Hota Nahi Koi Bhi Kisi Ka!

by mohdabrar on June 03, 2013, 03:23:52 PM
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Likha hai gazal ki neeyat se... Pehli koshish hai gazal ki agar kamiyaab hua to zarur batayega aur na raha to kya kami rahi woh bhi samjhaiyega... Aap ki raaye ka muntazir...

Abrar...

Milte rehte hain gum phir bhi kyun utha rahi thi zindagi,
Gum ke bazaar mein kyu,tamasha bana rahi thi zindagi,

Mayoosi se bhari aankhen dekhti reh gayi sitam tere ye,
Hota nahi koi bhi kisi ka,ye baat samjha rahi thi zindagi,

Aakhir kyun ghabragaya woh aaj yun badtamizi se meri,
Chehre par se parde saare uske, hataa rahi thi zindagi,

Rota hai kaise dil toot ke aa tu bhi aazma ke dekh zara,
Roti aahen ghum ke seene mein,ye bata rahi thii zindagi,

Na kar paayi koyi khushi mujh ko mukammal kabhi bhi,
Thi meri badkismati,khamoshi se bata rahi thii zindagi,

Kuch bhi na keh saka Ishara kar raha tha ab 'Abrar' bhi,
Chupke se jane kyun nayee umeed jaga rahi thi Zindagi,

Milte rehte hain gum phir bhi kyun utha rahi thi zindagi,
Gum ke bazaar mein kyu,tamasha bana rahi thi zindagi...
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«Reply #1 on: June 03, 2013, 05:18:19 PM »
Quote from: mohdabrar on June 03, 2013, 03:23:52 PM
Likha hai gazal ki neeyat se... Pehli koshish hai gazal ki agar kamiyaab hua to zarur batayega aur na raha to kya kami rahi woh bhi samjhaiyega... Aap ki raaye ka muntazir...

Abrar...

Milte rehte hain gum phir bhi kyun utha rahi thi zindagi,
Gum ke bazaar mein kyu,tamasha bana rahi thi zindagi,
 khubsurat matla ,....daad
Mayoosi se bhari aankhen dekhti reh gayi sitam tere ye,
Hota nahi koi bhi kisi ka,ye baat samjha rahi thi zindagi,
bhtereen khyaa.l,....daad,...
Aakhir kyun ghabragaya woh aaj yun badtamizi se meri,
Chehre par se parde saare uske, hataa rahi thi zindagi,
 khoob,.......
Rota hai kaise dil toot ke aa tu bhi aazma ke dekh zara,
Roti aahen ghum ke seene mein,ye bata rahi thii zindagi,
 vry true  daad,.....
Na kar paayi koyi khushi mujh ko mukammal kabhi bhi,
Thi meri badkismati,khamoshi se bata rahi thii zindagi,
kia khubsurat sher ,....daad,....
Kuch bhi na keh saka Ishara kar raha tha ab 'Abrar' bhi,
Chupke se jane kyun nayee umeed jaga rahi thi Zindagi,
behtereen,....daad
Milte rehte hain gum phir bhi kyun utha rahi thi zindagi,
Gum ke bazaar mein kyu,tamasha bana rahi thi zindagi...
pehli ghazal hee jaandaar rahee abrar ji,...rau ke sath bohat c daa,......
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«Reply #2 on: June 03, 2013, 07:25:48 PM »
bahut bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: June 03, 2013, 07:48:37 PM »
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umda peshkash..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #4 on: June 04, 2013, 12:52:35 AM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Abrar ji,
Pahli ghazal hai aapki.Really Bahut hi achhi koshish hai.Emotion ke lihaaz se behad khoobsurat hai.Dili Mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #5 on: June 04, 2013, 01:14:09 AM »
MoHtaram "mohdabrar" ji mujhe ye jaan kar be hadd khushi huie ke aap ne pehli baar ghazal likhne ki koshish ki hai. MaiN aap ki khidmat meN dili mubaarakbaad pesh karta hooN. Aap ke kalaam ko dekha hai to apna farZ samajhta hooN ke waaqei'yyat par guftgoo ho aur inSaaf se kaam liya jaye taa ke iSlaaH ho sake....

Is se inkaar nahiN ke aap meN Achchha likhne ki SalaaHiyyat paaie jaati hai, Magar jab aap kalaam ki kisi khaaS Sinf (ghazal) ki baat karte haiN to aap ko us ke uSool o ZawaabiT ka buniyaadi i'lm hona Zuroori hai. MaiN ye munaasib samajhta hooN ke aap apne kalaam ko kisi mo'tabar shae'r ke saamne pesh kareN taa ke wo aap ki mukammal raahnumaaie kar sake... Bil fe'l na shi, bil quvvat aap meN ghazal likhne ki SalaaHiyyat paaie jaati hai... Ummeed hai ke aap apni koshish jaari rakheNge aur meri baatoN se musbat ma'naa HaaSil kareNge...Allah kare zor e qalam aur ziyadah...(haider)
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«Reply #6 on: November 17, 2013, 09:41:46 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on June 03, 2013, 05:18:19 PM
pehli ghazal hee jaandaar rahee abrar ji,...rau ke sath bohat c daa,......

Bohot bohot shukriyah...

Duaon ke saath Ijazat,
Abrar.
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«Reply #7 on: November 17, 2013, 09:43:05 PM »
Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on June 03, 2013, 07:25:48 PM
bahut bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
Applause Applause
Bohot bohot shukriyah Janaab...

Duaon ke saath Ijazat,
Abrar.
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«Reply #8 on: November 17, 2013, 09:44:12 PM »
Quote from: nashwani on June 03, 2013, 07:48:37 PM
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umda peshkash..dhero daad..happy9

Bohot bohot shukriyah...

Duaon ke saath Ijazat,
Abrar.
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«Reply #9 on: November 17, 2013, 09:45:21 PM »
Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on June 04, 2013, 12:52:35 AM
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Wah,Wah,Wah Abrar ji,
Pahli ghazal hai aapki.Really Bahut hi achhi koshish hai.Emotion ke lihaaz se behad khoobsurat hai.Dili Mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.

Sudhir sahab, mubarakbaad aur daad ke liye behad shukriyah... Aage bhi saath dete rahe...

Duaon ke saath Ijazat...

Abrar.
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«Reply #10 on: November 17, 2013, 09:49:53 PM »
just heart touching ji ...
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«Reply #11 on: November 17, 2013, 09:51:23 PM »
Quote from: Ghulam Haider on June 04, 2013, 01:14:09 AM
MoHtaram "mohdabrar" ji mujhe ye jaan kar be hadd khushi huie ke aap ne pehli baar ghazal likhne ki koshish ki hai. MaiN aap ki khidmat meN dili mubaarakbaad pesh karta hooN. Aap ke kalaam ko dekha hai to apna farZ samajhta hooN ke waaqei'yyat par guftgoo ho aur inSaaf se kaam liya jaye taa ke iSlaaH ho sake....

Is se inkaar nahiN ke aap meN Achchha likhne ki SalaaHiyyat paaie jaati hai, Magar jab aap kalaam ki kisi khaaS Sinf (ghazal) ki baat karte haiN to aap ko us ke uSool o ZawaabiT ka buniyaadi i'lm hona Zuroori hai. MaiN ye munaasib samajhta hooN ke aap apne kalaam ko kisi mo'tabar shae'r ke saamne pesh kareN taa ke wo aap ki mukammal raahnumaaie kar sake... Bil fe'l na shi, bil quvvat aap meN ghazal likhne ki SalaaHiyyat paaie jaati hai... Ummeed hai ke aap apni koshish jaari rakheNge aur meri baatoN se musbat ma'naa HaaSil kareNge...Allah kare zor e qalam aur ziyadah...(haider)

Janaab "Ghulam Haider" sahab, Aap ki daad aur mubarakbaad sar aankhon par. Bohot bohot shuriyah, Kalaam par aane ke liye. yeh meri pehli koshish thi ghazal ki, aur jaise aapne kaha, Salaahiyat hai par samajh nahi hai... Abhi bhi Ghazal ke Usool o Zawaabit samajhne ki koshish mein hoon. In Shaa Allah bohot jald seekh kar mukammal tareeke se fir kuch pesh karunga. Tab tak ke liye Kalaam chalta rahe aur khayal purzor kaagaz par utar te rahenge...

Duaon ke saath Ijazat,
Abrar.
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«Reply #12 on: November 17, 2013, 10:37:21 PM »
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Nicee effort, keep writing..
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