Humen kya dukh hai!!!

by Talat on September 20, 2004, 02:19:49 PM
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #45 on: October 10, 2004, 11:16:07 PM »
Wah! Sabhi Ne Kya Khoob Likha hai!! Very Nice!


Nadi Kinaare Jo Nagmaasara Malang Hue!
Hubaab Mauj Mein aa-aa ke Jal tarang Hue!
Ataa kiya Tere Maathe ne Jinko Id ka chaand,
Nisaar Un pe Sitaaron ke Raag Rang hue!



(NM)

{Nagmaasara : Sweet Singer ; Hubaab : Bulbula}
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #46 on: October 11, 2004, 05:26:53 AM »
nice words arun bhai...........bahot acchi line aap ne likhi .........
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #47 on: October 11, 2004, 05:51:44 AM »
Shukriya waheed Bhai!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #48 on: October 11, 2004, 06:31:08 AM »
udte udte aas ka panchi door ufaq mein doob gaya
rote rote beth gai awaz kisi sodai ki................
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #49 on: October 11, 2004, 06:46:33 AM »
Nice waheed bhai!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #50 on: October 11, 2004, 04:32:44 PM »
thanx arun bhai..........
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Talat
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«Reply #51 on: October 18, 2004, 02:42:14 PM »
Nice all...

dekh lo Khwaab magar Khwaab ka charcha na karo
log jal jaayenge sooraj ki tamanna na karo
waqt ka kya hai kisi pal bhi badal sakta hai
ho sake tum se to tum mujh pe bharosa na karo!!  (NM)
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immi
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«Reply #52 on: October 18, 2004, 03:33:24 PM »
Bahot achchey, All of you.
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #53 on: October 18, 2004, 08:04:23 PM »
Excellent talat ji!! Bahut Achchha Likha hai!!Wah!
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Talat
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«Reply #54 on: October 19, 2004, 03:11:45 AM »
Shukriya Arunji...

Rubroo uske gaya is qadar muddat ke baad
Iska kya gham usne adna si inayat bhi na ki
Mujh ko to sirf is ka shikwa hai ki usne 'Josh'
Itne din tak door rehne ki shikayat bhi na ki!!!    (NM)
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #55 on: October 19, 2004, 01:58:54 PM »
Waaaaah!!! waah! Bahut Khoob!! Talat ji!!
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Talat
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«Reply #56 on: October 19, 2004, 02:10:55 PM »
Shukriya!!! Arunji.....
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #57 on: October 19, 2004, 05:05:20 PM »
wah!!!!!!!!!  excellent Talat...................

yeh bhi mumkin hai k main nay usko pehchana na ho
ab ussay dekhay huway kitnay zamanay ho gaye.......
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #58 on: October 19, 2004, 06:59:36 PM »
Wah waheed Bhai!Nice!!
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Talat
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«Reply #59 on: October 20, 2004, 02:59:03 AM »
Wah!       Thanks Waheed...

Bhool gaye hain wo mujhe ek choti si muddat ke baad
wo jo kehte the ki un ki aankh main rehte hain hum!!
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