*_*Hawale Ker Diya Maut Ke*_*

by baadal102 on November 13, 2008, 01:04:17 PM
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Laga ke khud ke ghar ko aag,
Chal diya mai muh maud ke,

Na rakha kuch bhi apne pass,
Khudko hawale ker diya maut ke,

Sajaya tha jin khato ko lahu se,
Bana diya rakh, aaj khud jala ke,

Jin haatho ne kalam di thi hume,
Wo tod di, aaj khud ke hatho se,

Karke aitbaar ankh rakhi hamesha nam,
Sahe har sitam, sirf un ke naam se,

Mile jab hume wo ajnabi ke banho mai,
Tuta har khawab, jise joda tha dil se,

Nahi reh paayenge hum aleke tanha,
Issliye khud ko duboya khud ke lahu se,

Laga ke khud ke ghar ko aag,
Khudko hawale ker diya maut ke...............





Baadal
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MHussain
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«Reply #1 on: November 13, 2008, 01:43:05 PM »
behtreen namuna hai

maut bhi khafa hai
dildaar bewafa hai
jab jee raha bemaut
zindagi ne di saza hai
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honeyrose
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«Reply #2 on: November 13, 2008, 02:09:42 PM »
Baadal ji bohat khoob likha hai aapne.... Applause
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baadal102
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«Reply #3 on: November 13, 2008, 03:50:55 PM »
thanx a lot honey ji




Baadal
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #4 on: November 13, 2008, 03:57:04 PM »
Nice work baadal  Applause
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dead heart
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«Reply #5 on: November 13, 2008, 07:09:11 PM »
hmm showing the pic n then riting....superb idea and superb words...
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: November 13, 2008, 07:20:57 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wah kaya baat hai baadal ji!! Bahoot khoob!!
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #7 on: November 14, 2008, 01:17:47 AM »
Beshak sulagte hue ash'ar hain sulagti hui tasweer ke saath, bohot khoob baadal ji.  Applause
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k.shael
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«Reply #8 on: November 14, 2008, 04:51:18 AM »
 Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB BAADAL JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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baadal102
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«Reply #9 on: November 14, 2008, 06:20:53 AM »
aap sabhi ka bahut bahut sukriya
thanx a lot
sajid ji
heart ji
pooja ji
randeri ji
shally ji





Baadal
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: November 14, 2008, 12:37:35 PM »
Bohot Khoob Baadal  icon_thumleft
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Shikha12
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«Reply #11 on: November 14, 2008, 12:44:16 PM »
Very Sentimental.. and Very Touching Work Baadal Ji..
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Sonia01
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«Reply #12 on: November 14, 2008, 01:09:45 PM »
wonderful badal jii aapne bahut accha likha hai  Applause
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«Reply #13 on: November 14, 2008, 03:08:33 PM »
great work badaal!

maut aaye tho marna padrayga... k ye sub waqee chodr k jaana chaahtay ho?...
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«Reply #14 on: November 15, 2008, 12:42:23 PM »
thanx a lot
celmira ji
mahiya ji
sonia ji
dhadkan ji






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