Hawa-- ek dost yaadon ka~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on May 26, 2009, 02:30:34 PM
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behti huyi hawa aaj thehri hai paas mere
bahut dino k baad koi milne aaya hai
shayad kissii ne di hogi khabar meri
isliye yeh mera dard sunne aaya hai

kabhi iske paron par beith kar
maine oose jhoola jhoolaya tha
kabhi sard raaton main beith
angithi se le bhutta khya tha

woh beete pal ab dastak dene nahin aate
maine kitne baar darwaja apna unke liye khulwaya tha
shayad kucch majboori rahi hogi oonki bhi
warna apna har vaada oosne nibhaya tha

aayi hai mere ghar ab tu ae hawa
toh dil woh gujre lamhe yaad karta hai
woh nahin rahi mere saath ab
par dil sirf usko yaad karta hai

ae mere dost chal tujhe le chalta hoon ghar apne
kii ab in galiyon ka soona pan , mujhe khalta hai
tu hi tha sang mere jab woh paas tha "saahil "
ab uske baad yeh dil sirf tujhse hi baatein karta hai
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angel4u
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«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2009, 02:36:20 PM »
Bahut khoobsurat likha hia Salil as usual.
Love to read your poems.. Usual Smile
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2009, 04:54:59 PM »
Bahut khoob Salil ji... Nice creation  Thumbs UP
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salil2002
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2009, 10:16:18 AM »
Quote from: {Angel} on May 26, 2009, 02:36:20 PM
Bahut khoobsurat likha hia Salil as usual.
Love to read your poems.. Usual Smile
Quote from: Roja on May 26, 2009, 04:54:59 PM
Bahut khoob Salil ji... Nice creation  Thumbs UP
thanks roja and huzena
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«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2009, 10:20:02 AM »
Mashallah bohat Achcha Likha Hai Salil Bhai.
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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2009, 05:01:53 AM »
Bahut khoob Salil Ji, Applause  Applause

Kaash ki mein u magroor na hoti,
Dosti aur farz me se ek ko chunne ko majboor na hoti,

Tujhe khona hi meri zindagi ki haar hai,
Hoti beshak ruswayi magar ye judayi na hoti,

Agar bhul jaana mujhe hi teri khushi thi,
To kaash ki mein bhi har pal tujhe yaad kar royi na hoti.

Shally.
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2009, 05:58:09 AM »
very very nice sallil ji and shally ji.excellent. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: May 28, 2009, 06:49:18 AM »
wah Mere Bhai.. Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawab.. Aapki Qalam Ka to Andaaz Hi Niraala hai dost. Subse alag hatt ke.. Bahut Khoooooooooob Humesha Ki tarah.. Applause Applause


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k.shael
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«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2009, 06:51:22 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on May 28, 2009, 05:58:09 AM
very very nice sallil ji and shally ji.excellent. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Madhuwesh Ji,

Shally.
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honeyrose
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«Reply #9 on: May 28, 2009, 08:07:51 AM »
Quote from: salil2002 on May 26, 2009, 02:30:34 PM
behti huyi hawa aaj thehri hai paas mere
bahut dino k baad koi milne aaya hai
shayad kissii ne di hogi khabar meri
isliye yeh mera dard sunne aaya hai

kabhi iske paron par beith kar
maine oose jhoola jhoolaya tha
kabhi sard raaton main beith
angithi se le bhutta khya tha

woh beete pal ab dastak dene nahin aate
maine kitne baar darwaja apna unke liye khulwaya tha
shayad kucch majboori rahi hogi oonki bhi
warna apna har vaada oosne nibhaya tha

aayi hai mere ghar ab tu ae hawa
toh dil woh gujre lamhe yaad karta hai
woh nahin rahi mere saath ab
par dil sirf usko yaad karta hai

ae mere dost chal tujhe le chalta hoon ghar apne
kii ab in galiyon ka soona pan , mujhe khalta hai
tu hi tha sang mere jab woh paas tha "saahil "
ab uske baad yeh dil sirf tujhse hi baatein karta hai

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohat khoob salil bro... Thumbs UP
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honeyrose
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«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2009, 08:28:26 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on May 28, 2009, 05:01:53 AM
Bahut khoob Salil Ji, Applause  Applause

Kaash ki mein u magroor na hoti,
Dosti aur farz me se ek ko chunne ko majboor na hoti,

Tujhe khona hi meri zindagi ki haar hai,
Hoti beshak ruswayi magar ye judayi na hoti,

Agar bhul jaana mujhe hi teri khushi thi,
To kaash ki mein bhi har pal tujhe yaad kar royi na hoti.

Shally.

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wonderfull reply shally bohat khoob... Thumbs UP
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k.shael
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«Reply #11 on: May 28, 2009, 08:29:50 AM »
Quote from: honeyrose on May 28, 2009, 08:28:26 AM
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wonderfull reply shally bohat khoob... Thumbs UP

Shukriya honey didi,

Shally.
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Talat
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«Reply #12 on: May 28, 2009, 10:21:14 AM »
Quote from: salil2002 on May 26, 2009, 02:30:34 PM
behti huyi hawa aaj thehri hai paas mere
bahut dino k baad koi milne aaya hai
shayad kissii ne di hogi khabar meri
isliye yeh mera dard sunne aaya hai

kabhi iske paron par beith kar
maine oose jhoola jhoolaya tha
kabhi sard raaton main beith
angithi se le bhutta khya tha

woh beete pal ab dastak dene nahin aate
maine kitne baar darwaja apna unke liye khulwaya tha
shayad kucch majboori rahi hogi oonki bhi
warna apna har vaada oosne nibhaya tha

aayi hai mere ghar ab tu ae hawa
toh dil woh gujre lamhe yaad karta hai
woh nahin rahi mere saath ab
par dil sirf usko yaad karta hai

ae mere dost chal tujhe le chalta hoon ghar apne
kii ab in galiyon ka soona pan , mujhe khalta hai
tu hi tha sang mere jab woh paas tha "saahil "
ab uske baad yeh dil sirf tujhse hi baatein karta hai

Humesha ki tarah khoobsurat creation....Bohot Khoob Salil
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chand79
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«Reply #13 on: May 28, 2009, 11:56:42 AM »
boht khoob dost
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salil2002
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«Reply #14 on: July 01, 2009, 06:42:00 AM »
thnks a lot shally dear and a nice reply from u
thanks talat di,madhu, vicky bbhai, honey di and chand
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