HUM TO JAAN SE JAATE HAIN...........................

by Tanha(Saurabh) on October 04, 2008, 10:53:53 AM
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HUM TO JAAN SE JAATE HAIN UNKI YAADON SE,
KYA HOGA AB, SARKAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

NIGAAHON MEIN RAHEGI CHAMAK BARSON TAK,
KARKE JO UNKA DEEDAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

HUME KYA ILM KYA HAI TAREEKA-E-MAHFIL YAHAAN,
DEEWAANE HAIN, DEEWAANE-E-YAAR, CHALE AAYE HAIN.

EK TO MAIN AUR UNKE BULANE KA ASAR,
LUTNE KO SARE BAAZAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

MUSHKIL HAI UNSE HAAL-E-DIL KAHNA, SOCHA HAI,
WO SABSE KARTE INKAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

AB TO BATON MEIN LOG MAZA LETE HAIN,
KAHTE HAIN ‘DEKHO YAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN’.

ZAROORI THA IS RAASTE PE THAHAR JAANA MUJHKO,
AUR HUM ‘TANHA’ TEZ RAFTAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

JAHAN RAHTI THI MERE YAAR KI PAHCHAN SABHI,
CHHOD KE WO GHAR-BAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

ABHI IS KHAAK KO WAADON NE BAANDH RAKHA HAI,
KAI TOOFAAN KARKE PAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

TUM APNE HAAL PAR KYUN HO HAIRAAN ITNE?
PARWAANE TO JALTE YAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

UNKO BHI AATA NAHI KARAR KUCHH BINA MERE,
BECHAINIYON MEIN WO BHI HAR BAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

-----TANHA(SAURABH)
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«Reply #1 on: October 04, 2008, 11:27:09 AM »
 Applause  Applause  Applause
BAHUT UMDA LIKHTE HAI AAP
TANHA JI...
KEEP GOING...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #2 on: October 04, 2008, 12:07:18 PM »
Bahut khoob saurabhji.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 04, 2008, 12:33:55 PM »
bohat bohat shukriya apka Khwaish ji..
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«Reply #4 on: October 04, 2008, 12:45:18 PM »
wah wah...tanha ji jitna bhi aapko padha aur jyaada padhne ki ichcha hoti hai......humesha aapko padhane me aanand aata hai...vishay pe aapki majboot pakad aur shbdon ka satik istemal ..aapko...bheed se alag khada kar deta hai...
dad kabool karen.... Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 04, 2008, 01:01:02 PM »
bohat bohat shukriya Shael ji, Bekarar ji aap sabhi logon ka.
aur Bekarar ji hausla afzaai ke liye tah-e-dil se bahot bahot shkriya apka.
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«Reply #6 on: October 04, 2008, 01:41:33 PM »
itni shorat bakshi tuje badnamiyo ne ghayel teri
tujse milne shehar ke badnam sare aaye hain

                                           -sg-

great work tanha
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«Reply #7 on: October 05, 2008, 07:06:00 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Ghayel ji aapka.... notworthy notworthy


"Zindgi se jud gayi hai dil ke saath hui hai,
 kuchh shaamein guzar gayin jab wo baat hui hai" -Tanha


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«Reply #8 on: October 05, 2008, 07:53:37 AM »
Tanha(Saurabh) ji,
Khoobsoorat taameer-e-tasweer-e-alfaaz key liye badhaayee!
                            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #9 on: October 05, 2008, 05:40:45 PM »
HUM TO JAAN SE JAATE HAIN UNKI YAADON SE,
KYA HOGA AB, SARKAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

NIGAAHON MEIN RAHEGI CHAMAK BARSON TAK,
KARKE JO UNKA DEEDAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

HUME KYA ILM KYA HAI TAREEKA-E-MAHFIL YAHAAN,
DEEWAANE HAIN, DEEWAANE-E-YAAR, CHALE AAYE HAIN.

EK TO MAIN AUR UNKE BULANE KA ASAR,
LUTNE KO SARE BAAZAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

MUSHKIL HAI UNSE HAAL-E-DIL KAHNA, SOCHA HAI,
WO SABSE KARTE INKAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

AB TO BATON MEIN LOG MAZA LETE HAIN,
KAHTE HAIN ‘DEKHO YAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN’.

ZAROORI THA IS RAASTE PE THAHAR JAANA MUJHKO,
AUR HUM ‘TANHA’ TEZ RAFTAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

JAHAN RAHTI THI MERE YAAR KI PAHCHAN SABHI,
CHHOD KE WO GHAR-BAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

ABHI IS KHAAK KO WAADON NE BAANDH RAKHA HAI,
KAI TOOFAAN KARKE PAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

TUM APNE HAAL PAR KYUN HO HAIRAAN ITNE?
PARWAANE TO JALTE YAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

UNKO BHI AATA NAHI KARAR KUCHH BINA MERE,
BECHAINIYON MEIN WO BHI HAR BAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

-----TANHA(SAURABH)



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Bohat khoob likha hai saurabh ji kamaal ke lafz hain... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: October 06, 2008, 04:45:14 AM »
Tanha(Saurabh) ji,
Dil ko, alfaaz mein dhhalaa paayaa!
Yaar ney, kyaa hi khoob farmaayaa!!

                 - abd bundeli
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«Reply #11 on: October 06, 2008, 07:19:42 AM »
kya baat hain abd jee naraz ho kya humse 2 din se hamare har likhe ko aap ignore kar rahe hain khair aap bade hain aur humse hazar guna umda shayer aap jo chahe kar sakte hain
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«Reply #12 on: October 06, 2008, 07:24:15 AM »
HUM TO JAAN SE JAATE HAIN UNKI YAADON SE,
KYA HOGA AB, SARKAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

NIGAAHON MEIN RAHEGI CHAMAK BARSON TAK,
KARKE JO UNKA DEEDAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

HUME KYA ILM KYA HAI TAREEKA-E-MAHFIL YAHAAN,
DEEWAANE HAIN, DEEWAANE-E-YAAR, CHALE AAYE HAIN.

EK TO MAIN AUR UNKE BULANE KA ASAR,
LUTNE KO SARE BAAZAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

MUSHKIL HAI UNSE HAAL-E-DIL KAHNA, SOCHA HAI,
WO SABSE KARTE INKAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

AB TO BATON MEIN LOG MAZA LETE HAIN,
KAHTE HAIN ‘DEKHO YAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN’.

ZAROORI THA IS RAASTE PE THAHAR JAANA MUJHKO,
AUR HUM ‘TANHA’ TEZ RAFTAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

JAHAN RAHTI THI MERE YAAR KI PAHCHAN SABHI,
CHHOD KE WO GHAR-BAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

ABHI IS KHAAK KO WAADON NE BAANDH RAKHA HAI,
KAI TOOFAAN KARKE PAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

TUM APNE HAAL PAR KYUN HO HAIRAAN ITNE?
PARWAANE TO JALTE YAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

UNKO BHI AATA NAHI KARAR KUCHH BINA MERE,
BECHAINIYON MEIN WO BHI HAR BAAR CHALE AAYE HAIN.

-----TANHA(SAURABH)


Bohot bohot bohot Khoob Saurabh Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: October 06, 2008, 07:41:44 AM »
bohat bohat shukriya honeyrose ji, abdbundeli ji, sajid ji, Celmira ji aap sab ka.
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«Reply #14 on: October 06, 2008, 07:48:03 AM »
abd ji.....

"Saath chale ho mere kuchh pal to,iska gumaan zaroor hoga,
 raah par zindgi ki tumhaari, mere bhi kadam ka nishaan zaroor hoga." -Tanha

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