-----/// Hum kasam nibhaate rahe ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on September 03, 2012, 01:22:20 PM
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hum khud ko parwaanaa samajh har baar chiraag me haath jalaate rahe
aur woh paani se  aag   bujhaane  ke liye har baar  humi ko rulaate rahe

kee koshish  unhone duur jaane ki  aur hum unke aur  kareeb jaate rahe
aaye naa milne ek bhi baar humse par har baar banke yaad wo aate rahe

na  samjhenge wo kabhi hamaare dard ko , ki  hum  kitnaa tadapte hain
bheegte rahe  barsaat  me aur usi  me apne  aansuon ko  chhipaate rahe

shayad  achcha  lagta  hai  unhe ye  dekh ki  koi tadpe  unke pyaar mein
yahi wajah  hai wo  duur  reh  ke  humse  humein is tarhaa sataate rahe

hum karte rahe yaad  unhe subah se shaam, aur wo hume bhulaate rahe
karke  bewafaai ,  meri bewafaai  ke kisse  mehfilon  me wo sunaate rahe

kiyaa waadaa mujhse saath  nibhaane ka  umra  bhar aur bhool gaye wo
na kar sake  hum  bewafaai  aur unse  kiye har kasam  ko  nibhaate rahe


*****HRIDAY*****
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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2012, 04:31:04 PM »
Kya baat hai Hriday jee
Aag lagaa dee aapne..
beeta hua kal phir se yaad dila diya.
ek ek shikayat jaise kuch sochne ko majboor kar raha hai hame.
javeeb..shayad kuch nahee.
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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2012, 04:32:17 PM »
wah wah wah....... kya baat hai hriday ji jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai.. bahut bahut mubarakbaad

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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2012, 05:35:54 PM »
Bhut khoob ....
Alfaz nahi mil pa rahe hai tarif ke....
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2012, 07:06:43 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 03, 2012, 01:22:20 PM
hum khud ko parwaanaa samajh har baar chiraag me haath jalaate rahe
aur woh paani se  aag   bujhaane  ke liye har baar  humi ko rulaate rahe

kee koshish  unhone duur jaane ki  aur hum unke aur  kareeb jaate rahe
aaye naa milne ek bhi baar humse par har baar banke yaad wo aate rahe

na  samjhenge wo kabhi hamaare dard ko , ki  hum  kitnaa tadapte hain
bheegte rahe  barsaat  me aur usi  me apne  aansuon ko  chhipaate rahe

shayad  achcha  lagta  hai  unhe ye  dekh ki  koi tadpe  unke pyaar mein
yahi wajah  hai wo  duur  reh  ke  humse  humein is tarhaa sataate rahe

hum karte rahe yaad  unhe subah se shaam, aur wo hume bhulaate rahe
karke  bewafaai ,  meri bewafaai  ke kisse  mehfilon  me wo sunaate rahe

kiyaa waadaa mujhse saath  nibhaane ka  umra  bhar aur bhool gaye wo
na kar sake  hum  bewafaai  aur unse  kiye har kasam  ko  nibhaate rahe


*****HRIDAY*****

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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2012, 08:38:33 PM »
very very nice!!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2012, 12:37:27 AM »
wah wah Hriday ji, dhero dad
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«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2012, 02:01:22 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 03, 2012, 01:22:20 PM
hum khud ko parwaanaa samajh har baar chiraag me haath jalaate rahe
aur woh paani se  aag   bujhaane  ke liye har baar  humi ko rulaate rahe

kee koshish  unhone duur jaane ki  aur hum unke aur  kareeb jaate rahe
aaye naa milne ek bhi baar humse par har baar banke yaad wo aate rahe

na  samjhenge wo kabhi hamaare dard ko , ki  hum  kitnaa tadapte hain
bheegte rahe  barsaat  me aur usi  me apne  aansuon ko  chhipaate rahe

shayad  achcha  lagta  hai  unhe ye  dekh ki  koi tadpe  unke pyaar mein
yahi wajah  hai wo  duur  reh  ke  humse  humein is tarhaa sataate rahe

hum karte rahe yaad  unhe subah se shaam, aur wo hume bhulaate rahe
karke  bewafaai ,  meri bewafaai  ke kisse  mehfilon  me wo sunaate rahe

kiyaa waadaa mujhse saath  nibhaane ka  umra  bhar aur bhool gaye wo
na kar sake  hum  bewafaai  aur unse  kiye har kasam  ko  nibhaate rahe


*****HRIDAY*****
Umar bhar jiskay liyeh thrpa yeh dil,ru-ba-ru uska nazara ho geya
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«Reply #8 on: September 04, 2012, 03:25:05 AM »
bahut hi acha likha hai Hariday ji....aap ko bahut bahut badhayi...
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«Reply #9 on: September 06, 2012, 12:12:07 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Shihab ji....!!!

Quote from: Shihab on September 03, 2012, 02:50:43 PM
bahut khub Hriday ji

Shad o aabaad rahiye

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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2012, 10:56:16 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Mukesh ji...!!!

Quote from: mkv on September 03, 2012, 04:31:04 PM
Kya baat hai Hriday jee
Aag lagaa dee aapne..
beeta hua kal phir se yaad dila diya.
ek ek shikayat jaise kuch sochne ko majboor kar raha hai hame.
javeeb..shayad kuch nahee.
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«Reply #11 on: September 24, 2012, 10:17:22 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Soudagar ji....!!!

Quote from: soudagar on September 03, 2012, 04:32:17 PM
wah wah wah....... kya baat hai hriday ji jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai.. bahut bahut mubarakbaad

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«Reply #12 on: September 30, 2012, 09:10:08 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Tanowar ji...!!!

Quote from: Tanowar Jahan on September 03, 2012, 05:35:54 PM
Bhut khoob ....
Alfaz nahi mil pa rahe hai tarif ke....
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«Reply #13 on: October 02, 2012, 08:50:08 PM »
thanks a lot K_A ji....!!!

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on September 03, 2012, 07:06:43 PM
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«Reply #14 on: October 04, 2012, 05:46:03 AM »
thanks a lot Sps ji....!!!

Quote from: Sps on September 03, 2012, 08:38:33 PM
very very nice!!!
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