujarane do bas kehna kuch is tarah se isko apne dil se tum ki sun ke uthey dard jarur ,per aankho ko nam na hone do
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«Reply #34 on: June 25, 2006, 11:44:42 AM » |
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Is kadar na har baat yaron se pucho, Jo baat raaz ki ho isharo se puchho, Lahero se khelna to samandar ka shauk hai, Lagti hai chot kaise kinaro se ja puchho
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«Reply #35 on: June 25, 2006, 12:17:03 PM » |
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very nice john.........
apne ashko ko to mana lenge hum per aapki aankhon ke kaise manayenge kyunki pighal jayega patthar ka dil bhi jab hum apni dard-e-dastaan sunayenge.
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«Reply #36 on: June 25, 2006, 12:20:39 PM » |
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very nice john.........
apne ashko ko to mana lenge hum per aapki aankhon ke kaise manayenge kyunki pighal jayega patthar ka dil bhi jab hum apni dard-e-dastaan sunayenge.
..............@fahi@.................. wow.....aapki yeh lines dil ko chu gayi....awesome!!!
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«Reply #37 on: June 25, 2006, 12:33:48 PM » |
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thanx roshni ji..............
tukde-tukde jodkar jis sapne ko sajaya palko pe use ashk ke ek tukde ne phir tukde tukde kar diya
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«Reply #38 on: June 26, 2006, 03:18:31 AM » |
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bahut roka hamne dil ko bhi bahut samjhaya per dil mera apne dard ko daba nahi paaya ashqe beh hi gaye meri in khaali aankho se jab teri dastaan ko apne dard jitna hi gumgeen paaya
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«Reply #39 on: June 26, 2006, 05:13:32 AM » |
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nile aasman pe li ,jo baadlo ne angdayi hai palko pe mere phir ashko ki ghata chaayi hai dono hi jagah ho rahi hai barsaate lekin ek pyaas hai bujha rahi aur ek pyaas laayi hai.
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«Reply #40 on: June 26, 2006, 05:18:55 AM » |
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palko se girat paani woh karshima hai gir jaaye toh aansu hai tham jaaye toh moti hai pyaas chaey badal ki ho ya ho pyaas dil ki sanam pyaas jab tak na bujhe pyaas hi hoti hai
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«Reply #41 on: June 26, 2006, 01:55:33 PM » |
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sahi kaha ranjana.........
badi mushkil mai hai hum ki in ashko ka kya karein rahenge to dard banenge ,aur bahaya to duniya hasegi
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«Reply #42 on: June 27, 2006, 02:14:21 AM » |
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unki aankho mein udasi ke siva kya thaa ek chehara dekha wahan apana bhi hamne jo unke saath saath ashqo se bhara thaa
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«Reply #43 on: June 27, 2006, 02:34:31 PM » |
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jinhe humne puri siddat se chaha aaj unhone meri mohabbat ka ye sila diya saja kar rakha pehle hame apni aankhon mai aur phir ashko ke saath zameen mai mila diya
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«Reply #44 on: June 27, 2006, 05:05:47 PM » |
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jab bahe aankho se ashq tumhre toh bas itni dil se mujhe sada dena main aa jaaungi kareeb tere dil ke bahut bas tum mujhe apni yaado se nikal mat dena
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