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«Reply #15 on: May 08, 2005, 01:07:40 AM » |
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Dil pe choat pari tau, nikal pare aansoo
Kisi ki yaad barhi tau, nikal pare aansoo
Bohat sanmbhaal ke rakha tha hum ne unn ko par
Dilon pe os pari tau, nikal pare aansoo
Tamaam umr kati paanion se larte huwe
Bhanwar mein naao phassi tau nikal pare aansoo
Jisey samajhte rahe QehQahon ki maala hum
Wohi kitaab parhi tau nikal pare aansoo
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«Reply #16 on: May 08, 2005, 01:45:18 AM » |
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Dil pe choat pari tau, nikal pare aansoo
Kisi ki yaad barhi tau, nikal pare aansoo
Bohat sanmbhaal ke rakha tha hum ne unn ko par
Dilon pe os pari tau, nikal pare aansoo
Tamaam umr kati paanion se larte huwe
Bhanwar mein naao phassi tau nikal pare aansoo
Jisey samajhte rahe QehQahon ki maala hum
Wohi kitaab parhi tau nikal pare aansoo Aryaan..yeh bhi apki doosri kawitaon ki tarha bohut hi achi hai.. |
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«Reply #17 on: May 08, 2005, 07:06:36 AM » |
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Bhatke hain roshni ki talaash mein na jaane kahan kahan
Afsos ke apni rooh ke ander nahi dekha....wah wah kya khoob Aryan....so touching
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Aryaan
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«Reply #18 on: May 08, 2005, 05:39:08 PM » |
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Bhatke hain roshni ki talaash mein na jaane kahan kahan
Afsos ke apni rooh ke ander nahi dekha....wah wah kya khoob Aryan....so touching Thanks Isha & Jalpari....... |
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«Reply #19 on: May 08, 2005, 08:37:28 PM » |
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Honton pe hansi dekh li, dil ke ander nahi dekha
Yaaron ne mere gham ka samander nahi dekha
Kitni haseen hai duniya ye dekha hai aap ne
Marr marr ke jeene walon ka manzar nahi dekha
Sheeshe ka makaan tumne bana tau liya aye dost
Lekin waQt ke haath ka pathar nahi dekha
Rishton ke toot-ne ka dard aap kya samjhein
Woh lamha kabhi aap ne jee kar nahi dekha
Bhatke hain roshni ki talaash mein na jaane kahan kahan
Afsos ke apni rooh ke ander nahi dekha.... Another jem Aryaan...
Apke shayrii sir annkoun per
Always Anjli |
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«Reply #20 on: May 09, 2005, 02:39:45 AM » |
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Honton pe hansi dekh li, dil ke ander nahi dekha
Yaaron ne mere gham ka samander nahi dekha
Kitni haseen hai duniya ye dekha hai aap ne
Marr marr ke jeene walon ka manzar nahi dekha
Sheeshe ka makaan tumne bana tau liya aye dost
Lekin waQt ke haath ka pathar nahi dekha
Rishton ke toot-ne ka dard aap kya samjhein
Woh lamha kabhi aap ne jee kar nahi dekha
Bhatke hain roshni ki talaash mein na jaane kahan kahan
Afsos ke apni rooh ke ander nahi dekha.... Another jem Aryaan...
Apke shayrii sir annkoun per
Always AnjliShukriya Anjli.....aur aapki "daad" sarr aankhon par....  |
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«Reply #21 on: May 09, 2005, 03:02:35 AM » |
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zindagi bahut khubsoorat hai ....
yakeen to kar ke dekho
na manna hai to koi baat nahi ...
khud ko jala kar to dekho
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«Reply #22 on: June 04, 2005, 03:09:33 PM » |
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Bhool gaya gham de ke mujhe jo
Main kyun uss ko yaad karoon
Main kyun uss ke pyar ki khaatir
Apna dil barbaad karoon
Jab uss ko mere gham ka ehsaas nahi
Pyar ki aahon ka harr aansu
Banta nahi hai taaj mehal
Qismat jinke sath ho unko
Milta hai chahat ka badal
Par aisi Qismat hi, mere paas nahi...
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«Reply #23 on: June 04, 2005, 03:21:57 PM » |
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Honton pe hansi dekh li, dil ke ander nahi dekha
Yaaron ne mere gham ka samander nahi dekha
Kitni haseen hai duniya ye dekha hai aap ne
Marr marr ke jeene walon ka manzar nahi dekha
Sheeshe ka makaan tumne bana tau liya aye dost
Lekin waQt ke haath ka pathar nahi dekha
Rishton ke toot-ne ka dard aap kya samjhein
Woh lamha kabhi aap ne jee kar nahi dekha
Bhatke hain roshni ki talaash mein na jaane kahan kahan
Afsos ke apni rooh ke ander nahi dekha.... Aryaan it's really good |
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«Reply #24 on: June 04, 2005, 03:55:53 PM » |
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Naveed n Aryan ji u both write really good!!!! :wink:
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«Reply #25 on: June 04, 2005, 04:00:41 PM » |
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Honton pe hansi dekh li, dil ke ander nahi dekha
Yaaron ne mere gham ka samander nahi dekha
Kitni haseen hai duniya ye dekha hai aap ne
Marr marr ke jeene walon ka manzar nahi dekha
Sheeshe ka makaan tumne bana tau liya aye dost
Lekin waQt ke haath ka pathar nahi dekha
Rishton ke toot-ne ka dard aap kya samjhein
Woh lamha kabhi aap ne jee kar nahi dekha
Bhatke hain roshni ki talaash mein na jaane kahan kahan
Afsos ke apni rooh ke ander nahi dekha.... Aryaan it's really goodShukriya Rohit....... |
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«Reply #26 on: June 04, 2005, 04:01:15 PM » |
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Naveed n Aryan ji you both write really good!!!! :wink: Shukriya Hina..... |
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«Reply #27 on: June 04, 2005, 04:11:42 PM » |
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hmmmmmmmm........wah!!!!!!!!! aryan bahot khoob.............very nice written.........
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«Reply #28 on: June 04, 2005, 04:13:17 PM » |
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hmmmmmmmm........wah!!!!!!!!! aryan bahot khoob.............very nice written......... Bohat shukriya Waheed..... |
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«Reply #29 on: June 04, 2005, 07:16:43 PM » |
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Bhool gaya gham de ke mujhe jo
Main kyun uss ko yaad karoon
Main kyun uss ke pyar ki khaatir
Apna dil barbaad karoon
Jab uss ko mere gham ka ehsaas nahi
Pyar ki aahon ka harr aansu
Banta nahi hai taaj mehal
Qismat jinke sath ho unko
Milta hai chahat ka badal
Par aisi Qismat hi, mere paas nahi...
very nice Aryaan!!!!!! |
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