Hasee aa gayee.....(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on April 16, 2009, 10:01:00 AM
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Maine ek kalam likha tha jiska Title tha Hasee aa gayee.... us thread par sabhi dosto ne bohat badh chad ke hissa liya tha ek khoobsurat si mehfil sajee thi, har kisi ke sher ka radeef tha "hasee aa gayee"

Bas usi thread se apne kuch likhe hue sher jama karke ek sath pesh kar raha hu....aur neeche "Original thread ka link bhi de raha hu jaha jaker aap sabke kam ka maza le sakte hain..."

Jal chuka parwana shama ki arzoo me
Aur uski is ada pe hame hasee aa gayee..

Mera mehboob bhi wahi tha mera munsif bhi wahi
Saza maut ki sunaee to hasee aa gayee..

Mera kissa-e-mohabbat mera dushman suna ke roya
Jise sunkar mere dosto ko hasee aa gayee..

Mere dard ki tareef Mere zakhmo pe wah wah
Sunke haal-e-gam mera tumne khushi manayee to hasee aa gayee..

Mere shikwa se pehle aakh me aasoo the tere
Jo lage tuje hasane hame bhi hasee aa gayee..

Suraj ne jo mangi diye se roshni
Diye ko apni zaat pe hasi aa gayee..

Na manzil mili na koi rehguzar mila
Aye zindagi tere safar pe hasee aa gayee..

Jinki daastan-e-gam sunke hum roye the kabhi
Unhe aaj mere haal pe hasee aa gayee..

Woh aaye meri kabr pe aur bujha diye sare chirag
Bas jalta hua unka dil dekha to hasee aa gayee..

Teri bagawat me bhi teri mohabbat hain
Sharafat se kiya unhe zaleel to hasee aa gayee..

Apne aasoo jo pochne lage hum ek roz
Bheege daman ko apne dekh ke hasee aa gayee

Jiske singhaar ko kabhi dekhte the chaav se
Un nazaro ko aaj ujdi mang pe hasee aa gayee..

Woh jab dekhne lage waqt-e-rukhsati murde ka chehra
Marne wale ki khushi dekhkar hasee aa gayee

-SG-

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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #1 on: April 16, 2009, 10:13:28 AM »

  YAAAR AAPNEY TO ROLAA DIYAA... MUJHEY... MAIN YEH LIKHTEY WAQT MERI AANKAIN

  NAM HAIN.... MAIN KUCH NAHIN KAHNAA CHAAHUNGAA AB....GHAYAAL ....ISS MEHFIL

  MAIN BADEY BADEY TAAREY HAIN CHAMAKTEY HUEY.... MAGAR TUM EK AKELEY CHAAND HO

 YAAR............U HAVE STOLEN THE SHOW....!!!!!

 
 K_A
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salil2002
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«Reply #2 on: April 16, 2009, 10:23:11 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 16, 2009, 10:01:00 AM
Maine ek kalam likha tha jiska Title tha Hasee aa gayee.... us thread par sabhi dosto ne bohat badh chad ke hissa liya tha ek khoobsurat si mehfil sajee thi, har kisi ke sher ka radeef tha "hasee aa gayee"

Bas usi thread se apne kuch likhe hue sher jama karke ek sath pesh kar raha hu....aur neeche "Original thread ka link bhi de raha hu jaha jaker aap sabke kam ka maza le sakte hain..."

Jal chuka parwana shama ki arzoo me
Aur uski is ada pe hame hasee aa gayee..

Mera mehboob bhi wahi tha mera munsif bhi wahi
Saza maut ki sunaee to hasee aa gayee..

Mera kissa-e-mohabbat mera dushman suna ke roya
Jise sunkar mere dosto ko hasee aa gayee..

Mere dard ki tareef Mere zakhmo pe wah wah
Sunke haal-e-gam mera tumne khushi manayee to hasee aa gayee..

Mere shikwa se pehle aakh me aasoo the tere
Jo lage tuje hasane hame bhi hasee aa gayee..

Suraj ne jo mangi diye se roshni
Diye ko apni zaat pe hasi aa gayee..

Na manzil mili na koi rehguzar mila
Aye zindagi tere safar pe hasee aa gayee..

Jinki daastan-e-gam sunke hum roye the kabhi
Unhe aaj mere haal pe hasee aa gayee..

Woh aaye meri kabr pe aur bujha diye sare chirag
Bas jalta hua unka dil dekha to hasee aa gayee..

Teri bagawat me bhi teri mohabbat hain
Sharafat se kiya unhe zaleel to hasee aa gayee..

Apne aasoo jo pochne lage hum ek roz
Bheege daman ko apne dekh ke hasee aa gayee

Jiske singhaar ko kabhi dekhte the chaav se
Un nazaro ko aaj ujdi mang pe hasee aa gayee..

Woh jab dekhne lage waqt-e-rukhsati murde ka chehra
Marne wale ki khushi dekhkar hasee aa gayee

-SG-

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayriedard/hasee-aa-gayeeghayel-t41046.0.html;
bhai maine dono thread pade..........bahut dino k baad kuch pad kr dard taaza huahai.............


maut de ke apne haathon se baandhi meri laash
humne dekhaa aisa karke oonki aankhon main nami aa gayi
har pal phir karte rahe tamanna kii chen paa jaye meri rooh
mere Qatil ki yeh ada dekh "SAAHIL" hasee aa gayee
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salma786
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«Reply #3 on: April 16, 2009, 01:10:19 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 16, 2009, 10:01:00 AM
Maine ek kalam likha tha jiska Title tha Hasee aa gayee.... us thread par sabhi dosto ne bohat badh chad ke hissa liya tha ek khoobsurat si mehfil sajee thi, har kisi ke sher ka radeef tha "hasee aa gayee"

Bas usi thread se apne kuch likhe hue sher jama karke ek sath pesh kar raha hu....aur neeche "Original thread ka link bhi de raha hu jaha jaker aap sabke kam ka maza le sakte hain..."

Jal chuka parwana shama ki arzoo me
Aur uski is ada pe hame hasee aa gayee..

Mera mehboob bhi wahi tha mera munsif bhi wahi
Saza maut ki sunaee to hasee aa gayee..

Mera kissa-e-mohabbat mera dushman suna ke roya
Jise sunkar mere dosto ko hasee aa gayee..

Mere dard ki tareef Mere zakhmo pe wah wah
Sunke haal-e-gam mera tumne khushi manayee to hasee aa gayee..

Mere shikwa se pehle aakh me aasoo the tere
Jo lage tuje hasane hame bhi hasee aa gayee..

Suraj ne jo mangi diye se roshni
Diye ko apni zaat pe hasi aa gayee..

Na manzil mili na koi rehguzar mila
Aye zindagi tere safar pe hasee aa gayee..

Jinki daastan-e-gam sunke hum roye the kabhi
Unhe aaj mere haal pe hasee aa gayee..

Woh aaye meri kabr pe aur bujha diye sare chirag
Bas jalta hua unka dil dekha to hasee aa gayee..

Teri bagawat me bhi teri mohabbat hain
Sharafat se kiya unhe zaleel to hasee aa gayee..

Apne aasoo jo pochne lage hum ek roz
Bheege daman ko apne dekh ke hasee aa gayee

Jiske singhaar ko kabhi dekhte the chaav se
Un nazaro ko aaj ujdi mang pe hasee aa gayee..

Woh jab dekhne lage waqt-e-rukhsati murde ka chehra
Marne wale ki khushi dekhkar hasee aa gayee

-SG-

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayriedard/hasee-aa-gayeeghayel-t41046.0.html;
Waah tarif karne ke liye alfaaz kam pad rahe hai!!

bahoot khoob Sajid ji!!
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salma786
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«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2009, 01:11:15 PM »
Bahoot ache salil ji!!
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Tanha(Saurabh)
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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2009, 03:00:10 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 16, 2009, 10:01:00 AM
Maine ek kalam likha tha jiska Title tha Hasee aa gayee.... us thread par sabhi dosto ne bohat badh chad ke hissa liya tha ek khoobsurat si mehfil sajee thi, har kisi ke sher ka radeef tha "hasee aa gayee"

Bas usi thread se apne kuch likhe hue sher jama karke ek sath pesh kar raha hu....aur neeche "Original thread ka link bhi de raha hu jaha jaker aap sabke kam ka maza le sakte hain..."

Jal chuka parwana shama ki arzoo me
Aur uski is ada pe hame hasee aa gayee..

Mera mehboob bhi wahi tha mera munsif bhi wahi
Saza maut ki sunaee to hasee aa gayee..

Mera kissa-e-mohabbat mera dushman suna ke roya
Jise sunkar mere dosto ko hasee aa gayee..

Mere dard ki tareef Mere zakhmo pe wah wah
Sunke haal-e-gam mera tumne khushi manayee to hasee aa gayee..

Mere shikwa se pehle aakh me aasoo the tere
Jo lage tuje hasane hame bhi hasee aa gayee..

Suraj ne jo mangi diye se roshni
Diye ko apni zaat pe hasi aa gayee..

Na manzil mili na koi rehguzar mila
Aye zindagi tere safar pe hasee aa gayee..

Jinki daastan-e-gam sunke hum roye the kabhi
Unhe aaj mere haal pe hasee aa gayee..

Woh aaye meri kabr pe aur bujha diye sare chirag
Bas jalta hua unka dil dekha to hasee aa gayee..

Teri bagawat me bhi teri mohabbat hain
Sharafat se kiya unhe zaleel to hasee aa gayee..

Apne aasoo jo pochne lage hum ek roz
Bheege daman ko apne dekh ke hasee aa gayee

Jiske singhaar ko kabhi dekhte the chaav se
Un nazaro ko aaj ujdi mang pe hasee aa gayee..

Woh jab dekhne lage waqt-e-rukhsati murde ka chehra
Marne wale ki khushi dekhkar hasee aa gayee

-SG-

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayriedard/hasee-aa-gayeeghayel-t41046.0.html;


bohat bohat khoobsoorat, tareef ke liye to hum kuchh kah hi nahi sakte sajid ji, kya likha hai aapne bohat umda.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #6 on: April 17, 2009, 05:53:08 AM »
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on April 16, 2009, 10:13:28 AM
  YAAAR AAPNEY TO ROLAA DIYAA... MUJHEY... MAIN YEH LIKHTEY WAQT MERI AANKAIN

  NAM HAIN.... MAIN KUCH NAHIN KAHNAA CHAAHUNGAA AB....GHAYAAL ....ISS MEHFIL

  MAIN BADEY BADEY TAAREY HAIN CHAMAKTEY HUEY.... MAGAR TUM EK AKELEY CHAAND HO

 YAAR............U HAVE STOLEN THE SHOW....!!!!!

 
 K_A

Arey mere masoom dost itni tareef na karo warna taarey naraaz ho jayege tumse........bas apni dua me yaad rakhna aur isi tarah hausla afzaiee karte rehna....
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upyogkarta
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«Reply #7 on: April 17, 2009, 07:51:43 AM »
gud
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #8 on: April 17, 2009, 09:38:24 AM »
Quote from: salil2002 on April 16, 2009, 10:23:11 AM
bhai maine dono thread pade..........bahut dino k baad kuch pad kr dard taaza huahai.............


maut de ke apne haathon se baandhi meri laash
humne dekhaa aisa karke oonki aankhon main nami aa gayi
har pal phir karte rahe tamanna kii chen paa jaye meri rooh
mere Qatil ki yeh ada dekh "SAAHIL" hasee aa gayee
Bohat bohat khoob Salil jo tumne mere dard ko itni khoobsurti se zinda rakha.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #9 on: April 18, 2009, 06:42:46 AM »
Quote from: salma786 on April 16, 2009, 01:10:19 PM
Waah tarif karne ke liye alfaaz kam pad rahe hai!!

bahoot khoob Sajid ji!!


Nawazish karam hain dost.....
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #10 on: April 22, 2009, 03:11:01 PM »
Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on April 16, 2009, 03:00:10 PM

bohat bohat khoobsoorat, tareef ke liye to hum kuchh kah hi nahi sakte sajid ji, kya likha hai aapne bohat umda.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bohat bohat shukriyaan Saurabh tumne apna waqt diya kya yahi kam badi baat hain.....
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #11 on: April 25, 2009, 03:44:01 AM »
Quote from: upyogkarta on April 17, 2009, 07:51:43 AM
gud

Thanks..
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: April 25, 2009, 04:04:42 AM »
bahoot khoob Sajid
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #13 on: April 26, 2009, 08:53:40 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on April 25, 2009, 04:04:42 AM
bahoot khoob Sajid

Bohat bohat shukriyaan....Pooja
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #14 on: April 26, 2009, 09:20:54 AM »
Bahut kabile tarif likha hai Ghayel Ji
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