Has nahi paya.......( Ghayel )

by sajid_ghayel on May 11, 2009, 07:10:22 AM
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Rone ka salika koi, samajh nahi paya
To koi khush to bohat tha, magar has nahi paya

Dukh to bohat the, uski zindagi me bhi
Dekhi jo meri halet, gam apna keh nahi paya

Yu to koi khwaish hui na poori, par itna mayus na tha woh
Jane kya tha tere inkaar me, woh seh nahi paya

Firak-e-sanam ka gam kaho ya Visal-e-Rab ki chahet
Natija dono ka yeh nikla, zinda Ghayel reh nahi paya

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2009, 07:46:34 AM »
Wah Wah Sajid ji.. behad khoob likha hai superb!
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«Reply #2 on: May 11, 2009, 08:17:11 AM »
Mashallah Bahat Achcha Likha Hai,.
Good Work Janaab,.
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #3 on: May 11, 2009, 09:24:34 AM »
Kya khoob likha hai Ghayal Ji
Very very nice
SARVESH RASTOGI
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: May 11, 2009, 09:43:40 AM »
Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2009, 06:54:42 AM »
beautiful,very nice ,sajid ji. Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2009, 10:56:08 AM »
Wah Wah Sajid ji.. behad khoob likha hai superb!

Thank You very much Sophi for your time and comment.
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #7 on: June 12, 2009, 03:56:35 AM »
Mashallah Bahat Achcha Likha Hai,.
Good Work Janaab,.

Nawazish Karam hain Chote...
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shab
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«Reply #8 on: June 12, 2009, 04:46:09 AM »
WALLAH KYA QALAM AAPNE FARMAYA
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