#Humhe Dil Main Basakar#

by honeyrose on April 20, 2008, 10:46:53 AM
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Humhe Dil Main Basakar Kyun Tum Chale Gaye
Yuhi Pyaar Main Tarsa Kar Tum Chale Gaye

Ek Aakhri Umeed Ke Sahare Jee Rahe The
Joh Zakhmo Koh Dil Se Laga Kar Tum Chale Gaye

Tumare Sar-e-rah Pe Rakhe Hai Kadam Tum Chale Gaye
Raaho Main Ho Phool Tumare Tum Chale Gaye

Aapni Mohabatt Koh Ruswa Kar Tum Chale Gaye
Iss Dil Main Khile Phoolon Main Tum Quaar Chor Kar Chale Gaye
(MINE)

 
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2008, 11:39:42 AM »
Bohot khoob honeyrose.... Applause
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honeyrose
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2008, 11:46:03 AM »
Shukriya sayyid..Usual Smile
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Sonia01
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«Reply #3 on: April 20, 2008, 12:06:48 PM »
accha likha hai aapne
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punam
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«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2008, 12:09:50 PM »
Nice one di...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2008, 12:18:04 PM »
Thanks punam..Usual Smile
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Sonia01
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2008, 12:39:37 PM »
Thanks punam..Usual Smile

maine b a ccha kaha pada nahi kya honeyrose? why no thanks to me?
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honeyrose
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2008, 12:41:30 PM »
maine b a ccha kaha pada nahi kya honeyrose? why no thanks to me?
..

But earlier you seem to correct the lines anyways thanks sonia..
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Sonia01
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2008, 12:55:33 PM »
..

But earlier you seem to correct the lines anyways thanks sonia..

arre earlier postings main mujhe laga k galat hai.
naraz na hona honeyrose. hum to padne ka shauk rakte hai
aur urdu to zero hai apna. hum kya kisii ka likha pe
correct karenge.

sorry if u got hurt
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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2008, 01:02:08 PM »
Hai Sonia,.
No One Is Perfect My Dear,.
Jo Galti Na Ker Wio Insaan Nahi,.
Humse Bhi Hojaati Hain Galatiyaan,.
Bas Hume samajhna Hai Ke Inhone Kis Prakaar Lafzon Ko Jorda hai,.

Waise Honey sis,.
Nice One,.
Hume Pasand Aaayi,. Applause
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«Reply #10 on: April 20, 2008, 01:08:31 PM »
Bujhayaa Kyun Dil Mein Diye Jalaa Kar,.
Rulaaya Kyun El Pal Ke Liye Hasaa Kar,.

Hum To Bhatak Rahe The, Duniya Ki Bheed Mein "Azeem".
Thukraaya Kyun Hume Apne Dil Mein Basaa Kar,.

_____________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #11 on: April 20, 2008, 01:10:35 PM »
Bohat hi khoob likha hai Azeem bro.. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: April 20, 2008, 01:22:59 PM »
Bujhayaa Kyun Dil Mein Diye Jalaa Kar,.
Rulaaya Kyun El Pal Ke Liye Hasaa Kar,.

Hum To Bhatak Rahe The, Duniya Ki Bheed Mein "Azeem".
Thukraaya Kyun Hume Apne Dil Mein Basaa Kar,.

_____________________________-Jaanasheen-


Hame apna banakar tukraya kaun?
dil main basakar mitaya kaun?
yu hi jee rahe the hum
hamare dil main pyar ka diya lagaya kaun?
lagakar aag ab pooch rahe ho diya bhujaya kaun

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«Reply #13 on: April 20, 2008, 01:25:07 PM »
Hame apna banakar tukraya kaun?
dil main basakar mitaya kaun?
yu hi jee rahe the hum
hamare dil main pyar ka diya lagaya kaun?
lagakar aag ab pooch rahe ho diya bhujaya kaun



Nice Reply Sonia.. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: April 20, 2008, 03:07:27 PM »
Shukriya Honey Sis,.
and Nice One Sonia,. Clapping Smiley
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