Hasta hua dekhu......(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on December 31, 2008, 07:21:06 AM
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Mere aasuo ko, ho sake to chum lena
Hasrat hain apne ashko ko hasta hua dekhu

Mere kafan ko, ho sake to chum lena
Hasrat hain apni mayyat ko chamakta hua dekhu

Mere zakhmo ko, ho sake to chum lena
Hasrat hain dil ke ghaav ko mehakta hua dekhu

GHAYEL ke kalamo ko, ho sake to chum lena
Hasrat hain apne shero ko gaata hua dekhu

Mere khato ko, ho sake to chum lena
Hasrat hain apne wado ko tuje yaad aata hua dekhu

Tasweer meri chum lena, jab guzre mera janaza
Hasrat hain kuch is tarah tujhe main jaata hua dekhu

                                        -Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: December 31, 2008, 07:24:58 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 31, 2008, 07:21:06 AM
Mere aasuo ko, ho sake to chum lena
Hasrat hain apne ashko ko hasta hua dekhu

Mere kafan ko, ho sake to chum lena
Hasrat hain apni mayyat ko chamakta hua dekhu

Mere zakhmo ko, ho sake to chum lena
Hasrat hain dil ke ghaav ko mehka hua dekhu

GHAYEL ke kalamo ko, ho sake to chum lena
Hasrat hain apne shero ko gaata hua dekhu

Mere khato ko, ho sake to chum lena
Hasrat hain apne wado ko tuje yaad aata hua dekhu

Tasweer meri chum lena, jab guzre mera janaza
Hasrat hain kuch is tarah tujhe jaata dekhu

                                        -Sajid Ghayel-


Bahut acche...... Wonderful...... and Touchy lines....
padkar aankhein nami huyi sajid ghayel ji...
pehla 4 lines mein hi mera dil ber aaya..  sad7
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Sonia01
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«Reply #2 on: December 31, 2008, 07:29:04 AM »
Kaise dikhaye tumhe Ghayal mere pyar apna
Saanson pe tera hi naam likha dil per likha fasana tera

Chahenge dunia mein na dooja koyi tumhe is hadh tak
Jis hadh tak chahti hu tujhe aaj yeh dil tera

 sad5
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honeyrose
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«Reply #3 on: December 31, 2008, 07:35:59 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause

Wah wah bohat khoob Sajid ji..

Bohat khoob reply Sonia... Thumbs UP
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: December 31, 2008, 07:38:12 AM »
good work SG and Sonia
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cara
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«Reply #5 on: December 31, 2008, 08:27:37 AM »
kya baat hai gayelji.......

mere jaane ke baad ,jab kabhi bhi aye meri yaad,
meri tasweer ko chum lena,tere ashko mein utter ayoga mein.
mere mayyat pe, mere kafan ko chum lena,
wada hain ,wahan per bhi,sada karu ga yaad.
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Sonia01
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«Reply #6 on: December 31, 2008, 08:41:54 AM »
Quote from: cara on December 31, 2008, 08:27:37 AM
kya baat hai gayelji.......

mere jaane ke baad ,jab kabhi bhi aye meri yaad,
meri tasweer ko chum lena,tere ashko mein utter ayoga mein.
mere mayyat pe, mere kafan ko chum lena,
wada hain ,wahan per bhi,sada karu ga yaad.

wah cara sis... bahut accha likha hai aapne.
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #7 on: December 31, 2008, 12:43:50 PM »
Quote from: Sonia01 on December 31, 2008, 07:29:04 AM
Kaise dikhaye tumhe Ghayal mere pyar apna
Saanson pe tera hi naam likha dil per likha fasana tera

Chahenge dunia mein na dooja koyi tumhe is hadh tak
Jis hadh tak chahti hu tujhe aaj yeh dil tera

 sad5

Mere sabr ka tu yu imtihaan na le
Bazme mehfil main na bol padu mera nam na le
Jo tujhe nazar bhar dekhne se darta ho
Woh GHAYEL badh kar kahi tera hath tham na le
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«Reply #8 on: December 31, 2008, 12:47:15 PM »
Quote from: cara on December 31, 2008, 08:27:37 AM
kya baat hai gayelji.......

mere jaane ke baad ,jab kabhi bhi aye meri yaad,
meri tasweer ko chum lena,tere ashko mein utter ayoga mein.
mere mayyat pe, mere kafan ko chum lena,
wada hain ,wahan per bhi,sada karu ga yaad.

Tareef aur khoobsurat jawab ke liye shukriya CARA
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«Reply #9 on: December 31, 2008, 12:48:22 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on December 31, 2008, 07:38:12 AM
good work SG and Sonia

Thank You POOJA JEE.......
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«Reply #10 on: December 31, 2008, 03:33:26 PM »
Bohat Hi Badhiya hai Sajid Bhaiya,.
And jaya Sis Aapne Bhi Kamaal Ka Likha hai,.
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«Reply #11 on: December 31, 2008, 04:06:30 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 31, 2008, 12:43:50 PM
Mere sabr ka tu yu imtihaan na le
Bazme mehfil main na bol padu mera nam na le
Jo tujhe nazar bhar dekhne se darta ho
Woh GHAYEL badh kar kahi tera hath tham na le

pyar ke badle pyar nishani ke badle nishani mangti hu
tu bewafa nahi hai ye bhi mai acchi tarah janti hu
magar kya kare kiya hai juda hum ko us khuda ne
unki badli nazron ko bi ab mein pechanti hu..
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«Reply #12 on: December 31, 2008, 04:22:52 PM »
good one Sonia
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«Reply #13 on: January 01, 2009, 12:31:43 AM »
Quote from: Sonia01 on December 31, 2008, 04:06:30 PM
pyar ke badle pyar nishani ke badle nishani mangti hu
tu bewafa nahi hai ye bhi mai acchi tarah janti hu
magar kya kare kiya hai juda hum ko us khuda ne
unki badli nazron ko bi ab mein pechanti hu..

Apna sukoon apna karar apni khushi apne armaan
Sab kuch to de diya tumhe ab aur kya nishani de
Yeh duniya yeh daulat tere kadmo me karu nichawar
Bas aur kuch nahi GHAYEL ko teri do pal ki zindagani de
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