Humen kya dukh hai!!!

by Talat on September 20, 2004, 02:19:49 PM
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #60 on: October 20, 2004, 05:30:00 AM »
Beautiful !!! Talat ji! Waah!
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Talat
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«Reply #61 on: October 20, 2004, 09:26:41 AM »
Shukriya Arunji!!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #62 on: October 21, 2004, 10:25:38 PM »
wah!!!! Nice Talat!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #63 on: October 23, 2004, 03:05:30 AM »
thanks Pooja...
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #64 on: October 24, 2004, 07:51:59 AM »
thanx talat...............nice one talat.........bahot acchi line aap ne likhi...
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nishita
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«Reply #65 on: October 24, 2004, 08:26:53 AM »
nice all
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Talat
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«Reply #66 on: October 24, 2004, 01:22:22 PM »
Thanks Waheed n Nishi..

Tujh ko dil ka haal suna kar
Dil ki baatain lab par la kar hum kitna pachtaaye
Kaash gul-e-ummeed na khilta
Kaash ki tu humko na milta
Kaash ki dil chupchaap pighalta
Tujh se itna pyar barha kar hum kitna pachtaaye
Shayad ab hum jee na paayen
Bahr-e-gham main gum ho jaayen
Shayad ab na laut ke aayen
Tujh sang din do char bita kar hum kitna pachataye (NM)
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #67 on: October 24, 2004, 06:12:58 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Wah!       Thanks Waheed...

Bhool gaye hain wo mujhe ek choti si muddat ke baad
wo jo kehte the ki un ki aankh main rehte hain hum!!


Wah! Nicely Written! Talat ji!

Jis baati Ke Dum Se Jal rahe hon Diye,
Use is tarah Bhula sakta hai Kaun!

Pal, Ghante, Maheene, Baras hon Ya ke  kai Muddatein beetein,
Teri Woh Shokh chulbuli Pyaari Baatein Dil se Hila sakta hai Kaun!

Apna Dil to patthar Tha, Mom Banaya Tune,
Tere siway warnaa Isko Pighlaa Saktaa hai Kaun!

Woh Jo Bhool Gaye hain Khud hi ko,
Unko tere siwa ab yaad aa sakta hai Kaun!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #68 on: October 24, 2004, 08:04:35 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Thanks Waheed n Nishi..

Tujh ko dil ka haal suna kar
Dil ki baatain lab par la kar hum kitna pachtaaye
Kaash gul-e-ummeed na khilta
Kaash ki tu humko na milta
Kaash ki dil chupchaap pighalta
Tujh se itna pyar barha kar hum kitna pachtaaye
Shayad ab hum jee na paayen
Bahr-e-gham main gum ho jaayen
Shayad ab na laut ke aayen
Tujh sang din do char bita kar hum kitna pachataye (NM)


Superb! Talat ji!

Hamen Gar apna Haal-e-dil na sunaate,
To Phir woh Afsaane Kahan Jaate!

Tumse jo Na Mile hote to socho,
Yeh Deewaane kahan Jaate!

Na hoti Mohabbat ki Shama Roshan,
To Phir yeh Parwaane Kahan Jaate!

Tumhaari Ummeedon pe hi to hai Dhadhak raha yeh Dil,
Is Bujhe hue dil ko hum Dhadhkane kahan Jaate!

Hum to Jaan De ke Bhi Nibha dete Rasm-e-Ulfat,
Tumhe hi Aitbaar Nahin Hum Par to yeh Mastaane kahan jaate!
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Talat
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«Reply #69 on: October 25, 2004, 03:08:48 AM »
Quote from: "sharmaarunkumar"


Jis baati Ke Dum Se Jal rahe hon Diye,
Use is tarah Bhula sakta hai Kaun!

Pal, Ghante, Maheene, Baras hon Ya ke  kai Muddatein beetein,
Teri Woh Shokh chulbuli Pyaari Baatein Dil se Hila sakta hai Kaun!

Apna Dil to patthar Tha, Mom Banaya Tune,
Tere siway warnaa Isko Pighlaa Saktaa hai Kaun!

Woh Jo Bhool Gaye hain Khud hi ko,
Unko tere siwa ab yaad aa sakta hai Kaun!



Shukriya!!!! Arunji....

jo yaad karte hain wo mujhe istarah
jinke dil main nahi hai koi mere siwa
phir kyun istarah mujhe tadpaate hain
phir kyun nahin mere saamne aate hain!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #70 on: October 25, 2004, 03:15:42 AM »
Quote from: "sharmaarunkumar"
Hamen Gar apna Haal-e-dil na sunaate,
To Phir woh Afsaane Kahan Jaate!

Tumse jo Na Mile hote to socho,
Yeh Deewaane kahan Jaate!

Na hoti Mohabbat ki Shama Roshan,
To Phir yeh Parwaane Kahan Jaate!

Tumhaari Ummeedon pe hi to hai Dhadhak raha yeh Dil,
Is Bujhe hue dil ko hum Dhadhkane kahan Jaate!

Hum to Jaan De ke Bhi Nibha dete Rasm-e-Ulfat,
Tumhe hi Aitbaar Nahin Hum Par to yeh Mastaane kahan jaate![/b]


tum aitebaar ki baat karte ho
humne to zindagi tere naam likhi
basr ho jaayegi yahi sochte sochte
kabhi tune mijhse mohabbat to ki!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #71 on: October 27, 2004, 03:56:32 PM »
wah!!!!  Arun Bhai........Talat............

Hansti hoi ankhoon mein bhee gum paltay hain
kaun magar jhankay itni gahrayeeyon mein.........
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Pooja
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«Reply #72 on: October 27, 2004, 05:23:14 PM »
wowoowoowow!!!!!wowowowow!!!wowowoowowow!!!
Kaya baat hai!!! Kaya baat hai!!! bahoot khoob TALAT!!!!
Bahoot shandaar AKS JI!!! App dono ne kamal ka likha hai!!!

Veri Nice Waheed_rose ji!!!!
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immi
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«Reply #73 on: October 27, 2004, 05:28:36 PM »
bahot khub kaha Talatji, aur aap sabne bhi.
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #74 on: October 27, 2004, 06:09:35 PM »
Hauslaa Afzaai ka Shukriya!!! Waheed Bhai...Pooja ji  & Immi ji!!!!

Nice written Waheed Bhai!
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