HUM SAB MILKAR RAHE......

by khwaish on October 21, 2008, 05:23:25 PM
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«Reply #15 on: October 22, 2008, 03:59:25 PM »
Quote from: Mahiya on October 22, 2008, 01:55:31 PM
Khwaish ji, Bahut neik koshish hai aapki.. Applause

Yahan kehna bahut kuch chahti hoon, koshish karungi ki woh Kavita ya shayari ke roop mein hi keh sakun.. Aaj Sajid ji ki "Kavita ka koi roop" padh rahi thi, toh, agar yeh kavita naa lage tab bhi samajhiyega ki kavita hi hai.. tongue3

Aap hi ki kavita ka reply, kuch aap ke hi andaaz mein...

Eet dar eet dardon ki, dil mein koi dharta gaya,
Dard ka yeh laal-qila bhi bus yunhi banta gaya..

Dost woh agar hote toh, hum bhi kuch kehte unhe,
Peeth pe unka har waar, Shool bann chubhta gaya..

Sil ke apne honth humne, zubaan ko keid kar liya,
Bach bhaga tha jo ankh se, wo ansu bhi jamta gaya..

Us Mehfil se nikal kar, Soch ke hum ghabraaye yeh,
Dushmano ke sang kaise, apna karwaa chalta gaya..

Kyon apne sitaare se bichhud ke roya nahin aasmaan,
Ek sitaara toot falak se jab zameen pe girtaa gaya..

Hum se ab ye poochiye naa, bastiyaan sab gayi kahan,
Gairaton ki maut ka tufaan, Har ek shai nigalta gaya..

Yu yaad ke panne palatkar, Paaya kya bhala kisi ne,
Har ashaar aag sa hua hai, Jo dhuaa dhuaa uddta gaya..

Nanhe Phoolon ko masalkar, kaun bhala hota hai khush,
Khud baagbaa ke haathon magar, dil ka phool masla gaya...

Uthh chale hai mehfil se hum, ab humein naa paaoge,
Udaas baithe ho kyon tum, Jaane waala toh chala gaya..


(Bhool chook maaf kijiyega... Kuch jyada bada reply ho gaya... Usual Smile )


Bahut Bahut Khoob Mahiya..aapne bahut khoobsurti se apni baat kahi.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: October 22, 2008, 04:20:47 PM »
Quote from: Mahiya on October 22, 2008, 01:55:31 PM
Khwaish ji, Bahut neik koshish hai aapki.. Applause

Yahan kehna bahut kuch chahti hoon, koshish karungi ki woh Kavita ya shayari ke roop mein hi keh sakun.. Aaj Sajid ji ki "Kavita ka koi roop" padh rahi thi, toh, agar yeh kavita naa lage tab bhi samajhiyega ki kavita hi hai.. tongue3

Aap hi ki kavita ka reply, kuch aap ke hi andaaz mein...

Eet dar eet dardon ki, dil mein koi dharta gaya,
Dard ka yeh laal-qila bhi bus yunhi banta gaya..

Dost woh agar hote toh, hum bhi kuch kehte unhe,
Peeth pe unka har waar, Shool bann chubhta gaya..

Sil ke apne honth humne, zubaan ko keid kar liya,
Bach bhaga tha jo ankh se, wo ansu bhi jamta gaya..

Us Mehfil se nikal kar, Soch ke hum ghabraaye yeh,
Dushmano ke sang kaise, apna karwaa chalta gaya..

Kyon apne sitaare se bichhud ke roya nahin aasmaan,
Ek sitaara toot falak se jab zameen pe girtaa gaya..

Hum se ab ye poochiye naa, bastiyaan sab gayi kahan,
Gairaton ki maut ka tufaan, Har ek shai nigalta gaya..

Yu yaad ke panne palatkar, Paaya kya bhala kisi ne,
Har ashaar aag sa hua hai, Jo dhuaa dhuaa uddta gaya..

Nanhe Phoolon ko masalkar, kaun bhala hota hai khush,
Khud baagbaa ke haathon magar, dil ka phool masla gaya...

Uthh chale hai mehfil se hum, ab humein naa paaoge,
Udaas baithe ho kyon tum, Jaane waala toh chala gaya..


(Bhool chook maaf kijiyega... Kuch jyada bada reply ho gaya... Usual Smile )


Rishto ko Yaar Nibhana seekh Gaya,
Haan, Main Bhi Ab Muskurana Seekh Gaya....


Har Baat Par Sach Ugal Deta Tha,
Dekh Kar Duniya Ka Roop-Rang,
Main Bhi Ab Baat Banana Seekh Gaya.....


Sabki Haan Mein Haan Milate raho,
Woh shaks Sacha hai par usse jhoota batlaate Raho,
Waah!! "KHWAISH" Sambandho ko Khoob Nibhana seekh gaya....


Har Baat Par Jaadu Pher Dena Apne Shabdo ka,
Main Bhi AB Aansuo ko Aankhon mein Chupana seekh gaya....


Dil Aena tha, lakh chupane par bhi sach Keh jaata tha,
Dil Ki Baat Dil Mein Dabana seekh gaya....


Mujhe Dekh Kar AB Log kehte hai ki,
"KHWAISH Ne ab Siyaasat seekh li,
Haath milana, aur Phir Dhoka Dena Seekh gaya....


"KHWAISH", Dil Ki Tasalli Ke Liye Tune Keh to diya bahut kuch,
Par Sach To Yeh hai Ki,
pehle keh dena phir usse bhool jaana,
"KHWAISH" yeh Sab khoob seekh gaya......
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«Reply #17 on: October 22, 2008, 04:28:22 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on October 22, 2008, 04:20:47 PM
Rishto ko Yaar Nibhana seekh Gaya,
Haan, Main Bhi Ab Muskurana Seekh Gaya....


Har Baat Par Sach Ugal Deta Tha,
Dekh Kar Duniya Ka Roop-Rang,
Main Bhi Ab Baat Banana Seekh Gaya.....


Sabki Haan Mein Haan Milate raho,
Woh shaks Sacha hai par usse jhoota batlaate Raho,
Waah!! "KHWAISH" Sambandho ko Khoob Nibhana seekh gaya....


Har Baat Par Jaadu Pher Dena Apne Shabdo ka,
Main Bhi AB Aansuo ko Aankhon mein Chupana seekh gaya....


Dil Aena tha, lakh chupane par bhi sach Keh jaata tha,
Dil Ki Baat Dil Mein Dabana seekh gaya....


Mujhe Dekh Kar AB Log kehte hai ki,
"KHWAISH Ne ab Siyaasat seekh li,
Haath milana, aur Phir Dhoka Dena Seekh gaya....


"KHWAISH", Dil Ki Tasalli Ke Liye Tune Keh to diya bahut kuch,
Par Sach To Yeh hai Ki,
pehle keh dena phir usse bhool jaana,
"KHWAISH" yeh Sab khoob seekh gaya......

Bohot hi Khoobsurat, bohot khoob Khwaish......aapne sach main jo likha hai, wo mere dil ki awaaz si lagti hai......! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Lafzon ke jaadu se hum anjaan rahe
Sach kehte rahe isiliye badnam rahe !
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«Reply #18 on: October 23, 2008, 07:10:50 AM »
very nice reply mahiya ji Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #19 on: October 23, 2008, 07:14:44 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on October 22, 2008, 04:20:47 PM
Rishto ko Yaar Nibhana seekh Gaya,
Haan, Main Bhi Ab Muskurana Seekh Gaya....


Har Baat Par Sach Ugal Deta Tha,
Dekh Kar Duniya Ka Roop-Rang,
Main Bhi Ab Baat Banana Seekh Gaya.....


Sabki Haan Mein Haan Milate raho,
Woh shaks Sacha hai par usse jhoota batlaate Raho,
Waah!! "KHWAISH" Sambandho ko Khoob Nibhana seekh gaya....


Har Baat Par Jaadu Pher Dena Apne Shabdo ka,
Main Bhi AB Aansuo ko Aankhon mein Chupana seekh gaya....


Dil Aena tha, lakh chupane par bhi sach Keh jaata tha,
Dil Ki Baat Dil Mein Dabana seekh gaya....


Mujhe Dekh Kar AB Log kehte hai ki,
"KHWAISH Ne ab Siyaasat seekh li,
Haath milana, aur Phir Dhoka Dena Seekh gaya....


"KHWAISH", Dil Ki Tasalli Ke Liye Tune Keh to diya bahut kuch,
Par Sach To Yeh hai Ki,
pehle keh dena phir usse bhool jaana,
"KHWAISH" yeh Sab khoob seekh gaya......

bohut khoob khwaish ji Applause
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«Reply #20 on: October 23, 2008, 04:17:22 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on October 22, 2008, 04:28:22 PM

Bohot hi Khoobsurat, bohot khoob Khwaish......aapne sach main jo likha hai, wo mere dil ki awaaz si lagti hai......! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Lafzon ke jaadu se hum anjaan rahe
Sach kehte rahe isiliye badnam rahe !

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Celmira..

Aur aapne bhi woh do line,khoob likhe  Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: October 23, 2008, 04:19:56 PM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on October 23, 2008, 07:14:44 AM
bohut khoob khwaish ji Applause





Thankyou so much Bhawnaji..
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«Reply #22 on: October 23, 2008, 05:50:25 PM »
Bohot khoob likha aapne khwaish ji.
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«Reply #23 on: October 23, 2008, 05:55:28 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on October 22, 2008, 04:28:22 PM
Lafzon ke jaadu se hum anjaan rahe
Sach kehte rahe isiliye badnam rahe !
Waah ek hi qatare mein samandar samaaya hai.... Applause
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«Reply #24 on: October 23, 2008, 05:57:48 PM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on October 23, 2008, 05:50:25 PM
Bohot khoob likha aapne khwaish ji.

teh dil se shukriya randeri saheb aapka par agar aap bhi kuch likhte to humein aapse kuch seekhne ko mil jaata...
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«Reply #25 on: October 23, 2008, 06:19:28 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah!! Mahiya and Khwaish ji kaya baat hai!!! Bahoot khoob likha hai app dono ne!! Good job
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«Reply #26 on: October 23, 2008, 06:23:18 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on October 23, 2008, 05:57:48 PM
teh dil se shukriya randeri saheb aapka par agar aap bhi kuch likhte to humein aapse kuch seekhne ko mil jaata...
Aap ki is izzat afzai ka mashkoor hun, jald hi tameel-e-hukam ki koshish rahegi, insha allah.
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«Reply #27 on: October 23, 2008, 06:34:27 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on October 23, 2008, 06:19:28 PM
Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah!! Mahiya and Khwaish ji kaya baat hai!!! Bahoot khoob likha hai app dono ne!! Good job

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja aapka..par aap bina kuch likhe kaha chal diye??
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«Reply #28 on: October 23, 2008, 06:38:58 PM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on October 23, 2008, 06:23:18 PM
Aap ki is izzat afzai ka mashkoor hun, jald hi tameel-e-hukam ki koshish rahegi, insha allah.

Randeri saheb, ab aapki likhi hui kalam ka intezaar rahega..
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«Reply #29 on: October 23, 2008, 06:48:33 PM »
hummm socha tha Dard main nahi likhugi, magar apki baat kaise taali ja sakti hai... chaliye ek koshish apke liye

Muskaan teri main kitna jhooth hai
Yah jhooth chupana bhool gaya

Her kisi ke bas ka nahi, jhooth ko yaha bolna
Jhooth bolte bolte bas, ankh se ankh milana bhool gaya

Her rishta banta hai bhawnao se, iska kaho kaya kahte ho
Sikh liye rishte nibhana, bhawnao ko chupana bhool gaya

Dil ki baat rah kar ke dil main, siyaast baji sikh gaye
Phir hath milate, dhoka dete, garden ko uthana bhool gaya

Khwaish dil ki tasalli ko kah de jo bhi mehfil main
Dosto se magar apni haqiqat chupana bhool gaya!!

Pooja ne her baar socha, dard main na kuch likhne ki
Her baar shabdo ke samne, apna he kaha bhool gaya!!!
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