hum jise chahate the

by husain52 on March 15, 2005, 01:24:34 PM
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zindagi lamba safar hai raste magar kho gaye,
hum jise chahate the vo kis aur ke ho gaye

sari duniya chodne hum chale jiske liye,
beech rah mein chod ke vo hume chale gaye

sare aansoo bah gaye armaan baki rah gaye,
vo humara khawab the aur khawab hi bankar rah gaye

tanhaai hi tanhaai aur aansoo ke mousam rah gaye,
hum jise chahate the vo kisi aur ke ho gaye
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«Reply #1 on: March 15, 2005, 05:18:59 PM »
beautiful poem hussain,u write very well,very emotional.
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2005, 02:45:11 AM »
humne jise chaha, wo chah kar bhi hume chah na sake
dard ki hade kaha hogi khatam, wo door jakar bhi na bhula sake humko!!!
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2005, 06:12:51 AM »
wow Pooja ji :D
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2005, 07:13:12 AM »
very nice husain
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«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2005, 12:32:50 PM »
thax pooja ji, nidhi and abhishek
and good work pooja ji
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«Reply #6 on: March 16, 2005, 05:04:11 PM »
beautifulll husain ji!! very touching!

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«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2005, 05:20:49 PM »
beautifully writen  husain
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2005, 11:53:53 AM »
thax meenaji and diva
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