-----/// Hum apne shahar mein rahe ///----- Hriday

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meraa  aks  meri hi talaash mein pooraa shahar ghumtaa rahaa
khat jispar naam meraa thaa, woh meraa ghar dhundtaa rahaa


hum  un  ke intezaar mein apne hi shahar mein rahe
band apni hi deewaaron mein, apne ghar mein rahe

roshni yun  gayi  zindagi  se un ke  jaane ke baad ki
sau chiraag  jalaa  kar  andheron ki nazar mein rahe

barsaa agar paani to woh kabhi rukaa nahi yahaan
jahaan  thaa  sirf  banjar, hum uss nagar mein rahe

har rishtey ko bhulaayaa thaa unko paane ke baad
woh miley nahi waapas hum jinki khabar mein rahe

naa sambhaalaa kisi ne humein unke jaane ke baad
yun tute hum  ki barson us dard ke asar mein rahe

naa  kabhi  woh aaye naa hi aayi unki kabhi khabar
bas intezaar mein hum raat aur dopahar mein rahe


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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2013, 08:25:26 PM »
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Waah waah waah hriday ji.. bahut bahut khoooooob... bahut achchi peshkash... dheron daad...
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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2013, 09:24:19 PM »
waah waah bahut khoob kapil bhai... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2013, 09:48:10 PM »
waah waah bahut khoob....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2013, 10:24:38 PM »
उम्दा ग़ज़ल और बहुत ही उम्दा शेर......ढेरों दाद........
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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2013, 11:42:08 PM »
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ati sundar..behad khoobsurat hriday jee..happy9
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2013, 03:22:52 AM »
Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2013, 08:54:47 AM »
waah waah
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«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2013, 09:50:28 AM »
bahot khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 29, 2013, 01:01:46 PM »
bahut khoob  Applause Applause happy9
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2013, 01:18:25 PM »
waah waah waah........... Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut Khoob ........ Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: August 29, 2013, 01:23:12 PM »
waah waah waah
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«Reply #12 on: August 29, 2013, 01:44:38 PM »
behad khoob - dard hi dard - hazaron daad, waaaah waaah waah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #13 on: September 25, 2013, 10:50:10 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Aqsh ji...!!!

Quote from: aqsh on August 28, 2013, 08:25:26 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waah waah waah hriday ji.. bahut bahut khoooooob... bahut achchi peshkash... dheron daad...
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«Reply #14 on: February 20, 2014, 12:34:32 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa aap sabhi kaa...!!!
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