Harbar........ Aurat....

by manjum on March 03, 2011, 06:21:13 AM
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«Reply #15 on: March 03, 2011, 08:31:27 AM »
Manjum Ji, Iss kalaam par Daad Dena Mujhe Manzoor Nahi Kyonki Yeh Kalaam Ek jeegti-Jaagti Haqeeqat Hai, Aur jis Haqeeqat Par Sharmindigi Ho Uss Par Daad Kaisi..Haan Yeh ZAROOR Keh sakta Hoon Ke Aisi Rachnayen Jo Sirf Sach bolti hai Bahut Kam Padhne Ko milti hai..Agar Aapki Izzazat ho to Ek Aurat Ko"Guruon" Ne Kya Darja Diya Likhna Chahhta Hoon..
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«Reply #16 on: March 03, 2011, 08:40:55 AM »
aapne sach kaha khwaishji...... hanji izazat ki kya baat hai aap kahiye na.... asal main darje aur kanuni haq to bahut hain par........Huh?Huh??

sach kahun daad pane ke lie ise likha hi nahin tha bahut pahle ise likha tha.... jab likha to meri aankhon main aansu aa gaye the.... aur ye rachna ye guhar karti hai ki badalna hoga bahut kuchh......
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«Reply #17 on: March 03, 2011, 08:45:16 AM »
Quote from: manjum on March 03, 2011, 08:40:55 AM
aapne sach kaha khwaishji...... hanji izazat ki kya baat hai aap kahiye na.... asal main darje aur kanuni haq to bahut hain par........Huh?Huh??

sach kahun daad pane ke lie ise likha hi nahin tha bahut pahle ise likha tha.... jab likha to meri aankhon main aansu aa gaye the.... aur ye rachna ye guhar karti hai ki badalna hoga bahut kuchh......

Aapse Ek request Hai, Mere Yahan Kuch Likhne se Pehle main chahunga ke aap meri woh kavita zaroor padhiye, Jo ek Aurat ke Astitva par Likhi hai, Main Kabhi Kisi Ko Aisa Meri kavita Padhne ko nahi kehta par Aapko khaas kehta hoon..

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/miscellaneous-shayri/main-jeena-chaahti-thi-ek-pukaar-khwaish-t57992.0.html;

Zaroor Padhiye..
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«Reply #18 on: March 03, 2011, 08:46:31 AM »
hanji abhi pada rahe rahin......
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«Reply #19 on: March 03, 2011, 12:36:59 PM »
Bahut Hi Umda Likha Hai Manjum JI
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«Reply #20 on: March 04, 2011, 03:24:26 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya rishiji
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«Reply #21 on: March 04, 2011, 07:01:43 AM »
aisi haqeeqat kaise likh lete ho ji..!
hats off to u
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«Reply #22 on: March 04, 2011, 07:15:44 AM »
niralaji kaise likhte hain socha nahin... hame khud pata nahin... jo likha jata hai... wo kaise ban jata hai....
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«Reply #23 on: March 04, 2011, 07:28:43 AM »
bht umda khayal manjum ji......
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«Reply #24 on: March 04, 2011, 07:31:44 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya manzilji.... dhanyawad
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«Reply #25 on: March 05, 2011, 06:47:42 AM »
kya likha manjumji aapne.... itana dard bhara ehsas kaise socha aapne..... bahut acha laga.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #26 on: March 05, 2011, 07:18:10 AM »
shukriya tamnnaji........
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«Reply #27 on: March 12, 2011, 04:55:47 AM »
oh... aurat hona....

no comments dear manjuji....

kuchh kahne ko nahin hain..
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«Reply #28 on: March 05, 2012, 11:15:12 AM »
etihaasik prasthbhoomee par ek anmol rachnaa saadhuwaad detaa hoon anjum ji
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«Reply #29 on: March 05, 2012, 11:46:27 AM »
Quote from: manjum on March 03, 2011, 06:21:13 AM
dosto 8 march ko mahila divas hai.... ek purani rachna jo ab tak jisne suni pasand ki hai...... ummid hai aap pasand karenge.

....Jab Ram ne
meri agnipariksha li
fir bhi mujhe tyag kar
van main bheja
   tab main Seeta nahin thi.

Jab sirf ek vachan ko
nibhane ke lie
banaya gaya mujhe
panch patiyon ki patni
banta gaya mujhe
panch purushon main,
mujhe danv par lagaya
bhari sabha main
mujhe apmanit kiya
   tab main Dropadi nahin thi.

Jab Gautam rishi ne
mere charitra par shak kar
mujhe patthar ki banaya
varsho sataya,
   tab main Ahilya nahin thi.

Jab Ranaji ne
mujhe diya vish ka pyala
ghar aur samaj se nikala
   tab main Meera nahin thi.

Jab samaj ne
mujhe mere pati ki chita ke sath
zinda jalaya
mujhe sati banaya,
   tab main Roop kanwar nahin thi.

Jab Vyabhichariyon ne
meri asmat sare aam luti
meri nirmam hatya ki
   tab main............. nahin thi. (yahan auginat nam hain)

main
kabhi Seeta, kabhi Dropadi,
Kabhi Ahilya
ya kabhi Meera nahin thi..

yah sab hua mere sath
sirf islie
kyonki Harbar

hay! main
ek Aurat thi
Harbar sirf ek aurat.....

manjum "mann"


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