hum DARD ko DIL samjhte hai......................

by HumTum on January 21, 2005, 04:08:31 PM
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Aap har manjil ko mushkil samjhte hai,
Hum har mushkil ko manjil samjhte hai,
Aap Dil ko Dard samjhte hai,
Aur hum DARD ko DIL samjhte hai...................... :cry:

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Meena
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2005, 04:31:53 PM »
wow! very nice!

 :D
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HumTum
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«Reply #2 on: January 25, 2005, 09:55:53 AM »
Shukriya meena ji..... for giving me reply somthing more want to post may b you like ....

"Waqt ka dariya so naa jaaye
Tammanaon ka saahil kho na jaaye
Laut aa ab in panahon mein ki...
Tufaan koi kashti duboo na jaaye

Shakhon se patte bikhar na jaaye
Phoolon se boondein chalak na jaaye
Laut aa ab in panahon mein ki.....
Saawan barasne se mukar na jaaye

Raat ye kaali sihar na jaaye
lau mein khud ki shama pighal na jaaye
Laut aa ab in panahon mein ki....
Teri aarzoo mein ye zindgi gujar na jaaye"
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: January 25, 2005, 04:58:17 PM »
Nice HumTum ji!!!!
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mohd_i'm
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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2005, 07:57:06 AM »
kintna darda hai tumre zindagi maa tum kya kare ho kya nahi tum ko yea nahi maloum hai tum kabe kushii saa nahi rohgee ?
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: January 26, 2005, 04:13:47 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Shukriya meena ji..... for giving me reply somthing more want to post may b you like ....

"Waqt ka dariya so naa jaaye
Tammanaon ka saahil kho na jaaye
Laut aa ab in panahon mein ki...
Tufaan koi kashti duboo na jaaye

Shakhon se patte bikhar na jaaye
Phoolon se boondein chalak na jaaye
Laut aa ab in panahon mein ki.....
Saawan barasne se mukar na jaaye

Raat ye kaali sihar na jaaye
lau mein khud ki shama pighal na jaaye
Laut aa ab in panahon mein ki....
Teri aarzoo mein ye zindgi gujar na jaaye"


beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! really gud keep it up!

 :D
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pandit
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«Reply #6 on: January 26, 2005, 04:37:58 PM »
dil hamara gumo ka dariya hai,
jisme dard ka chaya toofaan hai,
usme teri yaado ko bawander hai
aur sailaab teri bewafai ka,
mujhe lekar doobana chahta hai.
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HumTum
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«Reply #7 on: January 27, 2005, 01:10:13 PM »
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dil hamara gumo ka dariya hai,
jisme dard ka chaya toofaan hai,
usme teri yaado ko bawander hai
aur sailaab teri bewafai ka,
mujhe lekar doobana chahta hai.


nice one pandit ji...

Doobta bhi nhi hain kam-bakat
safina hamara iss Sagar - e bewffai mein,
na sakuN  hain , na chen hi hain
kya ho gya hai hal hamara, yaar ki judai mein.....
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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: January 27, 2005, 04:33:43 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "pandit"
dil hamara gumo ka dariya hai,
jisme dard ka chaya toofaan hai,
usme teri yaado ko bawander hai
aur sailaab teri bewafai ka,
mujhe lekar doobana chahta hai.


nice one pandit ji...

Doobta bhi nhi hain kam-bakat
safina hamara iss Sagar - e bewffai mein,
na sakuN  hain , na chen hi hain
kya ho gya hai hal hamara, yaar ki judai mein.....


niceeeeee hum tum ji!

yaar ki judai ne tanha kar diya hume,
baharon ke bich phool jaise murja diya hume,
par kisi ki tadap se yeh waqt rukh to nahin jata,
ghadi (watch) ki sui ne yeh ehesas dila diya hume!
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HumTum
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«Reply #9 on: January 27, 2005, 04:52:14 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "pandit"
dil hamara gumo ka niceeeeee hum tum ji!

yaar ki judai ne tanha kar diya hume,
baharon ke bich phool jaise murja diya hume,
par kisi ki tadap se yeh waqt rukh to nahin jata,
ghadi (watch) ki sui ne yeh ehesas dila diya hume!


very nice meena ji...bhut khoob... waqt, intzaar, ehassas yaar aur halat inn sab ko jod ker ke kuch likhneN ki koshish ki hai..... shayad aap ko achi lagi yeh kalam.....


Tere sapnoN ke intezaar me rehti hain palkein,
Aur teri yaad hai ki mujhhe sone nahi deti.

Aa jaate hain aankhoN tak dil ke sailaab,
Teri nam nazrein inhe rone nahi deti.

Socha tha bhula denge jazbaa e ulfat,
Teri mohabbat ye ehsaas khone nahi deti.

AshkoN se mitaaye tuune daagh aanchal ke,
Ye duniya mujhhe daaman dhone nahi deti.

Tera intezaar karti hai ghayal ruh meri..
Teri umeed mujhhe fanah hone nahi deti.


HumTum
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Meena
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«Reply #10 on: January 27, 2005, 05:13:03 PM »
beatiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
each line is  superrrr! mere pas alfaz hi nahi ntareef karne ke liye bcos its simply great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: January 27, 2005, 05:14:07 PM »
wah!!! bahoot khoob HumTum ji!!!!! Bahoot khoob!!!
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HumTum
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«Reply #12 on: January 27, 2005, 05:17:13 PM »
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wah!!! bahoot khoob HumTum ji!!!!! Bahoot khoob!!!



shukriya pooja ji.....
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HumTum
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«Reply #13 on: January 27, 2005, 05:18:46 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
beatiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
each line is  superrrr! mere pas alfaz hi nahi ntareef karne ke liye bcos its simply great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D


shukriya meena ji.....
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