Hisab lene aayega........(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on March 11, 2009, 07:33:08 AM
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sajid_ghayel
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Jo main kehdu kya tu samajh jayega
Itna kareeb tu kaha mere aayega

Tujhse door chala jaoo par koi fayda nahi
Har baar laut aaooga tu jab mujhe bulayga

Pal bhar ki khushi tha tera aana
Kya maloom tha tera jana, umr bhar rulayaga

Wafa dedi khushi dedi jaan bhi dedi
Mera pass mera kuch bacha nahi, tu ab kya aazmayga

Tu jitna achcha likhe, jitna likhe GHAYEL
Tera hunar teri ada, koi pehchaan nahi payega

Socha the marke chain se soyege kabr me
Lekin suna hain waha bhi, koi hisab lene aayega

-Sajid Ghayel-
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: March 11, 2009, 07:49:28 AM »
mujjhe kiun nahi aati aap ki tarah shayari,
kitna badhiya likha aap ne,
very nice n lovely,
plizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz,4give me.
madhuwesh.
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chitralsony
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«Reply #2 on: March 11, 2009, 09:10:33 AM »
bhot khob ghayel ji ,
 
     tu apnay gird hisaar itnay na bandh janaa
     kay koyi chah kr be onhay na paar krsakay
     
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: March 11, 2009, 10:39:21 AM »
Bohot Khoob hi Sajid Ji...liked this one a lot...!!

Taiba Ji, aapne ek sher main bohot hu gehri baat keh di..Bohot khoob !!
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roomaharis
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«Reply #4 on: March 11, 2009, 11:11:47 AM »
Is Zamane Sey Na Hum Koi Gilaa Rakhain Gay
Dil Lagayein Gay To Na Shart-E-Wafa Rakhain Gay

Na Dikhayain Gay Kabhi Dil Pe Lage Zakhm Unhain
Dard Uthey Ga Magar Dil Ko Daba Rakhain Gay

Jaan De Daingein Agar Aik Ishaara Kar De
Ham Usey Apne Liye Bhi Na Bacha Rakhain Gay

Sab Hata Daingay Teri Raah Ki Rukawat Hamdam
Ghar Ke Darwazey Ko Har Waqt Khula Rakhain Gay

Unki Har Baat Ko Bhooley Se Na Bhoolain Gein Kabhi
Unki Yadoon Ko Bhi Seenay Se Laga Rakhain Gay

Toot Bhi Jaayegi Umeed Jo Tere Aanay Ki "Mishal"
Ek Diya Phir Bhi Hawaaon Main Jala Rakhain Ga

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«Reply #5 on: March 11, 2009, 11:39:51 AM »
Bohat Bohat Achche Ghayel Bhai, Kamal Ka Likha Hai,.
\Waise Mere Bhai, Hum ne To Aapna Likha Pardha Hai,.

Aapko Aitraaz Kais,a.
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #6 on: March 11, 2009, 12:12:16 PM »
teri hunar teri ada ke sadke
tu likh, likh aur likhta hi jaaa
hai jashn sa mahaul teri duniya me ae dost
jo ho sake kabhi hume bhi bulaa.
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #7 on: March 11, 2009, 09:18:48 PM »
Arey wah,kiya khoob likha hai sajid ji,waise kitna bhi dhoor chale jana par mai bhi hisaab lene zaroor ayenge.
very nice,
madhuwesh  Winking
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #8 on: March 12, 2009, 03:30:39 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on March 11, 2009, 07:49:28 AM
mujjhe kiun nahi aati aap ki tarah shayari,
kitna badhiya likha aap ne,
very nice n lovely,
plizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz,4give me.
madhuwesh.

Quote from: madhuwesh on March 11, 2009, 09:18:48 PM
Arey wah,kiya khoob likha hai sajid ji,waise kitna bhi dhoor chale jana par mai bhi hisaab lene zaroor ayenge.
very nice,
madhuwesh  Winking


Thank You so much madhu for ur love and freindship......well if you cannot do shayri like me i cannot talk as sweet as you.  Winking
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #9 on: March 12, 2009, 03:33:38 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on March 11, 2009, 10:39:21 AM
Bohot Khoob hi Sajid Ji...liked this one a lot...!!

Taiba Ji, aapne ek sher main bohot hu gehri baat keh di..Bohot khoob !!

Thank You so much Talat.....well if u dont mind i would always love to know the sher you liked the most, it would really helped me a lot.
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #10 on: March 12, 2009, 03:35:11 AM »
Quote from: roomaharis on March 11, 2009, 11:11:47 AM
Is Zamane Sey Na Hum Koi Gilaa Rakhain Gay
Dil Lagayein Gay To Na Shart-E-Wafa Rakhain Gay

Na Dikhayain Gay Kabhi Dil Pe Lage Zakhm Unhain
Dard Uthey Ga Magar Dil Ko Daba Rakhain Gay

Jaan De Daingein Agar Aik Ishaara Kar De
Ham Usey Apne Liye Bhi Na Bacha Rakhain Gay

Sab Hata Daingay Teri Raah Ki Rukawat Hamdam
Ghar Ke Darwazey Ko Har Waqt Khula Rakhain Gay

Unki Har Baat Ko Bhooley Se Na Bhoolain Gein Kabhi
Unki Yadoon Ko Bhi Seenay Se Laga Rakhain Gay

Toot Bhi Jaayegi Umeed Jo Tere Aanay Ki "Mishal"
Ek Diya Phir Bhi Hawaaon Main Jala Rakhain Ga

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Thanks for sharing this beautiful work on my thread.........
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«Reply #11 on: March 12, 2009, 03:42:27 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 11, 2009, 11:39:51 AM
Bohat Bohat Achche Ghayel Bhai, Kamal Ka Likha Hai,.
\Waise Mere Bhai, Hum ne To Aapna Likha Pardha Hai,.

Aapko Aitraaz Kais,a.

Bohat shukriyaa Chote aur tumse kabhi main koi aitraaz karu aisa ho sakta hain kya.......... DOH
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«Reply #12 on: March 12, 2009, 03:49:10 AM »
Quote from: jannatjahan on March 11, 2009, 12:12:16 PM
teri hunar teri ada ke sadke
tu likh, likh aur likhta hi jaaa
hai jashn sa mahaul teri duniya me ae dost
jo ho sake kabhi hume bhi bulaa.

Bohat jhoom ke mayusi meri duniya me JASHN manati hain
Zakhm GHAYEL ke karte hain tamasha aur dard ko hasi aati hain

-SG-
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«Reply #13 on: March 12, 2009, 03:53:18 AM »
Quote from: chitralsony on March 11, 2009, 09:10:33 AM
bhot khob ghayel ji ,
 
     tu apnay gird hisaar itnay na bandh janaa
     kay koyi chah kr be onhay na paar krsakay
     

Bohat Shukriyaan Taiba.......Aur jaisa Celmira ne kaha tumne bohat gehri baat kahi hain. Is sher ke liye karodo dad kabool ho.
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #14 on: March 12, 2009, 05:53:46 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 12, 2009, 03:49:10 AM
Bohat jhoom ke mayusi meri duniya me JASHN manati hain
Zakhm GHAYEL ke karte hain tamasha aur dard ko hasi aati hain

-SG-
Apne dard me mujhe sareek karke dekh
sayad mere jakham ko humsafar mil jaye
kya pata aisa bhi ho ki
maayusi ki mehfil me jaan aa jaye.
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