~Hisab De~

by Sonia01 on June 28, 2008, 03:45:32 PM
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kabhi dil, kabhi dimaag, kabhi nazar me raho
yeh sabhi tumhara ghar hai, kahi bhi raho

zuba to khol,nazar to mila, jawab to de
mein kitni baar luti hu, hisaab to de

ab gham aya, khushi aya, maut aya ya tu aya
mai ne to aahat pai aur darwaza khol diya
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«Reply #1 on: June 29, 2008, 03:39:24 AM »
Quote from: Sonia01 on June 28, 2008, 03:45:32 PM
kabhi dil, kabhi dimaag, kabhi nazar me raho
yeh sabhi tumhara ghar hai, kahi bhi raho

zuba to khol,nazar to mila, jawab to de
mein kitni baar luti hu, hisaab to de

ab gham aya, khushi aya, maut aya ya tu aya
mai ne to aahat pai aur darwaza khol diya

wah...wah....wah bahoot khoob likha hai aapne.....
bilkul nayee or behtreen rachna.....

netra...
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«Reply #2 on: June 29, 2008, 10:26:31 AM »
Waah Ji Waah Kya Likha Hai aapne,.
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«Reply #3 on: June 29, 2008, 10:33:02 AM »
Quote from: Sonia01 on June 28, 2008, 03:45:32 PM
kabhi dil, kabhi dimaag, kabhi nazar me raho
yeh sabhi tumhara ghar hai, kahi bhi raho

zuba to khol,nazar to mila, jawab to de
mein kitni baar luti hu, hisaab to de

ab gham aya, khushi aya, maut aya ya tu aya
mai ne to aahat pai aur darwaza khol diya

Hoon Main Tumhaare Dil-o-Jigar Mein,.
Afsos Ke Tumhe Is Baat Ki Khabar Nahi,.

Ghar Hai Mera Veeraan Dil "Sonia,".
Ranaukh-e-Dil Mein Mera Koi Ghar Nahi,.

Hisaab Mohabbat Mein Kaun Karta Hai,.
Mohabbat Ki Ek Jhalak Ke Liye Ye Aashiq To Marta Hai,.

_________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #4 on: June 29, 2008, 07:08:25 PM »
Quote from: Sonia01 on June 28, 2008, 03:45:32 PM
kabhi dil, kabhi dimaag, kabhi nazar me raho
yeh sabhi tumhara ghar hai, kahi bhi raho

zuba to khol,nazar to mila, jawab to de
mein kitni baar luti hu, hisaab to de

ab gham aya, khushi aya, maut aya ya tu aya
mai ne to aahat pai aur darwaza khol diya

wah ye to naya andaaz he nazm kehne ka, padh kar achha laga.

or jaanasheen ji ne dil nasheen nadaaz me'n umda likha he.
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«Reply #5 on: June 29, 2008, 07:15:59 PM »
Wow......... Fabulous Sonia Di....nd Azeem Bro great reply!!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 30, 2008, 12:09:19 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on June 29, 2008, 10:33:02 AM
Hoon Main Tumhaare Dil-o-Jigar Mein,.
Afsos Ke Tumhe Is Baat Ki Khabar Nahi,.

Ghar Hai Mera Veeraan Dil "Sonia,".
Ranaukh-e-Dil Mein Mera Koi Ghar Nahi,.

Hisaab Mohabbat Mein Kaun Karta Hai,.
Mohabbat Ki Ek Jhalak Ke Liye Ye Aashiq Lo Marta Hai,.

_________________________________-Jaanasheen-


  Chiiti Likh Kai Ya Awaaz Deh Kai Kabhi Kehthai
   Thab Humko Khabar Mil Thi Na,

   Jis Ghar Mein Ranaukh Nahin
    Woh Ghar Nahin Makaan Hai,

  Ahho Saath Humari Or Bana Deh Gai Hum
   Appkai Makaan Koh Bhi Ek Ghar,

 Humko Hisaab Chahiye Appni Mohabbat Ka
 Teri Mohabbat Mein, Nahin Chahiye Mujko Sirf Ek Khali Makaan...............
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«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2008, 01:02:46 PM »
Shukriya palkhi Sis,.
Nice One again,.
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«Reply #8 on: June 30, 2008, 09:02:14 PM »
wah bahoot khoob Sonia, Lil bro and Palkhi!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 01, 2008, 01:47:53 AM »
Teinku Azeem Bro nd Pooja DI........
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«Reply #10 on: July 02, 2008, 01:02:16 PM »
U Are Welcome Palkhi Sis,.

Jaane Kyun Wo Humse Apni Mohabbat ka Hisaab Maangte Hain,.
Khabar Hai Unhe Ujdi Bahaar Hai Meri Phir Kyun Gulaab Maangte Hain,.

Ab To Haddein Paar kardi Unhone Maang Ne Ki "Azeem",.
Dekhe The Jo Milkar Kabhi Hum Raaton Mein, Ab Wo Khwaab Maangte Hain,.

________________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #11 on: July 04, 2008, 03:04:42 AM »
Bahut bahut shukhriya

Netra jee, Jaanasheen bhaiya, Pooja didi, Palkhi dear ..

Lovely lines Jaanasheen bhaiya, bahut bahut shukhriya aapne kuch likha hamre thread main.

Netra jee, Pooja didi and palkhi kyu aap ne nahi likha? 
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«Reply #12 on: July 04, 2008, 01:36:11 PM »
Its All Your Affection Yaar,.
that Made me To Write,.
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«Reply #13 on: July 04, 2008, 01:38:55 PM »
Aye Dost Tu Mujhe Toote Hue Khwaab Na De,.
Thi Jo Bebas Mohabbat Meri, Uska Ab Hisaab Na De,.

Kaante Hi Paaye Hain Maine, Aas Bahaar Ki Rakhke,.
Zakham Jo Pahoonchaaye Dil Ko Mere Aise Gulaab Na De,.

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«Reply #14 on: July 05, 2008, 04:16:12 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on July 04, 2008, 01:38:55 PM
Aye Dost Tu Mujhe Toote Hue Khwaab Na De,.
Thi Jo Bebas Mohabbat Meri, Uska Ab Hisaab Na De,.

Kaante Hi Paaye Hain Maine, Aas Bahaar Ki Rakhke,.
Zakham Jo Pahoonchaaye Dil Ko Mere Aise Gulaab Na De,.

________________________________-Jaanasheen-


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