"" Hasi hai jiske chehre par ""

by nirala on January 21, 2011, 10:35:26 AM
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nirala
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Andhera hi andhera hai
ujaale par kyun pehra hai

chamakte chehre ke bhitar
chupa ek shyah chehra hai

Hansi hai jiske chehre par
ussi ko ghaw gehra hai

paron me taab jiske hain
ussi ke sar pe sehra hai

ye nir haqq pe qurbaan hai
na tera hain na mera hai
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2011, 10:47:11 AM »
kya baat he nirala ji.........

it is just wowwwwwwwwwwwwww.............

behtareen poetry yaar.........dil chu gaya ek ek lafj........wonderful work dear.........
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2011, 10:59:35 AM »
Andhera hi andhera hai
ujaale par kyun pehra hai

chamakte chehre ke bhitar
chupa ek shyah chehra hai

Hansi hai jiske chehre par
ussi ko ghaw gehra hai

paron me taab jiske hain
ussi ke sar pe sehra hai

ye nir haqq pe qurbaan hai
na tera hain na mera hai


Bahut khoob nirala ji...
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manjum
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2011, 12:01:29 PM »
wah niralaji.... badiya.... gahari baat dil tak..
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2011, 12:19:38 PM »
very nice lines nirala ji...
bht khoob...
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #5 on: January 21, 2011, 08:46:24 PM »
NICE NIRALA JI
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2011, 07:37:51 AM »

  Waah behatareen creation Nirala Ji. hello2 hello2
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2011, 07:45:20 AM »
nice nirala ji
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«Reply #8 on: January 24, 2011, 09:52:13 AM »
Good one dear...
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