Hum se rasm-e ulfat woh is tarah nibhate hain

by mistufer on August 18, 2009, 02:06:16 PM
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Hum se rasm-e ulfat woh is tarah nibhate hain
Hum tou pyaar karte haiN aur woh zulm dhaate hain

Dar badar bhatakte hain thokaren bhi khate hain
Log tub kahin jaa ker manzilon ko paate hain

Is tarah jahaN se hum apna gham chupate hain
Lakh ro raha ho dil phir bhi muskurate hain

Jin se hum ne maangee theen chund lamhon ki Khushiyan
Woh ghamon ki hee saughaat hum ko deke jaate hain

Kaise bawafa hain woh ghar mire nahiN aate
DoosroN ki galiyon men roz dekhe jate hain

Hum nahiN karam apna jo jatayeN sau sau bar
Hum karam kareN bhi tou kar ke bhool jate hain

Dost is zamane meN Khudgaraz hain ai Nira
Jab bhi koii mushkil ho ghair kaam aate haiN

Nira
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2009, 02:24:26 PM »
Hum se rasm-e ulfat woh is tarah nibhate hain
Hum tou pyaar karte haiN aur woh zulm dhaate hain

Dar badar bhatakte hain thokaren bhi khate hain
Log tub kahin jaa ker manzilon ko paate hain

Is tarah jahaN se hum apna gham chupate hain
Lakh ro raha ho dil phir bhi muskurate hain

Jin se hum ne maangee theen chund lamhon ki Khushiyan
Woh ghamon ki hee saughaat hum ko deke jaate hain

Kaise bawafa hain woh ghar mire nahiN aate
DoosroN ki galiyon men roz dekhe jate hain

Hum nahiN karam apna jo jatayeN sau sau bar
Hum karam kareN bhi tou kar ke bhool jate hain

Dost is zamane meN Khudgaraz hain ai Nira
Jab bhi koii mushkil ho ghair kaam aate haiN

Nira

Waaaaah.. wah wah.... Applause Applause
Bahut accha likha hai aapne Nira sis...... Bahut dino k baad padne mila
Daad hazir hai ji kabul kijiyega zarur.
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2009, 08:41:04 PM »
bahoot khoob Nira ji!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2009, 03:46:01 PM »
Wah Kya baat hai Nira Didi.. Dard Ke Sath Jazzbaaton Ko Bakhoobi Pesh kiya hai aapne.. Lajawab Rachna Likhi hai aaapne.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2009, 05:01:51 PM »
Waah Waah Kya baat hai Nira di .. bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. bahoot Umda !
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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2009, 12:41:58 PM »

Waaaaah.. wah wah.... Applause Applause
Bahut accha likha hai aapne Nira sis...... Bahut dino k baad padne mila
Daad hazir hai ji kabul kijiyega zarur.
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rojaaaaaaa sis

aapko pasand aayi rachna
bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2009, 12:43:05 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahot khoob likha hai aapne Nira ji
behatreen ghazal aur dard se bhare ashaar likhe hain

kaash ji

aapki daad ka dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon
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mistufer
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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2009, 12:43:51 PM »
bahoot khoob Nira ji!!


pooja ji

bahut bahut shukriya
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mistufer
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«Reply #8 on: August 24, 2009, 12:45:20 PM »
Wah Kya baat hai Nira Didi.. Dard Ke Sath Jazzbaaton Ko Bakhoobi Pesh kiya hai aapne.. Lajawab Rachna Likhi hai aaapne.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

vicky
tumhare saharne ka dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon'
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«Reply #9 on: August 24, 2009, 12:47:27 PM »
Waah Waah Kya baat hai Nira di .. bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. bahoot Umda !

sophi sis

hausla afzaayi aor saharne ki shukrguzaar hoon
yunhi saath deti rahiyega
take care
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«Reply #10 on: August 24, 2009, 12:53:34 PM »
Hum se rasm-e ulfat woh is tarah nibhate hain
Hum tou pyaar karte haiN aur woh zulm dhaate hain

Dar badar bhatakte hain thokaren bhi khate hain
Log tub kahin jaa ker manzilon ko paate hain

Is tarah jahaN se hum apna gham chupate hain
Lakh ro raha ho dil phir bhi muskurate hain

Jin se hum ne maangee theen chund lamhon ki Khushiyan
Woh ghamon ki hee saughaat hum ko deke jaate hain

Kaise bawafa hain woh ghar mire nahiN aate
DoosroN ki galiyon men roz dekhe jate hain

Hum nahiN karam apna jo jatayeN sau sau bar
Hum karam kareN bhi tou kar ke bhool jate hain

Dost is zamane meN Khudgaraz hain ai Nira
Jab bhi koii mushkil ho ghair kaam aate haiN

Nira

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahooooooooooooot hi khoooob likha nira ji..wahhhhhhhhh
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«Reply #11 on: August 24, 2009, 04:58:55 PM »
Hum se rasm-e ulfat woh is tarah nibhate hain
Hum tou pyaar karte haiN aur woh zulm dhaate hain

Dar badar bhatakte hain thokaren bhi khate hain
Log tub kahin jaa ker manzilon ko paate hain

Is tarah jahaN se hum apna gham chupate hain
Lakh ro raha ho dil phir bhi muskurate hain

Jin se hum ne maangee theen chund lamhon ki Khushiyan
Woh ghamon ki hee saughaat hum ko deke jaate hain

Kaise bawafa hain woh ghar mire nahiN aate
DoosroN ki galiyon men roz dekhe jate hain

Hum nahiN karam apna jo jatayeN sau sau bar
Hum karam kareN bhi tou kar ke bhool jate hain

Dost is zamane meN Khudgaraz hain ai Nira
Jab bhi koii mushkil ho ghair kaam aate haiN

Nira

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut Bahut Khoob Niraji..Har Ek Ashar Laajawab!!!

Bahut Ache.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #12 on: August 24, 2009, 05:05:28 PM »
Bohot hi Khoob Nira Ji
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«Reply #13 on: September 04, 2009, 12:06:23 AM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Nira ji mindblowing creation.excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2009, 04:40:01 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahooooooooooooot hi khoooob likha nira ji..wahhhhhhhhh

aapki hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya
nira
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