hath ki lakeer

by saahill on January 30, 2011, 10:32:01 AM

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saahill

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mere pyar ke afsaane par jo kheench gaye inkaar ki lakeer
kabhi humne unko samjh liya tha saat janam ki taqdeer


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Re: hath ki lakeer

«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2011, 07:19:05 PM »

ye bhi achha hai Sahil.
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achha Sahil bhai saab ek baat puch lu to bura na manna plzz-- kya aapka dil kisi ne bahut hi buri tarah tod dia hai? aap usko bhul nai paa rahe kya?
aapke nagmo me bas pyar hi pyar hota hai--kabhi toota dia, dard, tanhai, ansu ufff .
aapko kuch alg topich par likhna chahiye taaki aap apne Sadme se Ubar saken.
well--agr meri baat ka bura laga ho to I M sorrY--
wese bhai pyar karnewalo ke baare me meko kya pta--patthar dil hun mai to Usual Smile

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thanx
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saahill

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Re: hath ki lakeer

«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2011, 12:58:22 AM »

Thx nirala bhai apka muje APki
Baat achi lagi wase mera dil kisi ne nai torha hai


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Re: hath ki lakeer

«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2011, 06:47:30 AM »

kisi ne nahi toda to thk hai Usual Smile

mazak thode na hai ki koi bhi aise hi tid jaaye Usual Smile

aapne bura nahi maana fir achha laga meko Usual Smile


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Re: hath ki lakeer

«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2011, 07:01:55 AM »

bht khub saahil ji..mast hain aapki ye 2 lines....

nirala ji achch apakda aapne saahil ji ko..bht dard bhara likhte hain ye..ab kuch khushi wala likhenge...


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Re: hath ki lakeer

«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2011, 07:20:28 AM »

humne to Manju se bhi ekaadh Khusi wale geet likhwa liya ab Sahil ki baari hai. Usual Smile

Saahil ji start kar hi do ab koi Muskurata hua nagma--
ab to public demand ho gai Usual Smile


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Re: hath ki lakeer

«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2011, 09:41:23 AM »

apki farmaish sur ankhon par


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saahill

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Re: hath ki lakeer

«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2011, 09:45:04 AM »

nirala ji apne meri likhe geet ghazal nai parhe 3
4 din pehle warna ap shikayat nai kartey ke main dard hi likhta hon chaliye apke liye romantic likh dete hain


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nirala

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Re: hath ki lakeer

«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2011, 09:48:05 AM »

haan jaldi likhiye aap khushi ke geet
fir hum dard par try marenge wo bhi masti ke saath Usual Smile


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Re: hath ki lakeer

«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2011, 10:00:59 AM »

wah really hart touch 2 line s


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saahill

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Re: hath ki lakeer

«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2011, 10:19:45 AM »

aaye ho meri zindagi mein bankar tum bahaar ke dil mein phool khiley . Aankhon ka aankhon se hua izhaar ke dil se dil miley . Teri hasee mein na jane kya hai ke hum to lut hi gaye. Baton mein teri kaisa nasha hai ke pyar mein sambhalkar chaley