HASEE AA GAYEE......(GHAYEL)

by sajid_ghayel on December 01, 2008, 07:55:11 AM
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #30 on: December 01, 2008, 02:17:18 PM »
Quote from: abdbundeli on December 01, 2008, 02:04:45 PM
Waah bhayee waah!
            - abd bundeli


Suraj ne jo mangi diye se roshni
Diye ko apni zaat pe hasi aa gayee

                                -SG-
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«Reply #31 on: December 01, 2008, 02:19:21 PM »
Quote from: Mahiya on December 01, 2008, 02:12:04 PM

Very Sentimental.. Very Nicely Crafted..

Thanks Mahiya... love4
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«Reply #32 on: December 01, 2008, 02:23:13 PM »
Quote from: honeyrose on December 01, 2008, 02:06:19 PM
Mujhpar shaq karte hai woh mere aankhon ko num karte hain
Jis dard se guzar rahi hoon aaj uss haal pe hasee aa gayee

________honeyrose________
 
Arey kya baat hain honey subah me kya khaya tha roz wahi khaya karo bada bhari sher phek diya tumne to hamari taraf

Na manzil mili na koi rehguzar mila
Aye zindagi tere safar pe hasee aa gayee

                         -SG-
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«Reply #33 on: December 01, 2008, 02:29:42 PM »
sajid_ghayel ji!
Tootey na dil kisee kaa, isee waasitey us roz,
Us but ney, muskuraa key, bazm ko kiyaa salaam!
Gar, eik ho aashiq, to, wasl kaa payaam dey;
Ab kyaa karey woh, jis kaa aahsiq ho khaas-o-aam?
                           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #34 on: December 01, 2008, 02:30:34 PM »
wah wah aur hazaron wah...yun lagne laga hai ki sajid ki kalam se shabd nikle aur ek behtreen ghazal taiyaar.........

sajid ki bazm se nikle jo BEKARAR
khud ka likha-padha, to hansi aa gai

Azeem bahoot khubsurat rahe tumhaare bhi jawab...honey ji bahoot achche
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«Reply #35 on: December 01, 2008, 02:38:28 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 01, 2008, 02:23:13 PM
Arey kya baat hain honey subah me kya khaya tha roz wahi khaya karo bada bhari sher phek diya tumne to hamari taraf

Na manzil mili na koi rehguzar mila
Aye zindagi tere safar pe hasee aa gayee

                         -SG-

Kya karu ji dil pe aaye baat likh di...


 
Joh kuch bhi tha tumare naam likh diya
Sab mere jaan ke peeche joh padh gaye to hasee aa gayee

_________honeyrose________
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«Reply #36 on: December 01, 2008, 02:39:54 PM »
very nice Sajid ji,,Azeem bhai,,Mahiya,,Abd ji,,Sanjeev ji... Applause Applause
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«Reply #37 on: December 01, 2008, 02:43:26 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 01, 2008, 02:17:18 PM
Suraj ne jo mangi diye se roshni
Diye ko apni zaat pe hasi aa gayee

                                -SG-
Mujh ko patah naheen hai, miyaan, kaisey aaftaab,
Fir raat mein chamakney lagaa hai dahar sey eik!
Cheyhrah to hai janaab kaa, jyoun khud houn noor-e-toor;
Reig-e-rawaan ko roshnee dey deygaa jo hareik!!
                           - abd bundeli
                                
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«Reply #38 on: December 01, 2008, 02:47:55 PM »
Quote from: bekarar on December 01, 2008, 02:30:34 PM
wah wah aur hazaron wah...yun lagne laga hai ki sajid ki kalam se shabd nikle aur ek behtreen ghazal taiyaar.........

sajid ki bazm se nikle jo BEKARAR
khud ka likha-padha, to hansi aa gai

Azeem bahoot khubsurat rahe tumhaare bhi jawab...honey ji bahoot achche
Apna likha sune to mutmaeen unka likha sune to BEKARAR
Yeh fark jo samaj me aaya hasee aa gayee

                                -SG-

Itni izzat dene ke liye bohat shukriya dost.
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«Reply #39 on: December 01, 2008, 02:50:43 PM »
Quote from: abdbundeli on December 01, 2008, 02:43:26 PM
Mujh ko patah naheen hai, miyaan, kaisey aaftaab,
Fir raat mein chamakney lagaa hai dahar sey eik!
Cheyhrah to hai janaab kaa, jyoun khud houn noor-e-toor;
Reig-e-rawaan ko roshnee dey deygaa jo hareik!!
                           - abd bundeli
                                

Quote from: abdbundeli on December 01, 2008, 02:29:42 PM
sajid_ghayel ji!
Tootey na dil kisee kaa, isee waasitey us roz,
Us but ney, muskuraa key, bazm ko kiyaa salaam!
Gar, eik ho aashiq, to, wasl kaa payaam dey;
Ab kyaa karey woh, jis kaa aahsiq ho khaas-o-aam?
                           - abd bundeli

Baat pyari thi pyari nahi bohat pyari thi
Mere samaj me aayee jinke nahi aayee unhe hasee aa gayee

                                          -SG-
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«Reply #40 on: December 01, 2008, 02:54:53 PM »
Quote from: Mahiya on December 01, 2008, 02:10:18 PM


Ek fannkaar, jo fann ko maane 'dard',
Ek adakaar, jo andaaz ko kahey 'zakhm'...
Samajh ke is heir-pheir par "Maahi" ko hansi aa gayi...


Shayer hu main adna sa tamashaiee nahi hu
Jo beche apna fan woh saudaiee nahi hu
Teri samajh ke heir-pheir pe "Ghayel" ko hasee aa gayee
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«Reply #41 on: December 01, 2008, 04:03:21 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 01, 2008, 02:50:43 PM
Baat pyari thi pyari nahi bohat pyari thi
Mere samaj me aayee jinke nahi aayee unhe hasee aa gayee

                                          -SG-
Shukriyah miyaan!
Dil mein, dil sey khush raho,
Aisaa karo upaaya!
Aisaa na ho, ki, doosarey
Mukh sey nikley haaya!!
        - abd bundeli
       
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«Reply #42 on: December 01, 2008, 04:41:09 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah kaya mehfil saji hai, bahoot khoob SG, Jaanasheen, Honey and Mahiya... good work all!!!

dard hai, dard main bebasi ka alam
ansuo main bhi ab to kami aa gai
yaadon ne jhanjhora kuch is kadar
khud ki nasamjhi per hansi aa gai
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«Reply #43 on: December 02, 2008, 09:00:59 AM »
Shukriya Bekaraar Bhai,.
Jaya Sis,.
Pooja Didi,.

Khud Ki Pehchaan Se Bhi Anjaan Tha, Kayi Arse Se,.
Kisi Ne Aakar Naam Pukaara To Hasi Aa Gayi,.

Sajaaya Jis Gulistaan, Khwasishon Ki Barsaat Deke,.
Jab Kaante Hi Kaante Mile Yahaan, To Hasi Aa Gayi,.
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«Reply #44 on: December 02, 2008, 09:09:29 AM »
Thank You pooja and very well said Azeem  Clapping Smiley

Jinki daastan-e-gam sunke hum roye the kabhi
Unhe aaj mere haal pe hasee aa gayee

                           -sg-
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