Hum Yuh Hasse Ke Aankhon Se Aansu Nikal Gaye.....

by khwaish on July 13, 2008, 04:40:59 PM
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Roshan Karne Chale The Hum Ek Chirag,
Par Haath Jal Gaye,
Hum Yuh Hasse Ke Aankhon Se Aansu Nikal Gaye...

Dikhte Hai Sabse Peeche Yahan, Aaj Woh Log,
Jo Auro Ki Khushi Ke Liye Patharo Ki Raahon Se Bhi Guzar Gaye...

Woh Din Jo Zindagi Mein Guzre Tere Bin,
Kuch Ashk Ban Gaye To Kuch Ghazal Bankar Kalam Par Utar Gaye...

Jab Tera Saath Tha,To Kabhi Ladkadaye Na The Yeh Kadam,
Par Ab Jab Girte Hai to Sukoon Hai Iss Dil Ko,
Ab Hum Tanha Reh kar Bhi Khud Sambhal gaye...

Hai Ishq Jiska Naam, Woh Ek Aisi Aag hai,
Jo Bhi Bhujane Aaye, Woh Khud Bhi Jal Gaye...

Aayegi Kal Bahaar, Issi Ek Aas Mein,
Hum Toote Hue Ghirondo Se Bhi Behal Gaye...

Zindagi Ke Iss Safar Ki Hai Bas Itni Si Dastaan "KHWAISH"
Raaste To Wahi Hai, Sirf Musafir Badal Gaye...
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«Reply #1 on: July 14, 2008, 02:42:08 AM »


Woh Din Jo Zindagi Mein Guzre Tere Bin,
Kuch Ashk Ban Gaye To Kuch Ghazal Bankar Kalam Par Utar Gaye...

Jab Tera Saath Tha,To Kabhi Ladkadaye Na The Yeh Kadam,
Par Ab Jab Girte Hai to Sukoon Hai Iss Dil Ko,
Ab Hum Tanha Reh kar Bhi Khud Sambhal gaye...

Zindagi Ke Iss Safar Ki Hai Bas Itni Si Dastaan "KHWAISH"
Raaste To Wahi Hai, Sirf Musafir Badal Gaye...


Loved these lines.
really marvellous.
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«Reply #2 on: July 14, 2008, 04:28:36 AM »
Roshan Karne Chale The Hum Ek Chirag,
Par Haath Jal Gaye,
Hum Yuh Hasse Ke Aankhon Se Aansu Nikal Gaye...

Dikhte Hai Sabse Peeche Yahan, Aaj Woh Log,
Jo Auro Ki Khushi Ke Liye Patharo Ki Raahon Se Bhi Guzar Gaye...

Woh Din Jo Zindagi Mein Guzre Tere Bin,
Kuch Ashk Ban Gaye To Kuch Ghazal Bankar Kalam Par Utar Gaye...

Jab Tera Saath Tha,To Kabhi Ladkadaye Na The Yeh Kadam,
Par Ab Jab Girte Hai to Sukoon Hai Iss Dil Ko,
Ab Hum Tanha Reh kar Bhi Khud Sambhal gaye...

Hai Ishq Jiska Naam, Woh Ek Aisi Aag hai,
Jo Bhi Bhujane Aaye, Woh Khud Bhi Jal Gaye...

Aayegi Kal Bahaar, Issi Ek Aas Mein,
Hum Toote Hue Ghirondo Se Bhi Behal Gaye...

Zindagi Ke Iss Safar Ki Hai Bas Itni Si Dastaan "KHWAISH"
Raaste To Wahi Hai, Sirf Musafir Badal Gaye...



khwaish jee,

aapki kalam nit nayapan lekar aati he.usi kadi mein aapne ek aur panna jod diya...mubaarak ho.saralta se kehna gehri baaton ko aapse seekhne ko milta he...bahut khoob!

Prateek
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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2008, 05:22:18 AM »
bohut hi achi rachna hai khwaish ji
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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2008, 12:11:02 PM »
Zindagi Ke Iss Safar Ki Hai Bas Itni Si Dastaan "KHWAISH"
Raaste To Wahi Hai, Sirf Musafir Badal Gaye...

Kwaish Ji..aakhari Ye Maktea Se Pataa chalta Hai Muje Ki Puri Nazam Badhiya hogi.Bahot Khoob
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2008, 02:29:54 PM »
Musafiron ka badalna bas roz marra ki baat ho gayi hia,
main hairan hoon ke na jaane meri manzilein kyon kho gayi...
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«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2008, 06:48:53 AM »
Loved these lines.
really marvellous.


thankyou so much angel for appreciating!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2008, 06:51:41 AM »

khwaish jee,

aapki kalam nit nayapan lekar aati he.usi kadi mein aapne ek aur panna jod diya...mubaarak ho.saralta se kehna gehri baaton ko aapse seekhne ko milta he...bahut khoob!

Prateek

bahut bahut shukriya prateekji..aapke replies ne hamesha utsaa diya hai ki kuch aur bhi likhne ki hum koshish kare..bahut bahut shukriya aapka
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«Reply #8 on: July 17, 2008, 06:52:54 AM »
Zindagi Ke Iss Safar Ki Hai Bas Itni Si Dastaan "KHWAISH"
Raaste To Wahi Hai, Sirf Musafir Badal Gaye...

Kwaish Ji..aakhari Ye Maktea Se Pataa chalta Hai Muje Ki Puri Nazam Badhiya hogi.Bahot Khoob

Bahut Bahut shukriya muhammed saab!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 17, 2008, 06:53:52 AM »
bohut hi achi rachna hai khwaish ji

thankyou so much bhawnaji...
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«Reply #10 on: July 17, 2008, 06:56:31 AM »
Musafiron ka badalna bas roz marra ki baat ho gayi hia,
main hairan hoon ke na jaane meri manzilein kyon kho gayi...

do line mein bahut achi baat kahi hai aapne angel..
bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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