Hawa kay waastay ek kaam cHoR aaya hooN:Shayri-E-Dard

manu1979

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hello freinds after a long time of 1 month i m giong to post here something that may be perfect in itself.it is up to u to decide whether is it perfect or not.I expect that e'body will like the same. if any suggetions , most welcome.

Hawa kay waastay ek kaam cHoR aaya hooN
Mai Diya jala k sar-e-shaam cHoR aaya hooN

AmaanteY shahar-o-shaam cHor aaya hooN
Mai Kahi charaag kahi jam cHor aaya hooN

Kabhi Naseeb ho agar fursat to use padh lena
Voh ek khat jo tere naam cHor aaya hooN

Key Koi charaag sar-e-rahgujar nahi na sahi
Mai naksh-e-paak hargaam cHor aaya hooN

Abhi to aur bhi bahut us par tafsire* hoNge
Mai goofTagu maiN Jo Ibhaam* cHor aaya hooN

Ab vahaa se kadam bhi na badh sakenge aage
Mai jahaaN gardish-e-ayaam* cHor aaya hooN

Key cHain se ji saku kabra mai kazaa* aane ke bad
Tere ishq ki manzileN nakaam cHor ayaa hooN

MujHe jo dhoondhNa cHaahe vo dhoondh le jaaye
Apne kucche ab mai gumNaam cHor aaya hooN

Tafsire=criticism
Ibhaam=secret talks
gardish-e-ayaam=ternd of day and night( time)
Kaza = death


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ranjana

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Hawa kay waastay ek kaam cHoR aaya hooN

«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2006, 02:22:09 AM »

manu bahut dino ke baad aapka likha pada ....bahut hi sunder likha hai aapne ...... Usual Smile


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upma

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Hawa kay waastay ek kaam cHoR aaya hooN

«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2006, 04:20:24 AM »

a touching n beautiful creation!!!


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badnaam_shayar

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Hawa kay waastay ek kaam cHoR aaya hooN

«Reply #3 on: July 13, 2006, 04:23:39 AM »

Wonderfull Manu ji.... Usual Smile


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manu1979

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«Reply #4 on: July 13, 2006, 08:22:57 PM »

thanx ranju ,tumne padha mujhe uske liye tumaara dhanyavaad karta hu
aise hi saath deti rahogi yahi ummid karta hoon

regards
manu


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badnaam_shayar

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Re: Hawa kay waastay ek kaam cHoR aaya hooN

«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2006, 04:17:13 AM »

Quote from: "manu1979"

hello freinds after a long time of 1 month i m giong to post here something that may be perfect in itself.it is up to you to decide whether is it perfect or not.I expect that e'body will like the same. if any suggetions , most welcome.

Hawa kay waastay ek kaam cHoR aaya hooN
Mai Diya jala k sar-e-shaam cHoR aaya hooN

AmaanteY shahar-o-shaam cHor aaya hooN
Mai Kahi charaag kahi jam cHor aaya hooN

Kabhi Naseeb ho agar fursat to use padh lena
Voh ek khat jo tere naam cHor aaya hooN

Key Koi charaag sar-e-rahgujar nahi na sahi
Mai naksh-e-paak hargaam cHor aaya hooN

Abhi to aur bhi bahut us par tafsire* hoNge
Mai goofTagu maiN Jo Ibhaam* cHor aaya hooN

Ab vahaa se kadam bhi na badh sakenge aage
Mai jahaaN gardish-e-ayaam* cHor aaya hooN

Key cHain se ji saku kabra mai kazaa* aane ke bad
Tere ishq ki manzileN nakaam cHor ayaa hooN

MujHe jo dhoondhNa cHaahe vo dhoondh le jaaye
Apne kucche ab mai gumNaam cHor aaya hooN

Tafsire=criticism
Ibhaam=secret talks
gardish-e-ayaam=ternd of day and night( time)
Kaza = death

Bahut acche Manu ji....Baar baar padne ka mann karta hai..Superb


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manu1979

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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2006, 07:17:51 PM »

hello badnaam shayar ji aap ka bahut bahut shukriya
meri ek kavia hai jo adhoori hai mai cahahta hu aap puri kar do, mujhe dubara padhane ke liye tumaara shukriya

Mere rooh ke jakhmo par tere aansu marham ban jaaye
Jakham se bahate lahu ka katra katra shabnam ho jaye

Aa chhupa le baaho mai , teri vafaa se shukun mile
Mere gam ki khalish shayad kuchh der to kam ho jaaye

Chand lamhe thahar jaao ke jee bhar kar dekhu tumhe
Khwaab tere in aankho mai kuchh der to tham jaaye

Chand lamhe thahar jaao ke jee bhar kar dekhu tumhe
Khwaab tere in aankho mai kuchh der to jam jaaye

regards
manu


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nikki

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Hawa kay waastay ek kaam cHoR aaya hooN

«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2006, 08:41:13 PM »

hello everyone...bahut dino baad aayi hun aur aate hi itna acha padhne ko mila.....thats amazing Manu ji....maza aa gaya padh kar...it feels like everymoment went through my eyes...keep posting such nice work.


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manu1979

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«Reply #8 on: July 17, 2006, 07:58:27 PM »

nikki ji aap ko kaafi samat baad dekha meri post par ,anyway aap ne saath diya mera ye khushi ki baat hai ,aur aap ko yaha dekh kar tasalli hui,yunhi aate rahiyega

regards
manu


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manu1979

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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2006, 07:44:16 PM »

WO PhIR AAYEGEE HUM SE MILNE, EK AAS LAGA BETHA HOON
USE MERi MUHABAT KHiNCH LAAYEGEE, EK AAS LAGA BETHA HOON

US KE CHEhRE PER LEHaR E TARANUM DEKNE KE LEYE TARASTE RAHE
WO HANSTEE HuYEE LOuT AAYEGEE, EK AAS LAGA BETHA HOON

MEREE UJdE Hue ZINDAGEE MAIN THEE US KEE MUHABAT
SHAYAD WO PIR SE MAAN JAAYE, EK AAS LAGA BETHA HOON

MEREE EK ANJAAN KHATA NE USE MUJ SE KER DEYA DOOR
KIA WO DAR GUZAR KER DE GEE, EK AAS LAGA BETHA HOON

EK KHATA PER KISI KO CHORNA, KAHAN KA HE ASOOL E HUSSAIN
US KEE TARAH MUJE APNEE MOT KA INTAZAR HE, EK AAS LAGA BETHA


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phoenix

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Hawa kay waastay ek kaam cHoR aaya hooN

«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2006, 07:55:12 PM »

bahut aache manu ji


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manu1979

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«Reply #11 on: July 18, 2006, 08:00:38 PM »

phoenix ji ap ko yaha dekh kar khushi hui paish-e-khidmat hai chand maukhtsar sher

Utray jo zindagi teri gehraiyon mai hum
Mehfil mai reh kay bhi rahay tanhayon mai hum
Deewanagi nahin to or kya kahain
Insaan dhoundtay rahay parchaiyon mai hum

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regards
manu[/b]


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phoenix

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Hawa kay waastay ek kaam cHoR aaya hooN

«Reply #12 on: July 18, 2006, 08:07:14 PM »

reh jaoge tanhayion mein tum bhi
na pado raah e ishq mein is kadar se
na majhi milega na mauje milegi
har lamha zinda mazak ban jaoge


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manu1979

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«Reply #13 on: July 18, 2006, 08:12:49 PM »

aur kitnay zakhm khaengay ham
tu khush hay bass isi khushi main marr jaengay ham

teri dunya tujhe mubarak ho janaa
ye na kehna kay tujhe yaad aaengay ham

gae dinoo ki yadein bhula daina tum bhi
jo ho saka to tum ko bhool jaengay ham

ab iske siwa koi chaara bhi nahi hay
kia karen dil ko kaise samjhaengay ham

apnay in aansowo ki qasam hay manu
ab na kisi say wafa kar paengay ham


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Pooja

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Hawa kay waastay ek kaam cHoR aaya hooN

«Reply #14 on: July 18, 2006, 08:33:05 PM »

Bahoot hi khoobsurat likha hai manu ji... kamal.. ek ek shbad dil ko chu gaya....

Umar gujaar di bas ek aas mai
Tadapti rahi bas issi ek payaas main
Samjh kar kabhi, shayad wo lout ayye
Kitna karati hu payaar, yah samjh jaaye

Aas thi, ass hai, ass rahegi
Umarbhar shayad yahi payaas rahegi
Anjaan wo umarbhar muje rulayega
Kitna karati hu usse payaar,
Na shayd wo kabhi jaan payega!!!


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