Hum khud ko na jalate to kya karte

by amarhellboy on January 12, 2009, 06:41:44 AM
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amarhellboy
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      Dard se hath na milate to or kya karte.
       Gam k aansu na bhate to or kya karte.
    Kuch apno ne mangi thi humse roshni ki dua.
      Hum khud ko na jalate to or kya karte.
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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2009, 07:38:28 AM »
Bohat khoob Amar ... Thumbs UP
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salil2002
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2009, 08:04:41 AM »
good one bro...........
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2009, 12:08:49 PM »
kya baat hain kya baat hain wahhhhhhhh yaar isme aur likha hota to bohat maza aata....
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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2009, 12:17:10 PM »
      Dard se hath na milate to or kya karte.
       Gam k aansu na bhate to or kya karte.
    Kuch apno ne mangi thi humse roshni ki dua.
      Hum khud ko na jalate to or kya karte.

Nice lines... Applause

Wo Haathon Se Haath Kya Chhurra Ke Le Gaye
Dil-E-Gulzaar Ki Khushbu Churaa Ke Le Gaye

Khwabon Ke Chaman Ki Woh Bulbul Hun Jisko
Sayyad Apni Bagal Mein Dabaa Ke Le Gaye

Kahan Rakhunga Ab Main Teri Yaadon Ke Moti
Haye Ashq Mera Daaman Bahaa Ke Le Gaye

Kitne Pyaare Hain Saqi Ye Tere Maikade Ke Log
Gaya Na Main To Mujhko Ghar Se Aa Ke Le Gaye

Maikash Gunehgaar Nahin Tere Intezaar Ka
Kambakht Yaar Hi Mayyat Utthaa Ke Le Gaye

Main To Raah Dekh Raha Tha Yakeen Kijiye
Kasam Se Dost Hi Arthi Utthaa Ke Le Gaye

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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2009, 01:04:49 PM »

Nice One Amar Bhai,.
And Good Sharing Roja Ji,.
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amarhellboy
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2009, 04:51:20 AM »
Thank's honeyrose, sajid2002, sajid_ghayal, jaanaseen
And Thank's Roja apki shayari bhi kamaal ki hai
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amarhellboy
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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2009, 04:57:40 AM »
      Dard se hath na milate to or kya karte.
       Gam k aansu na bhate to or kya karte.
    Kuch apno ne mangi thi humse roshni ki dua.
      Hum khud ko na jalate to or kya karte.
sajid_ghayel ji apki khawais puri kar dete hai

        Wo humari jindagi mai itna andhera kar gaye,
            Hum suraj ko na bhulate to or kya.
 Andhera khud maangane aaya tha mere dar par roshani ki bhik
         Hum apna ghar na jalate to or kya karte
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #8 on: January 13, 2009, 06:42:15 AM »
      Dard se hath na milate to or kya karte.
       Gam k aansu na bhate to or kya karte.
    Kuch apno ne mangi thi humse roshni ki dua.
      Hum khud ko na jalate to or kya karte.

wah Amar, bahut khoob

Jasbir Singh
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2009, 06:56:29 AM »
Nice lines... Applause

Wo Haathon Se Haath Kya Chhurra Ke Le Gaye
Dil-E-Gulzaar Ki Khushbu Churaa Ke Le Gaye

Khwabon Ke Chaman Ki Woh Bulbul Hun Jisko
Sayyad Apni Bagal Mein Dabaa Ke Le Gaye

Kahan Rakhunga Ab Main Teri Yaadon Ke Moti
Haye Ashq Mera Daaman Bahaa Ke Le Gaye

Kitne Pyaare Hain Saqi Ye Tere Maikade Ke Log
Gaya Na Main To Mujhko Ghar Se Aa Ke Le Gaye

Maikash Gunehgaar Nahin Tere Intezaar Ka
Kambakht Yaar Hi Mayyat Utthaa Ke Le Gaye

Main To Raah Dekh Raha Tha Yakeen Kijiye
Kasam Se Dost Hi Arthi Utthaa Ke Le Gaye

(nm)

very nice sharing Roja

Jasbir Singh
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smardia
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«Reply #10 on: January 13, 2009, 09:51:53 AM »
Badi achhi line likhi hain aapne.....clap...clap

Kuchh apno ne maangi thi humse roshni...
Hum khud ko n jalate to kya karte...

Yaar ye daur hai kuchh dusra..
Yahan n koi hai apna n paraya
Chaar aane me mil jati mombatti
Nahak khud ko jalaya aapne...
      Dard se hath na milate to or kya karte.
       Gam k aansu na bhate to or kya karte.
    Kuch apno ne mangi thi humse roshni ki dua.
      Hum khud ko na jalate to or kya karte.
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amarhellboy
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«Reply #11 on: February 13, 2010, 09:13:35 AM »
thank's all fraiend
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